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Great Balls of Fire !!! GAHAHAHAHHAHA! Oh god! this has gotta be the fiery title that takes the cake!
What the hell is with the title! GAH! xDDD

but yeaaaaaaaaaaaaah...
thou i admit the ending of this chapter is very distracting. the beginning is disconcerting.
Just what is dae thinking? this cannot be good in the long run. this just cannot be good now can it.

thou if FITD were to follow AC's plot style. then I'd say that you've got at least one more climax coming up before this story's plot goes downwards towards an ending.
and now, this second climax is just building up. and... er. well. it just doesn't look good.
lying to scott again and all. trickery. lies. more trickery... and James.. I dunno James...
James.... is just.... i cannot put a finger on it... James.... .................. yeah.

Steve is more like an extra this chapter, so I'll wait till he does something again before i rant about him.
I just hope that -bleeeeeeeeeep- will stop his nonsense. how desperate can one get, running after someone elses' boyfriend.

and AH! i nearly forgot about those 'other guys' who escaped! they have'nt been found yet!

this story is only at chapter 34~!!! Lori~! how many more will there be!!!? xD

laters ;)


- nekoii

wohooo....all good in ga ga land...and grape ape needs a good smacking. Can't wait to see THE PLAN next time.

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Hahah, Great Balls of Fire! Love the chapter title!!! How appropriate!

I can imagine what all their friends thought when they heard James and Damien fighting. They did so well, eveyone bought their scheme. Wouldn't it just be ironic tho, if James actually fell for Grape-Ape???? That would be too funny!

Can his mom adopt me, she is a thug.

Dude, I just started reading this story yesterday (wanted to see what all the fuss was about) and I love it, but that's not what I wanted to tell you.
About the "come on, gay boy, dress in drag and pose as my girlfriend to my family" - well, I kinda have a story based on the same admittedly unoriginal idea. I just wanted to say I didn't read your story before I wrote mine, you're not being plagiarised, kay? :)
I'll keep on reading, I'm not half-way through yet. Bye!

Loved reading another chapter of this, and already can't wait for the next one! Whenever Dae gets an idea, I know promising and amusing things are coming XD And hooray for Scott being wary of Steven! Lol, I guess we give the guy too little credit.

*sigh* and here the chapter had started on such good note.
them bastards of a town! they deserve to be nuched for what they'r doin...
*sigh*
oh happy days where art thou? oh truly happy days please come back quickly and preferably to stay! ^^

*huggles L* update soon girl ;)

Wow, poor Dae's parents; still being haunted by those hoodlums. So....Granny is paying for Dae to continue his last semester; that is extremely generous of her. Of course Dae would be mortified if he found out, so hopefully Scott can keep mum.

Luckily Scott is taking Dae's advice and trying to stay away from Grape Ape. B/C if Dae finds out he was there, in his room, he'd have a fit! And wtf did the grape monster expect to do by visiting Scott? Now he's talking all nice about Damien; what the hell is up his sleeve? I don't trust him at all.

I think Dae's plan is good; of course Granny's was really good also, but it Damien could find like one of his old fuck buddies to get in good w/grape guy, that might work.

Anyway, great chapter! I hope things are a little less frazzled for you today.

Oh, and I meant to apologize: I did get the chapter numbers wrong; I thought you were up to ch. 32, but you were right; it was 33. Sorry!

Yay updated. Last stretch huh....well I do hope we get the wedding after all, who doesn't want to see Damien in a white dress?!!!!!!!! *hint hint*

Hugginses from me
Aduial