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So sorry for my selfish behavior, but I've been out of commission the past few weeks with stomach flu and just couldn't hold myself back from reading the chapters I missed all at once! But I have to say, now that I'm off my meds and lucid enough to understand proper english, I am SO FUCKING HAPPY to read this! Flaming is like...oxygen, seriously. If I could have this story converted to atmospheric particles that I could breathe instead, I would. It is SOOO FLAMING GOOD (See what I did there? Flaming? Haha, my awful sense of humor is back) But as per usual, your writing talent is off the charts, like, over ninethousand, and your abilities at drawing us readers along like eager cats for the treat is heartbreaking and tantilizing and I wish I could have just a teaspoonful of your skill for myself. Beautiful work, my dear, really, absolutely stunning story!

Now, reflections! God, I flaming LOVE Scott when he goes all dominant over a submissive Dae...Damn, my brain was squealing with glee. You write everything from the story to the lovely and sexy sex scenes perfectly as though you are God yourself...are you God? I'm beginning to think you are, just in disguise...because you're making my days happy whenever I think back on Flaming. But I will say, not that I haven't enjoyed it immensely, I do feel for Granny and cringe at the diabolical-ness that is the combined forces of Damien's evil mind and some Liberty-evil. I do love Francis's character, though, she's a tough old bitch who merely receives Dae's coarseness with a smirk. I like that, she's perfect for our uptight Dragon Lady, haha. And Mama...MAMA'S BACK Y'ALL! I love Mama, and Pops, they both are such loving and adoring and funny parents, I'm glad to see Dae with such a happy family! But as for the soon to be addition to this family, Scott (our residence Cock God), he makes me happy because he's such a great character, but at the same time I'm mad at him! I'm probably way too forgiving when it comes to characters I love, but Scott's just taking Dae's insults to his grandmother too far! While the rational side does understand and side with him and sympathize, my other and more prevailant side just wants him to fork the ring over to Dae and then they should go at the kinky engagement sex ritual which is required for all sexy gay men! Geez...but seriously, I love how you've done the story, and because I'm riled up and having clashing opinions, it means you've done great and made and awesome story that really reached me! But I absolutely love Scott and Dae, and hope they make up soon enough that I can have the pleasure of reading about my happy boys!...But I just remembered...getting over this stone is just one...there's always whatever else you cook up...and the fact that Damien still has secrets about "that" night! Oh noes...I bet Scott's reaction to the discovery of whatever it is will definitely be a mind-blowing read...hehe...blowing...

Well, I can't wait till the next chapter, hopefully I'll be able to catch it soon enough to give it a proper exclusive review! Oh, and an update on the yaoi-hating demon. He's been hanging out around me while I'm sick, making sure I wasn't lucid enough to read any lovely slash, but he happened to catch these past few chapters, most importantly Scott's sexy man self and decided to make our Sexy Jock his role model, and now he's a total cocksucker and he's fucking the lovely yaoi-fairy in their shared studio apartment. Everything works out in the end, doesn't it?

So! In all seriousness, thank you so much for your story. I honestly can't tell you or rationalize it, but to me, just having the privledge to read this story makes my inner writer scream with joy and praise and unworthiness and I feel so happy and satiated to read such pure talent and amazingness, and I just could never find the right words or enough of them to praise your talent and genius and beautiful work of art you have created into Flaming. Can't wait for your next chapter! Hope your life is going well and whatever you're plans are work out great and you're healthy!
Sincerely,
Alluca

Well, I finally figured out why Granny pisses me off so much: of all of them, she's the one that needs to grow up! That's not to say that the Three Musketeers were acting very mature or anything, but they're still teenagers, whereas she's been an adult for quite a while. At least in terms of age, but I'm not so sure if she is an adult in terms of her actions. As for Mama, she needs to remember that Scott is still a teen too, not much older than Damian. And speaking of Scott being a teen, he just messed up himself. Bet Dae thinks Scott is still so pissed that their relationship is on the rocks after Scott turned down the offer of nookie.

