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Gah u creased my work uniform wen u squeezed me!! Lol, Thankfully my hours arent so bad, so i actually have chance to do things, like sit at my computer and rabidly (is this a word, i kno wot i mean anyway) wait for u to update.

That chapter was awesome. Finally everything is out in the open! I hope they make up properly soon and i cant believe Scott was going to propose!!

'This is worse than the time you paid that Murphy boy from across the road to flash the old church ladies who always strolled past his house on Wednesday nights'.
OMG This is the funniest thing i have ever heard. I would love to do something like that (obviously i wouldnt want to flash at old ladies) but to pay someone to do it would be hilarious. Then again i would probably be arrested for being a perv. And then my leatherier fetish would come out and ..... Gah , dont want to go there!
Well, great chapter and cant wait for the next one. xxxxxxxxx

gwar!!! I though his mama would have been a wee bit more understanding. Thats the way it seemed before though. once he calmed down and explained it. // are granny and mama going to have a talk.

lol he has more self control then ME if i was talking to my mama that way [ its funny b/c the reltionship is slightly similar, my moms just canadian] i totally would have thrown in the envelope sneaking phase just to prove my point. so he does have some self control.

the old bitty desereved every single thing. and i think she should have gone after her grandson and explained a bit.

and NEXT CHAPTER>
and WOW too early to propose. whens his b-day again??

Ha! I've been silently trolling and not reviewing for the past couple weeks or so. My bad for not reviewing sooner. Hmm, it seems like you were a little harsh with Damien this chapter. First he was slammed down on his mom, went toe to toe with the evil grandmother and barely got any reaction out of her, and then being manhandled/yelled at by Scott. :( Poor Damien, and Scott was going to propose too! *pout* Such a potentially wonderful holiday turned so tragically/humourously awry. I'm going to place all the blame though on the evil grandmother (her name escapes me at the moment). Since she's supposed to be the adult in the situation, she could have easily said from the beginning that she knew about the relationship, or Scott's gay leanings, and got everything out in the open. Yes, it's more cathartic for the guy coming out to do it for himself, but then Damien ended up yelling it anyways and Scott didn't say it himself. *sigh* I guess there would be no plot though if there was no conflict/torturing of the main characters. :P Well, I hope Scott and Damien's argument resolves itself in the next chapter or two.

Although it was brief, I actually really enjoyed Damien and his dad's scene. I think it would be hilarious to watch his dad interview Scott and have one of those shotgun kind of discussions with him. Especially with all this recent fiasco highlighting that Scott doesn't know what he's doing it or something. I wouldn't want it to get too angsty though and Scott to start really doubting his suitably. Oh well...

Can't wait until the next chapter and good luck writing!

*sniff sniff* oh booo. this chapter turned out so sad, it left a bitter taste in my mouth! =(
it was an unexpected turn about, the hillarity and fun of the previous chapters just make it all the more depressing seeing Dae and Scott ending up so miserable and angry.
I would love to see Mama giving Granny some tongue lashing too, she way deserves it after the crap she pulled. I kinda hate her right now, she's been a squeaming little bitch from the start and the sole reason why Dae, Scott & Liberty did what they did, after all. *digs a hole near an ant farm, puts Granny inside, covers the hole leaving only the head out and pours honey on top of her head* there! now lets see if you find that amusing! ;P
let me just say Scott wasn't very bright by using all that money from his trustfund to pay for the presents, of course someone would end up contacting Granny about it! *smacks Scott on the back of the head* damn dumb hot jock!! and be careful of my delicate Dae, if you hurt him again meaning or not I'm gonna hang you by the balls! ;PP
well I hope next chapter will be a little brighter than this one. not to mention I'm curious to see Scott's reaction to Damien's dad (he sounds yummy, can I hv me one of those?!)
btw *looks at broken feather* that was my favorite one! *bottom lip starts trembling* it was all fluffy and whitey and smoothy and all... *gives pesterme2 the evil eye* now you really done it, I'm forced to bring up the heavy guns! *ties pesterme to the chair in front of the computer, hangs a sparkly box of tasty bonbons from a thread just out of her reach and hires 2 gorgeous yummylicious hunks to make out in her bed, right behind her chair so she can't see them right* hehehe how you like that, huh? where's the next chapter? huh, huh? if you're a good girl and quick with the tipping I might, might, let you take a look at the play going on at your back! XD
update soon! lol

Is Dae's dad a blast or what? Your cliffie madness is forgiven for now. I still think Granny is pretty evil, but I can see why Dae just wants to move on. I'm still pretty sad about the ruined engagment moment, but I do love to be sad, so this is also forgiven. Two gold stars.

My head is still spinning! So much happened here, crazy stuff! Great work though, completely loved it!

*gasp!!* Oh my God!!! :O Was NOT expecting that, ha ha. I did wonder what Granny had planned... Ahh, can't wait to see what happens next! XD Please keep up the fantastic work! ^_^

I've been screaming in my head at those kids to be careful messing around with Granny. That old lady is crazy. I just knew they'd get burned. And now we have the gift cliffhanger to deal with as well. You are an evil cliffie monkey once again.

That ending had me falling off my seat laughing!

Please add me to the update list ;-) However after reading all the current chapters I don't the word "virginal" and Dae's name should ever be used in the same sentence.