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July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I didn't see THAT one coming!!!! The little twink's in love w/Dae, wow. Poor little twink! Hahahah Maybe in January you could hook James up w/someone? Granny Winthrop, maybe? J/K I think old granny's gonna surprise Scott. I think she'll be more liberal than he thinks. You know how sometimes the older generation is more tolerant than their children's generation. (Did that even make sense?) Anyway, I hope you know what I'm trying to say. It's late and I can't think! But, so, moving right along, great chapter, yea, and happy 4th!
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, chapter 10 was so freaking funny! Mama's gonna hang poor Scotty by his balls and he cain't be dippin his wick where it don't belong!!!! Hahahah, you are so freaking funny! I LOVE Mama!!!! I wish my mama was like Mama!!!! And good for Scott - he had to BALLS to tell her off; my mouth was hanging open when I read that!!! And good for Scotty that she didn't turn around and whoop his city-boy ass!!! I gotta read the next chapter now; I don't know why I didn't see this update sooner. I look for this story everyday! It's one of my favorites.
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, all I can say is wow, and cold shower! LOL Great smex scene; I could totally see Scott not quite knowing what to do! Even if he is a guy! And I was reading your comments to the reviewers and your last one, yeah, dressing Dae as a girl and having him be Scott's date to mee Granny Winthrop, that may work...or maybe she'll be too smart like Mama and see right thru Dae. Well, the little twink James will be happy that Dae finally got what he wanted! Now you just have to find someone for James. Anyways...great chapter, phew, it's really hot in here, and not the weather kind. heheheh Looking forward to the next chapter!
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well, to be honest I think I was as impatient as Dae to see them have a MUCH needed release ! LOL And you didn't disappointed...*wink*Very hot.
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh very hot chapter, yummy men. Damien is sooo hilarious. I really can't wait to see what happens. LOVE THEM SOOO MUCH!
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot DAYUM that was.... well... HOT!!! Those two are really and truly absolutely DELICIOUS together!!! Now, there's one room I wouldn't mind being a fly on the wall for!
I gotta say, I agree with Scott on this one... I seriously DON'T understand Mama's little southern phrases sometimes. I don't live in the South, I have no relatives that live/have lived in the South, and my exposure to people from the south is VERY minimal. When she talks, I often find myself thinking, "Okay, don't know what that means, but I'm going to guess it's not good and go from there."
And don't worry about the whole "oh dang, I just wrote this... DELETE!" thing. I do that a lot. I'm having that problem on Precarious... so I decided, "Okay, time for a time-jump!" haha. So I'm just gonna skip some days and dates and let people just use their imagination to fill in the gaps, and then we'll be closer to the big "ZOMG you're my teacher/student!?" thing.
I gotta say, I agree with Scott on this one... I seriously DON'T understand Mama's little southern phrases sometimes. I don't live in the South, I have no relatives that live/have lived in the South, and my exposure to people from the south is VERY minimal. When she talks, I often find myself thinking, "Okay, don't know what that means, but I'm going to guess it's not good and go from there."
And don't worry about the whole "oh dang, I just wrote this... DELETE!" thing. I do that a lot. I'm having that problem on Precarious... so I decided, "Okay, time for a time-jump!" haha. So I'm just gonna skip some days and dates and let people just use their imagination to fill in the gaps, and then we'll be closer to the big "ZOMG you're my teacher/student!?" thing.
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy Sheist man. That was HAWT!!! Man you write awesome smut. And it was dirty... XD I love it when they talk dirty makes it even hotter.
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that last bit was so cute!!! T^T And the rest of it was very very hot! XD Ha ha. (Well, not that bit in hospital... poor Dae :( But the sex bit, that was hot). I can't wait to see what happens next! :D Please keep up the amazing work ^_^
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh i loved it 'you sexy motherfucker' think i need to slip that into a conversation sometime this week (il try not to do it at work though)
You may not have been satisfied with this chapter but i think Dae was (and me too). Yay Scott is finally a man, Im so proud i think i might just cry.
Another brilliant chapter, keep up the good work and update soonish. Even if u dont its always worth the wait any way so update wenever u want(soonish if u dont want me to die of withdrawl)
Oh and im gonna suggest leatharier for the next English dictionary xxx
You may not have been satisfied with this chapter but i think Dae was (and me too). Yay Scott is finally a man, Im so proud i think i might just cry.
Another brilliant chapter, keep up the good work and update soonish. Even if u dont its always worth the wait any way so update wenever u want(soonish if u dont want me to die of withdrawl)
Oh and im gonna suggest leatharier for the next English dictionary xxx
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Some rough spots here and there, I can see where you were having trouble. I know what that's like - chapters that just will not gel no matter how much you want 'em to. That said, it was a purty good love scene jsut the same. The title made me laugh so hard, though; it sounds like a generic romance novel title. I can see Dae in a ripped dress and tousled hair, his heaving (fake) bosoms half spilling out while Scott as Fabio(Complete with open shirt to show off manly pecs) holds him and looks down lustfully into his eyes. :P