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for Flaming in the Dorms

by pesterme2

schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'Granny Plots-A-Lot'! You have such a way with nicknames. Gotta love it. And the scene in the restaurant was great. I could so see it happening and Granny's face getting redder and redder as her lips got more and more pinched. It actually reminds me of something my friends Aaron, Ellen, and I did in a restaurant one time. Maybe I'll tell you about it sometime. But it was wonderfully written!
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that was so fantastic. I absolutely loved Liberty and her creaper dad it was awsome.
person ReighChama
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
But I did make it wooot!!!
Italy was the bomb three weeks.. woot wooot!! tones of partying and meeting people from all over europe actually.. my fave ppl currently are hungarians and crotations!! they just dance so amazingly :P and funnily

LOL
can I just say WOW I never saw that coming for a million years
THREE SOME WOOT
although that would be hot.. more so if chaisty and liberty had some 'cocks' though :P

du du duuuuuu whats to come next???? I just can NOT wait!!!
person asphyxiate.me.baby.
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to be honest, I really wasn't expecting that. And I don't know why. It was all so perfect!

I've enjoyed every chapter. Haven't been disappointed ever!

Can't wait for more.
person ReighChama
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL
I KNEW IT
well the fact that granny knew...
and dragon lady.. was there but not.
total awsome!!

HEHE secret asigment time boo ya
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Drag Dae is my favorite. Liberty's dad is scary and wonderful. I like this new side of Liberty. And I cannot wait to see Granny lose it.
person khayman
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XXXXXXXXXXXDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... you can't stop there!!! that's mean!!!
oh gosh I can't remember the last time I laughed like this. that was just... wicked!! LMAO
Granny Winthrop was about ready to blow a vein! I just wish I could see it, this story is soooo worth a movie! will u try and manage that? ;)
oh please please please hurry with the next chappy! I just can't wait to see what else the three stooges hv in waiting 4 granny and dragon lady. lol
oh oh and I'm just curious... how in hell did a gay/transvestite perv like Allie managed to hv such a level headed daughter like Liberty?!? I would'v thought she would be more prone to end up in a mental house... O.o
oh men... I want MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR... it always ends up way too fast =´(
*see? looky me. I'm pestering! I'm pestering!*
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not gonna lie.....I so wished that I could really see Granny's Winthrop's face! Great work!
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sheesh, I knew that Granny knew all along. The lesbian thing wasn't as clear, although from the way she talked about Scott's father I thought he might be 'batting for the other team' too. Genetics, and all that. Poor Granny, her plans went totally awry. I do have a more serious, sobering question though - does Damien have HIV? Is that why his immune system is so low? And if he does...well then Scott's got it too since I didn't see too many condoms being used. Eek. Or is that just me doing worst-case scenario in my head? I tend to do that. >> I hope that's all it is, even though HIV isn't the death sentence that it used to be. Lol, my recaptcha words are fitting for this topic 'raining upset'. :P
person whitedragon
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i haven't read the chapter but i will later cuz i'm on a school computer and i need to go and i'm sure that's it's good. can't wait to read it and i thought something might b happening with dragon lady and and that other lady can't remember her name.