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for Flaming in the Dorms

by pesterme2

person reader
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I hope you update soon. Its really a sweet story.
person Bexy31
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He he he, your sex scenes are always great! ^_^ And yay them for trying something new, ha ha. And, as always, tis so sweet at the end ^_^ They're just so adorable XD Poor Dae, having his past brought up like that :( At least Grandmother Winthrop is sorry though... Looking forwards to the next chapter! :D Please keep up the great work! ^_^
person ReighChama
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy shizzah was I in need of some nice smutt.. my stories currently are still in the plot section and I don't have the smutt ready yet.. *sigh*

that was HAWT

and i can't wait until dae and granny meet again >.<
person vicxn
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Grr u might be sticking to ur story but i kno something is going on with granny W and i m gonna find out. You couldnt give me the number of the ppl she used could ya lol.
I really really love how foul mouthed Dae is during smex. I jus love how he calls Scott stuff like 'you sexy bastard' it jus really makes me chuckle. That was sum hot smexin!!
Ive actualy forgot what it was that i was going to use in convo before so im going to have a look back through my reviews and find it then def use it some time this week. i shall report what happens next time.
Well update soon plz will look forward to it xxxxxxxxxxx
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I really like the idea of a tranny granny. Oh well. Granny was a little evil in this chapter, even if she didn't mean to be. When granny referred to Dae as being of the homosexual perduasion, I almost fell out of my chair. I was like 'if I ever had a band, which require me to have some musical tale t outside of creating great play lists, I'm gonna name my band Homosexual Persuasion.'
person Southwind
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn, you tease. I thought for sure Granny had them at the table! Maybe she was just trying to give them a chance to tell her on their own. Of course, the sex was delicious, smutty, and best of all - lengty!

Poor Dae, he's really been through some crap in his young life. Hopefully now, he'll have what he deserves, with Scott.

And Mary, always being there, never going home. Always there for Granny........? (Okay, I'm twisted like that)
person khayman
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh boy! you kinda got me scared when I read this chapter's title... I was like 'who's the poor sool that twisted her panties?' ;P
but yeah... Scott's granny definitely went too far in the all past investigation thingy. I was kinda expecting Damien to wring her little neck, he took it pretty calmly considering the situation, not to mention his temperament!
I loved the way Scott put his grandmother and her personal dragon in their places. you go boy! no one is allowed to mess with our Dae, not even family! *we keep warning and people keep doin it! what's wrong in this picture?!*
I'm so gonna miss this story and it's characters when it's finished. I love reading it especialy before I go to bed, it's good fodder material for interesting dreams! LOL
quick updates keep your fans happy and content and make for good loving reviews!!! *batts her eyelashes prettily*
person ReighChama
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hiiii
hehe I finally got the time [ and motivation] to read this story - yaayyy
Not going to lie, it has its stereotypical features [ but that can be just as yummy] The characters are nice, and realisitc [ even if flamer + jock has been done...although I may just read TOO much]

Your writing is fluid and easy to read [ meant in the best way possible]

I lovet he granny, and feel sorry for Scott calling Dae's mother 'Momma' I am pretty sure I would "shit bricks" if that was asked of me :P

Enjoying it so far =)
person Gwengwel
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hooo, I'm so happy, just came back of a little gateway and what I see?????????
Granny Winthrop!!!!!!!!!!!!!Granny Winthrop!!Granny Winthrop!!Granny Winthrop!!Granny Winthrop!!Granny Winthrop!!
Happy dance in the house, open the champagne,!
Not sure if she's a evil granny or a sweet-sugar granny however.
You put an evil, evil, evil cliffy. Bad pesterme2, bad girl lolll.
New people, new situation possible. A lot of fun on perspective with D and S, miam!
With each new chappy you get to surprise me and make me laugh. Thank :)
Gwen
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HAHA! Never underestimate the ones who have ways of doing background checks, like the old, rich, and loving boys. Do you have one of those chains that go on the top area of the door so he can't open the door all the way? Though if he's tiny enough he could probably slip through the little open room there is with those...