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for Flaming in the Dorms

by pesterme2

person tdorian
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like your plot and characters.I'm waiting ofr the next chapter !
person Gwengwel
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How come i didn't see the first chappy?! I'm sooo sorry!!! I'm not a good girl! :(

Hooo, a flaming gay? cross-dressing? a nice and clueless jock? Me like this!!! yep!
This universe's really different compared to Aurora. It's prove that you're a good writer, since you can write in different style.
Scott not going to appreciate to be deceived. It seems to be a very good guy.
You put a warning of N/C....Scott's not going to do that?
Damien, you play with fire! You little naughty guy!!! Payback's a bitch!

Do you have a fetish of the letter D?? Devin, Damien...?! loll
Gwen
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really starting to love your work. Well, I’ve liked it from the beginning, starting with the one story, but I’m really happy you’re putting more up! I like your writing, it’s easy to comprehend, as in well written and such. And interesting!! (^w^) I really like this idea, I’m glad you went with it. It can be fun to just run with an idea. Plus sometimes, you just got to get something out of your head, even if you don’t end up putting it up xD

Damien. I have always liked that name. He is a little horndog, all hot and hard for his roommate! Ohhhh. I love his personality, and how he is all; I don’t care if they don’t accept me, I am who I am, thing he’s got going on. His buddy James seems hot, and Scott too. Hot guys all around, eh?

I love Damien’s idea to cross-dress and go to the dance! I am super excited to see what goes on at the dance between him and Scott, and how Scott reacts, if he finds out that it’s Damien. I am very very interested in reading more about this likely pair. So please, keep it coming!
person Kris
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this very attention grabbing am hoping for more!
person Bexy31
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This sounds really cool ^_^ Damien's certainly entertaining, ha ha ^_^ Looking forwards to seeing what happens next :D
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome story! I can't wait to find out what happens during the dance! Great story!
person lindsey
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My favorite stories are definetly somewhere along the lines of all boy school love. XD
This is right up my alley. Your characters are so easy to like!
I can't wait to see what happens at the dance!