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Yeah and you know it....they can get it on but I DONT WANT TO KNOOOOOW! Can't wait to see what Granny is gonna do to Scott. Not quite sure if Damien's plan is brilliant or completely psychotic. I mean, his plans have always been questionable. I just love it though. I don't know if I'd want a boyfriend like Damien though....very high maintanence.

HUGGINS

Aduial

Time to insert a bad pun - life for Scott with Damien will be a total drag... XD Loved the plan, am glad about no HIV. The recaptcha is that little box under the review screen where you have to type in words to prove you're a human not a bot. Sometimes the word combos are incredibly amusing.

Well done for adding the leatherier but i must say i prefer Adam in the leatherier clothes lol. Ahhhh cant believe you ended it there, i wanna hear what granny has to say. Liberty's dad is a bit freaky, the poor girl. Another great chapter, now im going to catch up on AC cos i think im two chapters down on that one. update soon xx

Wow! That chapter was hilarious! I find it hard to believe Damien actually kissed a girl but it certainly threw grandma Winthop for a loop. I got your review for my story Forbidden Delicacy and I was trying to think of why your name sounded so familiar and then I read this and it hit me that i've been reading this story for a while. I really enjoy your writing style and this story is really funny. I can't wait to see what happens next with the grandma.

Because I feel absolutely awful for not getting to read all the new chapters or review any till now (I swear, the yaoi hating demon must have tied up the yaoi fairy and sexed him into submission in some sort of insane paradox to have kept me from this site and story for so long) I'm going to leave you reviews for every chapter!

This chapter was like one of the muffin cakes you pop in the toasty, and that's just a very strange hunger-related analogy to there being hot sexual action and delicious perfect couple-ness between Dae and Scott! But, like eating all the muffin and having no more, James makes me so sad! I especially loved how you had Scott understand, and the way he tried to console and calm Dae was adorable and stud-muffiny. Dae's not knowing of James's feelings was so bittersweet, too, but it's all for the best...and I love the implication that James never said anything to keep Dae from getting worried. It's so heartbreakingly admirable!

I can't wait to jump to next chapter!

Aww, you give hot sex and lusty Dae and then flung in sad foreshadowing! I will say, I absolutely adore Mama even more than I did before, and I love the conversations between her and Dae not only because they're giving puzzle pieces but also because I can just hear the accent with Mama and also, in my weird way, I can hear the emotion behind every voice! (Don't call me crazy because I imagine everything I read like some sort of movie with the perfectest actors~)

Dae's so selfless when he tells that lie to Scott, I almost cried again! I get so worked up about the littlest things, and I absolutely love when characters so special like Dae suffer to try and keep a (smexy) loved one happy. Like I saw to people who have more skill than I do at things: I hate you T_T (and I mean that in the most loving and adoring-fan way as possible!) I'm so eager to find out the whole truth from Dae's past...I can't help but think of the most horrible things, though, and a very dark sick and twisted part of me likes the ideas...and adores the idea of Scott being the hunky meatchop that he is and getting propperly angry at Dae for keeping something like that from him and decides to break even by tossing Dae over a desk and...well...I believe the imagination can take it from there...oh how insane I must be to see smex as the perfect way to make up, comfort, and satisfy adorably sexy characters...

Well, I'll just be hoping to find more clues to the puzzle next chapter!
PS. If your writing were a solid object or whatever, it would be giant bricks of pure gold!

Okay, so maybe the whole, "review every chapter" wasn't as great an idea as I'd hoped...mainly becuase I have to stop after every chapter to write a review T_T But I made an oath, and as a fellow writer, I know all too well the lust for reviews and you deserve a million and thirty seven! Anyway~

I was freaking out so horribly over Scott! I thought you were going to be evil and toss the rocks into the pool and give he and Dae problems that would take too long to work out before the make up sex!!! But I feel for Scott, because he really does with his big hunky heart love Dae to itty bitty bits, and he wants Dae to love him as completely as he does for him. But Dae and all his adorable, plucky, Energizer self is really going to have to work hard to stop telling lies! He's just asking for a spanking! (Metaphorical or literal, I will not mind either one a single bit xD)

I'm super glad they made up, and Dae's story is so sad! If only the yaoi fairy and the recently turned Cocksucker Anti-yaoi demon could go do horrible things to the awful people who hurt Dae! (and their parents) I'm thinking Scott would like to bust a few heads against a brick wall...which would be wicked awesome and vengeful~

And poor Dae!! I want to huggle him again and again now, he was hurt so bad! And as a serious interjection, it is simply awful what those evil hurtful people do to others in the real world, especially all these awful hate crimes! It's one of the reasons I dislike living in the south, then alone the southern part of the bible belt! But my heart goes to Dae and I hope that he and Scott don't get too much trouble from Granny...though for some reason I feel like she's going to make her "wise" old self into a cockblocker...I hope not! I love the sex scenes, and not just as a derragned fan of your writing and slash, but as a writer. Attention to detail, character, attitude, and flow...God I love you and Flaming!
Ps. Still five chapters to go and I'm this crazy...I think you need to put a warning in your story that it's addictive and dangerous as crack Dx It's like I'm experiencing slash withdrawl -AND- overdose with every new chapter I read!

*poke* u done yet? *poke poke* where's new chappy? *poke poke poke* gimme some more please *pokepokepokepokepokepoke* u know it don't u? I'm so gonna keep pestering u... u'r not getting rid of me! >:D
I want my man-on-man smex! *wails* I'm feeling deprived!! *wails some more* I miss James! James, u sweet little twink, where r u?!? *wails even louder*
by the way r u planning on giving Liberty a cock of her own to love & cherish?
...and you'r not gonna get too descriptive in the Granny/Dragon smut department, r u? cause that may turn out kinda gross... can u imagine it, yewwww! It was disturbing enough to 'see' frost lady and geriatric pole making out in the hall the other day... and when is Mama gonna make her appearence, eh? she's dearly missed. I wanna see her messing up with Damien and Scott, it's way too entertaining... and I wanna meet Papa too!
hmmmmmmm I wonder if this is a long enough poke *pokes again* okay I'm sleep deprived, gonna go jump into my valley of sheets. *pokes once more before leaving*

I just love the Granny-Plots-A-Lot operation! Luckily Granny didn't suspect that Chastity (funny name considering; I didn't think about it before when I was proofing it). Reminds me of Chasity Bono, who is becoming a guy. And of course the meaning behind the name. Anyways....what was my point? Oh yeah, Granny saw Dae in full out drag as Darlene; luckily she didn't put two and two together. Especially since she saw Liberty there. And I certainly wouldn't want to be in Scott's shoes when he meet w/Granny. I don't know if she's gonna be angry, confused, what. And OMG, what a fucking HOOT Allie is!!!!! What a cool dad/mom, whatever he is! He is hysterical!

Oh my god!!!!!!!! Oh my fucking god!
Mouhahahahahahhah!
I love you and your marvelous sense of humor. Wow, what a chappy!
I wanted to be there! snif! Granny and the Dragon face......!
Slutty Liberty! But you can see hat it's not in his personality.
And they play lesbian (reminder to Granny and her Dragon?!) and the cash whore.

Now want to read about Granny reaction and the hot man-o-man sex that you promised.
Thank again!
Gwen