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You know, in all honesty I was kind of thinking his Granny and Mary might be, just with the way that Mary is constantly around her and no one else really is. Then I figured probably not. I guess I should go with my gut instincts ^_^ I like that they’re plotting their revenge against Scott’s granny. It sounds like such fun! I also like how Scott totally vetoed even joking about sharing his Dae. He’s big and possessive. I like that:) Poor Scott though, he’s honest by nature. He really must want his revenge if he’s lying.

*cackles hysterically*That was great! Revenge is sweet, yes? It was hilarious. You did a wonderful job on this chapter, not that any of your other chapters aren’t amazing. Poor Scott and Damien though. They are going to be lectured to death. I’m so excited to see the rest of the plan though. How will they finish their revenge, the evil little buggers:)

Oh no! Scott’s very mad. He left a bruise on poor Damien:( But at least they’re cuddling now. Plus, Scott’s grandma didn’t really mind so that should make Scott feel a little better. Yay! We got to meet Damien’s daddy. I like him^_^ He’s big like Scott and is all protective…interviewing Scott?*giggles* That would probably be a little nerve-wracking for Scott. Really good and interesting story though. This story is so fun and addicting. I keep wanting to know what happens next. I stayed up until six in the morning reading this and I would have stayed up later if I wasn’t worried about not getting any sleep. I’m glad that Scott’s grandma and Damien will hopefully get along now though. They’ve had their fun so it’s time to settle down now.

Hmm, is James hiding a boyfriend? Well, maybe not a boyfriend, but a screw buddy. He seemed awful suspicious and the guy behind the door acted like he was protective/jealous. Why else would he care if someone was in Jame’s room and why did James hide Damien from the guy? Questions. Questions. I have to say Damien has very good luck though. If it wasn’t for Scott and Ryan showing up he’d probably he a beat up mess at the moment. Interesting. I can’t wait to find out what is going on with James and what’s up with Ryan. I like him though. He always goes about things in a lazy/sleepy manner. I like it and find it kind of cool. Good job!

Aww, that was cute^_^ And wow, even Damien is tired. That rarely happens*chuckles* I like how the chapter ended too. I like how they raced and Scott easily outran him. He even held the door open for Damien. I swear sometimes he’s too cute for words. I’m glad that he and Damien got together. They make a really nice couple. They balance each other. It seems like Scott is picking up after Dae though, he seems to be cussing more^_^ I bet Damien to going to throw a shit fit when he hears about counseling though *pats Scott consolingly* Good luck with Damien when he finds out, boyo. Looking forward to more:)

I was happy with the chapter. By the end I was thinking, ‘Oooo, they’re so busssted.’ ^_^ I figured they would be, with how smart Scott’s grandma is. Now the question is if she is going to announce that she knows they are together or if she’s going to torture them by teasing them with each other (sharing a bedroom, getting a chance to be all touchy feely, etc). I could see it going either way, so I’m very curious to see what happens next. I like your characterization and dialogue though sometimes I want to shake Damien and tell him to quit lying, even though I understand why he’s doing it. I just don’t want him to lose Scott over it. There was one thing that bothered me and this is personal opinion and you can’t really change it now or some characters would be out of character, but I dislike how you have Mama and Damien talk. I live around that part of Indiana and while we do admittedly have a rather southern twang thing going on for being so far in the North we are not that bad, nor do the majority of the moms I know act like that ( I realize this is a personality thing though). Anyway, you’re story is great and I really like it so I hope my little pet peeve didn’t anger or dishearten you, I just wanted to tell you in case you thought we really talked like that. Then again, maybe you live around there too?

I can't tell you how much I love this story. Damien and Scott, guh! So hot. I love, love, love, the chemistry between them, and their roller coaster ride of a relationship. I also kind of want to see Ryan and James get together. Ryan may say he doesn't play for the same team, but I'm getting a different vibe from him. Haha. Ryan and James hooking up would be such a fun read.



Post more soon!

I just wanted to drop you an email and tell you how much I have enjoyed flaming so far.I am so in love with Scott's grandma and Damian's mom its not funny.all of your people are just done so well ,I feel like I know them or know someone like them.I hope to see more soon.

Hellooooo flaming~

it's been awhile hasn't it... now... what was the plan again? I can't seem to recall...

Dae and James were suposed to pretend they were fighting, so that James can go be-friend steve and dig the shit out of him. So that was the main plan yeah? and also, to get Steve to 'agree' to breaking Dae and Scott up. That was a plan too. yeah.
so... What's this NEW plan that Dae's cooked up with Liberty's help?

and how oh how in the world is Dae concentrating on these schemes while he's busy trying to NOT lose his lunch over drawing anatomy?
Now Scott has Dae's empty stomach to worry about, his own school work to worry about, Dae and James 'fight' to worry about, those guys on the loose to worry about, AND pesky Steve to worry about too.

Things are getting heavy for Scott eh... much heavier than they used to be. And this whole 'bundle of joy' came with Dae...
I suddenly feel the need to know that Scott loves Dae. Yeah, we know. but.... you know... reassurance. That evil head is rearing it's head and making me feel doubtful.

no no no no . shan't think that way. no. *sighs*

and NOW. there's Ryan and James to worry about. My curious is really.... curious... he's interesting that one. I think he'd be the sort to just try is for kicks... but if it's just for kicks. he better not get James involved.
James has enough emotional shit too, no need to add on anything else really.

Now. how about Steve... does he have any emotional shit going on? He seems like a straight-laced (thou gay) guy. Good grades, good family (where there was no junk food...?), not overly gay, able to get along well with the big-boys...
What's his problem eh?
Everyone has a problem. even a small one... maybe his is just 'the obsession with jock-boy' problem?

eh. eh~ who knows man~~~
the dying embers of the flames are gently being blown by the passing breeze... will a gust come? and blow the embers askew, lighting the forest surrounding it? heh~ ^____________^ I'll wait and seeeeeeeeeeeee~~~

laters ! All the best with the kids mom xD
Nephews are here to visit, so I'm having fun with the kids too....? o_O" lol *pinches those chubby cheeks* aaaaaaaaawwww~~~~ *A*


- nekoii

I just caught up with this yummy story three days ago only to find an update. Is this my day or what!

This story is definitely one of my favorites. Damien is such a sweetheart, with all the garbage that he had to expereince I'm glad that he found the love of his life in a good man like Scott. Damien is no pansy he can take the best of them! He may have been broken but he rebuilds himself. If only he can realize that it is the same thing when it comes to making his artworks. He stopped at nothing to get Scott but it was a mutual feeling. Scott could never hide it. He is such a gentleman, you don't find guys like that where I live! and yet at the same time he's adorable. He wants to help everyone and he's very kind/gentle even Grape Ape who is just too desperate. I also loved the whole grandma fiasco, she is definitely a dragon alright. But what i really like the most about these two is that both their families support them and have met each other and consent to the relationship. After all grandma can definitely understand and doesn't want her Scott to live in secrecy.

As for the side characters...can i tell you how much I love this chapter? Tons and Tons. James get's a chapter and we get insight on him. He too deserves love and if it's with Ryan (I truly hope so) I'll jump for joy. Their love doesn't have to be turbulent/dramatic or full of adventure it. They know each other and are very comfortable discussing any subjects. Plus, I love "Princess" as a pet name for James. After all he's gone through with having his heart broken by Damien (which wasn't meant to be but rather they have an unbreakable friendship)to the whole Gregg issue and now with the whole Grape Ape scheme. James deserves to be treated like a prince(ss).

I truly can't wait for the next chapter. i love reading on the boys development.