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Mmmm....I love Dae and Scott smexin all over each other. I don't know how to feel about the ot against Granny. I mean Granny is an evil genius, so she pretty much deserves what's coming at her, but she is an evil genius, and them kids should be careful. granny ain't going down without a fight and without revealing a few more of her own tricks. Can't wait.

Ooo, Grandma is steamed and the boys are steamy! XD I like Liberty's dad, he's a hoot. Must be hard when your dad dresses better and more femininely than you do, though. I like comfortable clothes too, so it would heartily suck if my dad was a cross dresser. *Imagines father as cross dresser, runs away to hurl somewhere* Ahh, better now. Its fun to watch them make Scott's granny twitch. Can't wait to see the rest of the plan. -Dl

I reailzed after I had read it that I did not review. o.o but I came back!!
okay. so usually I am observant.. but do you have an update schedule? or naaahh??
SMEX SMEX give me yummies.
I LOVE allie. and liberty. but allie more. I want to create a fanfiction for your stories. xD more king jj ones but allie has sparked my creative imagenations!!!

Forceful Scott f***ing submissive Dae is just so F***ING HOT!!! Ok, just had to get that out. And good for Liberty wanting her dad to be happy as himself! Most teen-agers are too wrapped up in their own lives to consider how others are feeling. They would be more concerned about how having a drag queen for a dad would affect them. Oh, and I can't wait to see what phase two is! If it's supposed to top phase one I'm going to have my asthma inhaler on hand when I read it, just in case I laugh so hard that I have trouble breathing!

Ok, and about what my friends and I did: My friend Aaron is blind. We were teenagers and Aaron, Ellen, and I went out for breakfast one Sunday morning. The restaurant was incredibly crowded and the tables crammed together, so Aaron couldn't use his cane. Oh, and before I forget, Ellen and I are white but Aaron is African American. That's important. So, I led Aaron to the table since he couldn't use his cane and he was plastered pretty close up onto my back in order to step exactly where I did. He had collapsed his cane and stuck it into his back pocket, so it wasn't obvious he was blind. We get to the table and sit down and Aaron and I sit really close together so I can read the menu to him, arrange his plate for him, and do all the things friends do for blind friends. Well, halfway through breakfast these two old biddies behind us start talking real loud about how shameful and disgusting the two of us are, flaunting our unnatural relationship in front of good, decent people and hanging all over each other. After a shocked moment, Ellen winks at me and says even louder then they're talking, 'So, when's the baby due? And are the two of you still set against getting married?' I respond, 'Hell, no, we're not getting married! It's too much fun f***ing around with others and once we're married, people might say no for some reason. Aaron's great in the sack and all, really good with his hands, but I need variety!' Then Aaron chimes in with, 'Besides Ellen, we want to keep you in our bed. Our threesomes are just too hot to give up.' Well, the two old biddies start choking behind us. We went on for a little bit and then, finished with breakfast, stood up to leave. As we did, even though there really wasn't the room for it, Aaron pulls out his cane and with unerring accuracy smacks the back of both their chairs as we walk out talking loudly about just how much trouble we could get into that night. And that's the story.

Oh, and p.s. my recaptcha is 'rectal bumps' LMFAO

Yay an update and hot sex! Wooohoooo. Granny is getting what she deserves, caniving old lady. She had it coming to her. Liberty's dad is funny but man, you wouldn't want him as your father....I think a nice normal father is still better. Thank you for all the awesome Dae and Scott yummyness that you give us every day. This was an awesome chapter and didn't find it angsty at all. Can't wait for the next one.

Hugs Aduial

OMG that was so hot!! They need to have smex like that all the time it was awesome!!!!!!
'Granny-the-muff-burglar' made me snort and my little boy thought i was doing pig impressions lmao, not a mental image i wanted!
Weeelll another brilliant chapter with brilliant smex, naughty Dae into the whole spanking deal.
Cant wait fot the next one now im all caught up with everything, inc AC.
Update soon plz xxx

Great Chapter. The first part had me grinning like an idiot. How could Scott even keep a straight, I know I couldn't.

Now I understand Albert so much better, the part made me feel like it was written just for me.

Of course, the sex was smokin' and I'm grinning like an idiot, again.

Woah! I froze too when granny let Scott know she knew about him and Damien at the pool! But, he covered himself pretty well. Granny can be a cold and calculation force to be wreckoned with! Scott better watch out; what happens if she actually cuts him off from his funds? Then he's screwed (in more ways than one!). I'm anxious to find out how the 2nd? phase of their scheme is going to play out? How will Allie fit into this part of the scheme? Can't wait to find out!!! Next week I'll definitely have time to read it before it's posted; sorry about the school starting crap I had to go thru!

lol i love the pinky and the brain theme song. it is good with dae's sex drive. i love this chapter!!! it's amusing and made me smile :) and the ending is drool worthy :D

Freakin awesome! Granny's on the warpath and Scott is craving some compASSation!!!