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for Flaming in the Dorms

by pesterme2

person Gwengwel
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You put a evil cliffy here!!! Why?!
What Scott heard?
What going to happen?
Want to know?

I really really hate Gregg!!!
Can I make it suffer?!
I already have lot of practise for make people suffer (my poor little sister, when we were young I was really not a good big sister lolll) **insert evil laugh**
I want to cut his balls, marinate them in vinegar and make him eat it?
Can I???
Pleaaaaaase!!!

You better make James found love before the end of your story, I love him so much! He's so sweet!!!

Gwen
person surrealtraversity
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you are absolutely KILLING me, here!!! GAH!!!!
What a crappy way to find out.
But with the apparently-mammoth-hicky on poor D's neck, and if D acts terrified enough, maybe some kind of protective instincts will kick in and Scott won't kill the poor guy.
Oh my. I don't see this ending without a fight. And probably tears.
Still not telling about Boxy. =D
Gimme a HAPPY chapter that makes me squeal in delight, and then we'll talk about Boxy.
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is this fight gonna lead to sex or more not talking? Don't mind me if it's not sex. I really think that everything's sex. I often lend people movies and books and say "There's a really good sex scene in that" ...when it turns out there's no sex scene in it at all. But anyway! I liked this chapter. Gregg is one screwed up guy. (I find myself saying that a lot. That's my boss's name) If he wants it so bad why doesn't he just drug Damien? ...Or maybe it's the struggle he likes. Hm... James is most definately Dae's bad luck charm. All these terrible things crop up when he's involved. I really Scott's at least kind of understanding about this. I really liked the detail that he's dripping wet by the way. I really like Damien and Scott. Hope they really can resolve some of this stuff soon. OH! And thanks for the e-mail about the update! I really appreciate it! Can't wait for more!

-Renny
person khayman
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GHAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! nooooooo!
how could u stop there?!?
now I'll end up bitting my nails down to its roots trying to figure out what's gonna happen next!
bad author, bad, bad author for keeping your fans on their toes like that! ;P
please update soon, real soon, pretty please! lol

now seriously, I love this story. I can't wait to see that Gregg bastard getting his ass kicked, and Scott and Dae finally getting the loving they deserve.
person livelifelove
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so pissed at that ending, please update! I love your characters!
person Vic
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Ok il start from the beginning, Scott called Damien 'his Dae' yay, i like it. Bless Damien for being so honest with Scott telling him how he feels (well almost). And grrrrr to Grandmother Winthrop, if it wasnt for her Scott would of pounced on 'His Dae' ages ago!!! OMG now Scott knows and you finished teh chapter, how could you!!!! Cant wait to see what happens next, update soon xxxxxxxxx
person Lisa
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, just when Dae and Scott made up! Jeez, now Scott's furious and how is poor Damien gonna talk himself out of this one?????? James was right, tho; Dae should have told Scott that Greg was harassing him all the time, oh, but then Scott would find out about the cross dressing; Damien's fucked! I am at the edge of my seat, pls. hurry up and update; I CAN'T WAIT to read what happens next!!!!
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
-stares-
Poor Damien!
And the saying
'De Nile (Denial) is not only a river in Egypt'
Rings SO true for our Hunky Scott.
GOD DAMNIT SCOTT YOU'RE GAY!
LEARN TO LIVE WITH IT!
person Bexy31
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, Scott found out!? :O I mean, I was waiting for it, but still, it's gasp-worthy, ha ha. I did wonder if he'd catch any of their conversation... Ooo, what must he be thinking!? Poor him and Damien... Can't wait for the next chapter! :D Please keep up the great work!! ^_^
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God i love love love love this story! I really hope that Scott doesn't over react too much, but at the same time...who doesn't love the drama. Please update soon!!!
CJ