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The end of this chapter was so awesome! I don't feel cliffhanged in the slightest bit, cause I'm so super excited to see what is going to happen next between them!! Did Scott hear all of what he said? Does he now know that Dae is 'Darlene'? *flails in excited anticipation* Love it!

Oh man oh man! I meant to review this the last time I was here! You were only on chapter two then. I can't believe I forgot! I really like this story! I read this and "Forced Submission" in the same day. I really enjoy your writing style and can't wait to see more of this story in particular. Poor Damien really got himself in a pickle and I really want to know how he's gonna get out of it. I think Scott's a real sweet guy. He reminds me of a great big dog. Like a golden retriever. What a sweet guy. James is pretty cool too. He's a little whiney but I think it's cute. I'd like to see him get some love by the end of all this too. I'd like to see Gregg get kicked off the soccer team. I don't want anything TOO harsh to happen to him, but I'd like to see him get some sort of comeuppance. That'd be nice I think. Of course I want to see Scott and Damien together, but what I want mostly is just for them to open the hell up and Talk to each other! If they just had a little more communication between them there wouldn't even be a problem in the first place!

I also really liked James and Damien's little sex scene. I hardly knew little James had it in him! I certainly knew Damien did. I am however, very dirty minded. If Anything happens I'm Convinced it's going to end up in sex. When David and his little bastard buddies grabbed Damien and pulled him across the table my first thought was: "Wait...There are way too many people there for them to all just have him now! Oh wait...Breakfast's ending. It's okay after all!" Hahah. It's natural instinct I suppose.

Jessica was pretty awesome too. Is that name useage James decided on going to bite Dae in the ass like he thinks it's going to? Like he hasn't already gotten himself into enough trouble. Oh well, I'm sure his parents wouldn't care all that much anyway. As long as he's finally graduating I'm sure they'd let him get away with damn near anything. Very cool though. I really enjoy this story and I'm going to immediately bookmark the page so I don't lose it again somehow. I actually found it again digging through my history and couldn't stop myself from reading the updates. I really should be getting ready for the day but this somehow seemed more important.

I know you said to send you an e-mail if we wanted updates so I'll do that too. Thanks a load! Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter!

-Renny

good good XD i like ur writing pls continue to update ;)

Haha, you're very welcome. I never abandon amazing stories so you don't need to worry about me leaving you!

Well it was obvious that was going to happen, nothing seems to go right for poor Damien. I liked that Scott got a little defensive wen 'Darlene' badmouthed Damien even tho they are still fighting, its kind of sweet. great chapter as always, update soon xxxx

Aww, that's so cute, they had a mini-date sort of thing ^_^ (even if Scott didn't actually know it was Damien, ha ha). I'm glad Damien got to find out more about Scott :) But I feel sorry for his 'cause he got all sad when he thought Scott didn't like him as much as he thought :( (If that makes sense...).
Damien's interaction with James's sister was great :P Poor James, ha ha.
Can't wait to see what happens next ^_^ Please keep up the great work! :D

OMG, I was SOOOO happy to see you updated sooo quickly! Thank you! I loved their little "date"! Damien was so right; he was being pretty rude to poor Scott. And yes, to your comment about my comment on the slut thing; I had forgotten that Scott was brought up by is old fashioned grandmother, so yeah, that would probably be the first thing he thought of. I can't wait to see how you have them making up! And getting together; I don't think it'll be easy with Scott's "denial" about his feelings for Damien. And your comment at the end of the last chapter: yeah, Damien's pretty nasty to James too, always calling im a little twink!

I have a weird feeling about Gregg. Is he the one that's going to make Scott find out about D's little secret, maybe? I mean, he seems to be stalking Damien... I dunno.

I feel so bad for those two. I feel bad for Scott because even though he THINKS he likes Darlene, he's miserable because she's turned him down. And yet I also feel terrible for Damien, because the poor thing feels so horrible about what he's done to Scott, Mr. Boy-of-his-dreams.

Maybe the guilt is going to make Damien crack and finally tell Scott? Maybe Scott will be moping and miserable and upset and then Damien walks in to the dorm room and sees, and the guilt just tears him apart and he just tells Scott that Darlene doesn't exist. Hmmm.... SO MANY POSSIBILITIES!

Homygosh, go me! Yeah Surreal is good at that. Scott is such an awesome guy, and his life is kind of sad D: The relationship with his parents, and him only having his grandma, and worrying about the whole him-maybe-being-gay thing. I just wanna huggle him. Gregg is the perverted asshole, and David is the I’m-a-tough-mean-jock-bully asshole. And of course, Charles; asshole, don‘t need to put him in either category, he just sucks. Yeah they really can, lameness.

Aww, I don’t have any brothers. Not sure if I’d want one, but I’ve always been curious. Gregg is totally creepy, and he has ideas about what Damien has been doing, so uh-oh, that makes him kind of dangerous. Yeah, that is kind of mean of Dae to refer to James like that. Cause James is a totally sweetie to him, and even if they are/were just having sex, they were still friends and all.

Ohhh, the cross-dressing scene, and the date with Scott; yay/delicious! James’ sister is a bit funky, and the story about James pissing on the dog, awesome! I can totally see some kid doing that. And the idea that ‘Scott knows something's up but he's not ready to face it just yet’ is exciting to me for some reason. This story is soooo good. Addictive. In a good way ;D

First I want to say sorry but before I read this chappy and Aurora chappy I drank two glass of scotch, they are a possibility that my humour was bad tonight! loll! :)

I'm glad that you're not going to this direction (rape), it's because on your resume they are a N/C warning, just a attempt it's ok (if you can say that a attempt of rape is ok lol).

My dog's neighbor say that David didn't taste good, he want a refund.

Damien's just being wicked about the *yaoi* incident. Jessica's going to be a new adict of yaoi now.
Scott on mode *if your boyfriend touch you, i will beat him*, he's lovely!!
I knew that the trip where not going to go well, but to meet the two guy....! bad luck (or an evil author? :P)
Poor Scott, you didn't have a good childhood, I want to cuddle you to make everything better.
I think that Damien do the good thing in the end to not give Scott to much hope.

I'm not sure if I already say how much I like this new story? No? I like very much Damien, Scott and James. And yes I like Gregg.....because his so much fun to hate lolll!!

Gwen