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Just found your story and am really mad now, because I didn't realize, until I got to the end, that I was at the end. I hope you update quickly. I love the characters and I also love virgin sex, so can't wait for that. And, a little Greg beat down in the future wouldn't be bad either. Oh, and I feel terribly for poor James. It would be nice if he could meet someone and not have to have them dress up like a girl. So, yeah, great story so far...I know I suck at reviews.

You made my Saturday!!!! Actually, you made my Friday night, but by the time I saw your update it was like 12:30 AM and I couldn't keep my eyes open to read it. I was so looking forward to reading it today! I'm glad Scott was there to help Damien, and he called him "his Dae" in front of EVERYONE!!! Yayyyy! He does have a good idea tho, why bother telling his grandmother, why should she ever know (in the short term anyway). I just hope Damien isn't hurt too, too bad. I hope that fucker Charles gets what's coming to him!!! Awesome chapter; I was on the edge of my seat!!!

Gah! I'm loving this story so much. The way you describe the characters and their personalities makes it the great story it is.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Loved the chapter. I'm glad Scott isn't angry anymore with Damien and is showing some progress in his thinking. Can't wait for the next update. Keep up the good work.

How could i possibly hate you when u write stuff like this, you rock!!
Omg i cried in the first part of this chapter, poor poor Dae!!
Yay!! Scott said 'my Dae' in public and admitted to himself that he was in love with Dae. Lets hope he can admit it to Dae ( in the next chapter??)
Ok so wen u say Scott's assumptions about Grandmother Winthrop im assuming that she wouldnt have as much of a problem with this as Scott seems to think. Im thinking if she loves Scott as much as he says then she would just want to see him happy, right?
'Charles is gonna get it!!!' *singsong voice*
Whew that it for now. Roll on the next chapter, update really really soon ( this and A/C)
Vic xx

Thanks for this new chappy!!!
You really enjoy torture poor little Damien. Life's not easy for him in the last couple of chappy. Now you make a new bully on him. Charles....grrrrr!!!! For punish him, I want to tell to every girl in town that he have a little cock, enjoy uro and like to submit his ball to electro torture!! Can I???

Scott, wow, you take your time to understand your feeling and your reaction to the truth about Darlene was pretty heavy. I'm not sure that don't say the truth to you granny's really a good idea, look what a lie do to your friendship with Damien. Now you have to be gentle and contrite with him.

I think that a side-story with James's a good idea, but you better make Scott/Damien make an apparence. I really like James, he's someone that in the real life I want to be his friend.


You have three big brother?!?!....hum.... that explain how you can make a lot of bully in your story...it's your experience!!! lolll Poor you, hope that now they are like me......really sorry for what they do when they where young!!!

Gwen

ok you kinda made me cry with this one! poor Dae, the boy is really outta luck recently =(
would you mind terribly if I spanked Scott a little bit? just to get some sense into the boy, see if he finally makes the right decision?! I don't think Damien will be too happy if they have to lie to their families about their relationship!
oh and tell Dae if he needs help I don't mind kicking Gregg's ass for him! I might be small but I can manage! =3

Hey, it's not in the story, but right before the reviews, you've got some coding left over. It usually happens when you paste something from word into fictionpress. I should know. I have to delete it every time (just delete it in fictionpress and save again, and it will be gone. Always save before you click the html button, too)

It's a small price to pay for having it do all the coding for you.

Now for my review....

DAMN IT! You made me CRY on this one! Poor Dae.... he doesn't deserve that. Damn it. PLEASE tell me this wakes Scott up a bit....

As of right now, You may know NOTHING about Boxy. -hugs Boxy possessively-

I like this story, but Scott must be utterly clueless not to make the connection. For one thing, 'Darlene' was talking to him just like another guy would in the park! I know he's choosing not to look at any of this because he's firmly in the closet, but it was pretty funny. :P Anyway I like Damien problems and all, he seems basically like a good kid in spite of the loud mouth and the sometimes stupid stuff he does. And Scott is nice, even if somewhat clueless >> Hope everything works out for them and that Scott's not too mad abotu the whole cross-dressking thing. -DL

scott should totally kiss damien (a really hot and aggressive kiss), get aroused at how disheveled damien looks, scream, and storm out of the room. XD

(as a kid i think i grew up reading bodice ripper paperbacks). hot damn i can't wait to see what happens next! Awesome story!