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for Flaming in the Dorms

by pesterme2

schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, I feel so bad for poor Damien. It must really suck to get beat up on a daily basis! Why is it always Damien, b/c he just provokes those guys? Why doesn't James get beat up? Anyway, great chapter; I feel so bad, Damien and Scott not talking! They're both sulking! It's nice that Damien feels he wants to change his ways b/c of Scott pointing out his slutty character. But, on the other hand, personally, ok, maybe b/c he's still in high school, he shouldn't be doing all that. I don't know. But in college, away from home, jeez, I was just like him. I never felt like a slut! XD And I'm a girl; always the double standard, right? Except for poor Damien. Hopefully in the next chapter he and Scott will "kiss and make up".
person ..
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far!!!!
person Anon
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it! A lot! Keep posting please!
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
rbgjherbgrej yay! Update! I usually re-read the previous chapter before reading the update, to refresh my memory. And I’m all major awwww over the drama at the end. And I totally just now got what “Haven’t you ever heard of Harry Palm and his five sisters? Jeez!” meant xD

Aww poor Damien getting his ass kicked! Stupid David, and stupid Gregg too! Ugh, Dae seems to draw the jerks like flies. It’s sad that him and Scott aren’t on speaking terms, but I can see why. James is such an awesome friend! I adore him! And homygosh, I’m so excited that Dae is going to be dressing up as his girlfriend! More cross-dressing, and ohh, possible a run in with a certain Adonis? Eeek, super curious/excited, and eager for more!
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor kid. I am really enjoying this story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
person Bexy31
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Damien, getting harrassed by everyone :( He needs Scott! I hope something bad hapens to Gregg >.> And David, ha ha. Looking forwards to seeing what happens on the date! :D Hopefully Damien's slightly healed, or can at least use make-up to cover it :) Please keep up the great work! ^_^
person Vic
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im just wondering, does Scott, in some small way, realise that Darlene is actually Damien and thats why he is so taken with her?? Poor poor Damien, i really feel for him. He is upset over Scott and still getting grief at school bless him, hopefully things will get better soon. Great chapter, update soon xxx
person Gwengwel
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can understand Scott, nobody say " hey, I'm going to be gay". It's not easy, even today, to not be the same as the majority, with the familly and othet who are going to judge.
David's really an asshole....hate him, can I give him to my neighbor's dog (he's a really nasty dog)??
And Gregg?!?! I have a lot of thing that I want to do to him but I can't write that, I will be censored...^(*$$@%!@*#.....
I feel that Saturday will not happen without problems...
Gwen
p.s. When it's going to be the chappy with the rape...can you put a warning on the top of the chappy. I can't read about rape, I personnaly know what it's do to a person. please and thank!
person tdorian
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Scott is gay and virgin !!! *grin*oh oh...that's so good.I hope he'll have another encounter with Darlene soon.great chapter !
person Bexy31
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, no, poor Scott and Damien!! T-T That's so sad!! It made my heart hurt :( But yay, Scott likes Damien! ^_^ And now Darlene, but Darlene IS Damien, so whoo! But then it musta sucked so bad to find him with James :( Ack, such an angsty chapter! T-T Really really good though! ^_^ I want to know what happens next already! Please keep up the great work! :D