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for Flaming in the Dorms

by pesterme2

schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Cute scene between Damien and Scott, and I love Damien's mom's personality.

Looking forward to the next chapter =)
person Rosei
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
P,

Love momma!!!! Momma's hot!!! HA!

Thanks!
R
person surrealtraversity
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOW DARE YOU KEEP THAT DELICIOUSNESS FROM US FOR SO LONG!!! Gosh dang those two are just adorable...
Dae's mom PWNS. That's all there is to it. *nods*
Oooh, Scott's gonna say he loves Dae, right? Right? RIGHT!?!
person Arsinen
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was cute. lol. But I can iamgine it's not going to be smooth sailing from here on out for these two.

The 'baby' parts had be giggling and the part where James tells them both off is so hilarious. I was cracking up. That's right sweetheart you tell them how it is so they'll stop being jackasses. But I do hope that our little 'twink' finds someone for himself. I couldn't stand it if James never found a partner.

Hope for another update soon. ^^
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to put up a formal review. Mostly cause I want my name in the thanks part of the fic. I know its sad, but I love it when fic writers give shout outs. ^-^
I hope those assholes get their asses beat one day. And again, James needs some love! Dameien can be such an ass to him sometimes. If I were James, I would bitch slap him for always calling him a twink, lol.
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I just know everyone is doing some of cheer or happy dance or grin or squeak or flail or something over this chapter. I know I was probably doing all of that xD Eek! They are finally together, and they are soooo cute. I love how Dae was cutely stunned/unbelieving, and big sexy jock Scott had to reassure him. I adore their little names for each other; baby and gorgeous.

And actually liked the whole scene with Dr. Kendrick. She seems like a caring, somewhat funny person. And her talking to Dae really left him see how bad he’d gotten, with all that weight loss and not-eating and stuff. Her strict and tough stuff, along with the sweet but determined way she tells him show that she does care. I think Dae needed a talking to from her, and now, he’s got Scott to take care of him!

Wonderful!! It’s addicting and amazing, so, pft, of course I’m going to read xD Aww thanks. I’ve done like, nothing lately Dx My friend’s sister had an open house, and my other friend a birthday, and then there is always work to work around. Plus like today, I slept from 6pm, when I got out of work, until about 10:30pm. Lameness. But anyways, I shall try to get something up, and once I’ve gotten a few chapters into my new story, maybe I’ll throw it up.
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope Charles gets some disease that makes his junk shrink to a microscopic size, cause that was a horrible thing to do. The doctor was nice though. Oh and WOOT! Scott has FINALLY comes out of the closet he can barely fit in. I hope to see that wild, crazy, monkey sex here soon. James is amazing... Just thought I would insert that.
person Bexy31
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, that was so adorably sweet!!! ^_^ I'm so glad they made up, and are now together! :D Poor Dae though, being so ill and stuffs :( But, now that he's with Scott, hopefully he'll get better again soon! ^_^ Ee, I can't wait for the next chapter! :D Please keep up the great work ^_^
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My lord you update fast! I just assumed I had time to review because I read the last chapter at like five in the morning and had to pass out after it. It was a very pleasant surprise!

This chapter was awesome! It took those bastards long enough. I'm really happy with the way you're working with them. They're really erotic with nearly everything that they do and I really enjoy watching their interactions. I did always as friends, but now...after that kiss...I'm sure every reaction's gonna be all the sweeter.

I have to say that I do feel bad for the next guy that tries to beat up Dae though. There're in for an introduction to hell I'm sure. At first I felt really bad that he got all beat up, but now I think getting kicked around like that may have been one of the greatest things that ever happened to him!

Oh man, and James. The bad luck charm. Looks like he managed to turn that horseshoe around for the past two chapters! Good Job, James! I'm proud'a you, baby! It's a good thing he was there for that fight and went to tell Scott. In a way Dae really has James to thank in part for him and Scott getting together.

I loved that doctor by the way. I was trying to remember who I need to cover and all I could think is Scott and how much sex I wanted to happen, but then I remembered her. There couldn'tve been a better doctor to deal with him. Really couldn'tve been.

Aaaas for Scott...Congratulations on your balls finally dropping! That's Fantastic! I'll send you a card and everything, buddy. I'm really glad that he finally confessed to Dae. I'm also quite pleased that it was him doing the confessing and Dae didn't just do it again and him just agree. It shows some serious character growth for Scott to finally do that. I also think it showed strength on Damien's part that he asked all those questions and really would have walked away if he'd said the wrong thing since he world practically revolves around the guy.

Aaaand sex...Well...I'll be honest...I was -this is strange to say- alright without it. I thought the kiss was plenty and was completely satisfied with it. Good going boys. Of course that may be because I know it's comin' soon enough. ...or they are rather hopefully.

Well thanks again for the double update! Sorry I took so long to review! Hope you're having fun with it and it certainly seems like you are!

-Renny
person Anon
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now that's more like it. Be good to your man, Scott...or I'll kick your closet-lurking ass ten ways to Sunday.