Great chapter!. I hated seeing Scott and Dae fight, I was like 'Nooooooo Scott, don't go in there!. You should know by now that eavesdropping on your granny is really bad!'. The angst was painful but necessary, and brought more deep to their characters. Granny's hug was yuck, by the way. That Dae was comforted by it shows just how down he was! xDDD.

Dae's pops is love!. He seems like such a great guy, pity he has to go back home so soon. Dae and his dad seem to be really close, maybe they can at least talk on the phone when they're back to school? *pretty please, with a naked and wet Scott on top?*

I'll be glad to see James again. You've been such a tease with those comments about Jaime's story... I can't wait to read it, specially if we get to see Dae and Scott again!.

Awwwww....for poor little Dae. I do think Scott overreacted a tad, after all evil gran deserved all she got. HAS HE FORGOTTEN THE FILE?! yay and update *does little dance*. Oh yes poor little James, hope he finds someone nice, because he deserves it. Maybe you should do a wedding one shot when you finish this *big Dae puppy eyes* I'm sure that would be just awesome (Damien would love the dress). What am I going to read when you finish this story. *Insert sad violin music* woe is me.

Are we going to have Christmas pressie giving? Or straight back to the dorms. I can't wait. This is soooooo good.

Huggins

Aww, that was so sad!! :( Almost made me cry a few times too. Poo Scott and Damien :( But even if Scott's angry at Dae, at least he still loves him :) And I'm glad that Dae and Granny sort-of made up. And that everything's out in the open now :) Looking forwards to the next chapter! ^_^ Please keep up the amazing work! :D

I'm enjoying this story a lot. I love the twists and turns and I've enjoyed watching Damien grow. Am I alone in the boat when I say I'm still rooting on Damien and James? I'm weird, I know. But I think their friendship is the most precious thing. And I somehow see Damien getting some senses knock into him and realize he had only been physically attracted to Scott from the beginning but his relationship with James is something deeper, emotionally. It seems they've been through a lot together. And the revelation that James is in love with Damien just got to me.

Some much going on this chapter. First, the old lady redeemed herself. I am impressed, I didn't think it was possible. It was nice to finally meet Damien's dad. Oh my god, you make Damien in a tux sound super hot! I am saying someone needs to make fanart. Sadly I can't even draw stick figures, so we need some volunteers.

I am in love with this story. I have been reading it slowly for this past week just so I wouldn't finish it too quickly and would have to wait for chapter updates. BUT I have gotten to that point, so I would definitely like to be updated on when new chapters are posted.
I can't wait to see what happens next.

Ok, I was cracking up when I was reading the part about Dae shaving the neighbors dog and using permanent maker on him, when I was proofing this....today I was cracking up even more at the same part! You are hysterical!!!! Too funny! I can so see Damien doing that also; it would not surprise me.

As I said before, I wish I could be more like mama; a little fear for the 'rents may not be a bad thing! Especially w/ Satan's mini-me I live with!

I do understand how Scott felt; it was not Damien's place to out him to granny. No matter how pissed Dae was w/her. He should have held his tongue. Now Scott has to face her in the a.m. Even tho she already KNEW; it should have come from him anyway.

Great chapter! Can't wait to read about breakfast w/all the grown-ups! And granny AND Mary!

Hello, yeah I feel better. But I can't return to work, my little monster's ill too now!!! If I was not so tired, I would laugh! Ho well, we're going to survive loll!

Granny's just lost again a lot of point, I start to really dislike her and I don't want this. Why can't she just let Scott be. She gave the impression of someone concerned more about their reputation and cash than Scott happiness in the last couple chappy. Why can't she tell frankly to Scott what he do good and wrong instead of plotting behind his back? Grrrrrrr.....

And Damien's evil!!! Ho why I was not here at the breakfast. The little bitch. As you can see he push Granny wrong button at the end of the chappy. Yeahhhhh the return of mum!!! Ho what's going to happens????? How explain the situation without reveal the plan (I so hope for the three musketeer to win on Granny). And the sex...I try to write something original to comment but, heee, miam (hoo that's really original mouhaha), my brain's in a puddle on the floor.

Gwen