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Hahaha! C'mon Charles, throw on a dress, push-up bra, and some heels and shake what no one wants to see! It would be hilarious to watch him attempt to preform on a stage. He'd probably break a heel, or both, and fall with a huge resounding BOOM! Haha, I am looking forward to living for a few more years. Getting shot by some rednecks is not my ideal way to go. This economy needs to get better quickly so I can take my Kentucky drive!

I'd love to give you a long review for your awesomeness, however....yeah I'm crap at long reviews, so all I can do is tell you how much I love this. how brilliant you are and that I am anticipating the next chapter with a fevor. As for the titel of this chapter...makes me think of constipation a bit. Anyway thanks for this great story.

Huggins!

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while! I'm here! Really! I read every chapter and I think "I should review" then I remember my knitting and forget everything else. Stupid Renny. Stupid stupid. Sorry.

Of course I had to stop reviewing right during the sex too! Stupid on my part yet again. I wish I could get a wake up call with someone's mouth on my naughty bits...course in my case I wouldn't know who it was and that would put a bit of a strain on the whole thing...or would make it awesome...hmm...future porn fodder logged.

Aaaaannnyway I'm still lovin' it just as much as I always do. Poor Mama. I feel bad that she has to take it like that and I'd like to hear all the details with what's goin' on with poor Damien and the vandalism and the long hospital stay that made them send him to this school and sex. Shit...how'd that get in there again? Really, I want to know what's been up with Damien and who's been fuckin' with his family. Must not be very smart people doing it anyway...I wouldn't fuck with mama if the other choice was a grizzly bear.

Poor Scott being left in the dark. People must just think he likes it what with all the time he spent in that closet.

I'm eager to see what comes of this though. Dae's a good liar, but has a guilty conscience. I don't know why he doesn't just let it all out and tell him. He knows it's gonna come up again even if he doesn't tell him now. Deep down he knows.

Granny...Oooh lord Granny...boy do I Not want your wrinkled ass in my face. I don't care What sweet things Scott tells himself about you while deluding himself to sleep. I know your kind. You're the cock block. Fuck you. Y'know what? I think I'm gonna write that sometime. Hot guy A wants Hot Guy B. Hot Guy B is friends with Hot Guy C who is uber cock block, so Hot Guy A fucks the hell outta Hot Guy C then goes for B while C is incapacitated. Dude...best way to learn the alphabet -Ever-. AaaaanNnnyway, back to the old hobag. I dun want her around. She's gonna get in the way of all the fun hot sexy time.

Side not off old bitch. Poor James! I had a niggling feeling that might be what was going on with him but I still feel bad, absolutely terrible really. He just needs some sweet lovin'. I bet he loved when he and Damien got to have Sex...and pretending Dae was his girlfriend...aw...man...now I feel worse. I bet those were the happiest days of his queer little life. Poooor BABY! Someone needs to fuck him. That's what the doctor ordered. One nice, strong Fuck with repeating blowjobs if symptoms don't begin to fade within the next week. *Writes Perscription*

Oh and to respond back to a response you wrote to me a week or two back you -Should- write about the mechanics! Fuck, I'll help! I'll write mechanic porn With you if you want. Seriously. All I do is write porn and knit when I'm not at one of my jobs anyway...and watch old TV shows from my early adolescence on Hulu. They got my brain. Them and you both. You'll have to share though, not much to go 'round really.

Aaalright and with all that said in another massiverennyramblereview (MRRR for short. {kinda sounds like purring})I can't wait for the next chapter. Looking forward to it. Even if it does come with vandals (Not always negative) and wrinkly old ass (Always Negative).

Yours with love and porn
-Renny

Hiya, me again. I found this pic on deviant art and i jus had to show u. Since finding Yaoi this is soooooooo me lol http://hellena.deviantart.com/art/Too-much-yaoi-32691925
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Im glad u liked it lol. I didnt actually slip it into the conversation at all but im going to keep trying, the situation just hasnt comeup yet. I hate the lack of smex in books lol i find after discovering AFF that i cant read anything that doesnt have sex in, and guy sex at that. Think ive turned into a total deviant! Not complaining tho' deviants tend to have more fun.
Enjoyed the chapter and im pleased that Scott is finally realising whats imprtant and that maybe Grnadma winthrop isnt so bad. Dae needs to stop being a fool and just tell Scott! Well i gotta go to work *sob* so update soon with lots of smex, love ya
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Oh oh and send me the petition for leatherier, im gonna harrass ppl into signing it! I thinks its a great idea!!!lol
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Aww, no, poor Dae! :( I still wanna know what it was exactly that happened to him! >.< (As, I'm sure, does Scott) And yay for another chapter with lots of nice hot sex! ^_^ You really are very good at writing those scenes :) They're excellent! :D I hope Grandmother Winthrop is okay with Scott being gay... If he decides to tell her, that is.
I hadn't mentioned any possible James-liking-Damien-ness beforehand just in case he didn't, ha ha. Coz then that woulda been embarrassing... And I really am very glad that Scott's a c*cks*ck*r! XP (censoring's allowed, I'm sure...) It does seem to suit his personality more - kinda like, just go for it!
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^ Please keep up the amazing work! :D

I noticed that during the hot Amex in this chapter that Dae is almost purring, which made me laugh a lot after your descrption of him as a big cat that would just roll on his back whenever he wants Scott to rub his belly. Now I can't stop picturing Dae as a cat. I can't wait for the granny drama. I'm a bit disappointed in Dae for not trusting Scott with the story about what happened back home. I mean I see his reasoning, but I think Scott can handle it.

Hey, another great chapter I see! Poor Dae, I agree w/Mama; he's gotta tell Scott. Scott's gonna be really pissed when he finds out Dae didn't tell him. And he's sure to find out. And now Dae LIED to him; that's wayyyy worse. Mama was right. I know Dae is probably embarrassed and ashamed about the hate crimes (what doucebags those guys are), and he doesn't want Scott to feel like he has to babysit him over the holidays, but he really shoulda told him the truth. The truth ALWAYS fucking comes out and it'll be worse for Damien when it does. On a happier note: great smex; I LOVE the stuff that comes out (no pun intended! Hahaha) of Dae's mouth when they're doin' it! Hahahah Great job!

Sorry to be such a lazy bones. You've been great, to share your story with us. LOVE the relationship between the boys. I've been reading the story from the beginning.

Question, now that Dae is with Scott, does that mean that they won't go through some crap at school? I know Scott is a big strong jock, but there's other jocks at school to!

Please keep posting, your writing is great....and hot! :)