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for Flaming in the Dorms

by pesterme2

person khayman
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok... is it just my imagination or are Granny and Liberty in cahoots to try and force them to come out with their relationship? it sure seems like it. lol
and BAM you're caught in flagrante delito! XDD it was bound to happen, sooner than later too with the way they can't keep their hands off each other and are always fucking like bunnies on speed! eh eh eh! me loved it! ihihih!
they can consider themselves lucky it wasn't Granny or Dragon Lady... they would either suffer a stroke or think they were witnessing the hottest show of their lives! which do you think? XD
warning: quick updates keep fangirl happy and prolongue life of author! >:D
person Gwengwel
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you're alive! Now that you satisfied my need....go to sleep :) loll
I knew I was going to hate the girl. Now did you think that she's going to believe D that he's gay?!?! lolll
I want to see her face mouhahaha.
Continue to be suspicious about Granny intention...but you make it like this...devil writer...pout...!
Yep, you prove me again that you're really a marvelous writer, you can write an amazing chappy and be ill at the same time!

Want to write more, but my eyes close by themselves...my bed call me...yes...coming...z.z.z

schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
They are fucking screwed now, pardon the pun. Hopefully Liberty will keep her mouth shut. Maybe they can bribe her with something....a date w/Damien perhaps! J/K!
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Of course I totally knew that Liberty would walk in on them, because I'm brilliant like that. Unfortunately, my genius ends there because I have no idea what shell do with this bit of info. Im hoping that she doesn't turn out to be a total bitch about it, but you know chicks.. Never can trust them. Ha!
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just read your reply in chapter 13, and it made me really happy! I'm sorry I've been away so long. First I swore off reading. And then I had computer trouble and work. Then more computer trouble and no internet, and then recently I effed something up with my memory-stick and lost maybe 2 months of slash documents. It's really got me down. I've been trying to catch up the stories that I really loved, and your work is -amazing.- I love this fic to death, and I started from the beginning and the newer stuff is just as awesome! Love ya!
person Gwengwel
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Where are you?! I miss you and Damien and Scott.....and the hot man-o-man sex........
snif! snif!

schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I skipped one again. Sorry about that, but I'm back now! Loved the chapter, specifically Granny actually. I really wanna figure out what the hell her game is.

Scott's such a sweet heart. I'm loving the big lug a little more every chapter. The adorable Wiley Dae is of course still as amazing as he's always been and I really miss our little queer face, James.

Miss Mary Dragon Lady is a bit terrifying and I'd like her to stay outta the way of awesome sex. There should be a rule or a law or something that she can get in the way of anything in the whole wide universe except amazing, awesome, super-sex. Or I'll kill her. Shovels are multi-purpose.

Sorry by the way for being so spacey with reviews and at the moment spacey with typing them. Not only am I working three jobs but I'm also mildly sleep-deprived at the moment.

I'm glad you got to have fun on your husband's vacation. It's just what I would've done had I been in the situation.

Can't wait for the next chapter and congrats on the editor. You're both doing great!

person reader
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He needs to tell his grandmother now....damn can't wait to see how the next chapter turns out how you update soon
person Juana13
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damn!! am i loving this story or what?! I absolutely love damien. he's so awesome. but Scott's granny is scary... so manipulative. Now she plans to interfere more in their life by getting Scott to hook up with some other girl? this whole time i thought she'd have figured damien and scott out, but now she's pulling this shit. is it on purpose? what will scott say to this?? will he finally tell his grandmother whats going on? and if not, how will damien take this news???
i bet there'll be lots of drama in the next chapter. hope its updated real soon, cause I am loving this story. I can't wait to read what happens next. update soon please!!!! : )
person Gwengwel
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have a problem and it's your fault. Ok, mine a little because I read this new chappy but it's principally yours because you write this chappy. I babysit my neighbor child, he is 14 and autism, he can read a little and act like a parrot................so now for the last 15min he repeat: "throbbing cock" and he has no idea what he say because we speak french. What I am suppose to say to his parents?! "Ho, sorry but I am a closet pervert that enjoy corrupt young and innocent man?!" mouhahahaha! (ho man, seriously I sooo hope that he forgot this before his parent arrive, I'm soo dead if not). End of this slice of life!!!
On a better note, an awesome new chappy as usual. You spoil us too much. Not that I complain don't worry, I enjoy too much read about Scoot and Damien to do that. I have a bad bad feeling about Granny, I don't like this, not a minute. A girl?! I hate her already and I don't know her loll. Don't want to know her too loll.
Gwen