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for Flaming in the Dorms

by pesterme2

person vicxn
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woo great chapter.

I cant believe that a PRIEST actually lied for those boys, i dont know how i missed that last time, or whether i jus forgot but it winds me up something chronic.
Jus a quick review this time cos im in a rush myself lol. Jus wanna say that if ur late updating either story, dont rush urself. They are always worth the wait and we are lucky that u update at all. xxxxxx
ps can u tell im in a rush, bad grammar and txt speak lmao xxxxx
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, YAY, YAY, YAY for Scott kissing Dae in front of EVERYBODY!!!!!! And yay for mama for giving it to Dragon Lady! Altho now I kinda feel bad for granny! She also hid a big part of herself and if they (her and Scott) had both come clean, could have bonded even more.

I LOVE Pops!!!! He's too fucking funny! Winking at his own son by the limo when Scott was practically molesting him in front of everyone!

Anyway, GREAT chapter, as usual! Can't wait to read how everything goes back home for Dae. And now maybe Scott and granny can talk more openly.
person ReighChama
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think he should just show up, save the lil one from his big bag testimony and be like SURPRISE> and then he gets told the truth.

OR
he has to save him from the prewitt boy becuas he got out of bail sooner than he thought. >.< koay. my mind is in over drive. this was a good time for a chapter for me.. i just spent the last like 4 hours on the phone with my phone company to no avail >.<
person Mezzer52
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Weeee! Wonderful! Yay for happy-make-up smut, awkward Christmas conversations between Matriarchs, and a fumbling Scott dealing with Damien's Pops! A fantastic read! I enjoyed how Damien's mom really took it to Scott's grandmother and really called her out on the idiocy of the entire situation. And damn, considering your descriptions, that's a lot of sex the two of them had that day! LOL! Oh, to be a fly on their wall. ha! I'm excited/anxious about Damien's trip back home and how he will handle all of his past abusers. Part of me feels that if he can go through it alone, it will show case how much he's grown and the fortitude that he possesses; however, part of being in a commited relationship is sharing all facets of your life with that special someone, and not just the happy ones. I'm sure Scott wants to be there so much, if for nothing as simple as holding Damien's hand through out the ordeal and being his rock. Bleh, either way, I'm sure I'll enjoy reading it! Don't leave us with any particularly nasty cliff hangers though! :D Take care and enjoy writing the next bit!
person khayman
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad Scott and Damien made up so quick. if ever they hv a really serious spatt I don't think our sweet little Dae will be able to stand the pressure of it. Damien may come out as this really vibrant and strong persona but he seems to (at least to me) hv a very fragile core, a well placed blow may as well leave him completely broken.

just let me say it... YAY tongue lashing! tong lashing! way to go Mama, how u like that Granny from Hell? ;P no matter how well intentioned she might hv thought herself she deserved it! oh well, now that I'm pacified and everything's cool, let's just move on! lol

I'm relieved that Damien has finally agreed to press charges against his attackers. I believe it will be somewhat cathartic for him, cause even if he doesn't admit it to any1 (not even himself) he's been living enprisioned in this private little hell since his attack and he won't free himself of it if he doesn't face it. yeah it will be painfull to relive it, to ADMIT it, in front of strangers but it will ultimately take a weight of his shoulders and his heart that's been opressing him.
just please be gentle with our little Dae, don't make it overly painful for the sweety!

and now let's talk about serious business... how the hell did u manage to get yourself free, miss pesterme?! as far as I remember last time I left u tied to your chair and supposedly working on FitD! u can't escape your punishment like that! *frowns ups at pesterme2 and pounts* go back to work or I won't tell u again how your one of my favorite AFF authors and how Flaming in the Dorms is definitely the most entertaining story I'v read so far!

update soon! ^_~
person khayman
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh and I just gotta say I love, looove, Pops! his conversation with Scott was just hilarious, the man's just so out there. now that I mention it, this is gonna be one heck of an outrageous family! don't u think?
oh man just imagine it how it's gonna be a couple years from now... Scott and Dae happily together, married, of course, or Mama and Pops would hv Scotts head (and I'm not refering to the top one), coming to spend the hollidays at Granny's house, with Dae and Granny provoking each other, Dragon Lady grumbling at their antics while Scott snorts in amusing, and Mama and Pops throwing in their cup of tea to add to the crazyness... and then of course the elders of the family will gang up on Scott and Damien and rail them up cause they still hvn't granted them grandchildren and Pops will likely suggest that maybe Dae should move on to another stud since Scotts thingy doesn't seem to be doing it's job quite as well as it's supposed to... and then... then... a miracle will happen and Damien will wake up one day to find he's getting fatt, and each they he'll be getting fatter, and everybody will start teasing him about it and then one day 9 months latter he'll pop up a chubby little baby!!!

oh man! now see what u donne with that whole conversation between Pops and Scott about pills and preg?! now I can't stop imagining it and drooling over the thought and I really really really wanna see it happen cause I'm a tottal sucker for mpreg (did I ever tell u I'm a sucker for mpreg?!) and can really really see it Damien getting a really really round tummy and then popping a cute chubby little baby boy and then u obviously could't stop the story there and u would hv to create a whole new story about Scott and Dae's baby boy and his gorgeous future hunk and his also future mpreg!!!!

*gasps how of breath* gosh now I'm tired *wipes her brow, looks at pesterme with starry eyes and gives her a brilliant, hopeful smile* that's totally how it's gonna happen, right? right?!
ok... I gonna stop now, way too much caffeine! ^_^
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy the story. Damian always makes me laugh and eagerly await the next chapter.
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pops is completely outrageous. I just wanted to put that out there. You know this was a super hot warm and fuzzy chapter, so I won't go on and on about that. But seriously...light up Christmas sweaters? Love it! I'm still on pins and needles about that ring Scotts carrying around, but I got no complaints.
person Gwengwel
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My computer crash....again...and it's my fault...again!
I just have to look at it and he crash mouhahahaha!!!
I'm so proud of me!
Yep!

Chappy in three part this time.
Wow, bravo Mom! She can't be really direct, frank and cold when his little Dee-lee doesn't act mature. Heeee, I'm glad that it's was Damien and not me. I'm a little afraid of her. She's right about what she say to D but she don't know all the truth. Sad but I agree with Damien with this, it's better for the future family relation.
Granny confrontation with Damien let me with an unpleasant aftertaste. They talk (ok insult each other loll) and say frankly what they thing about each other but it's not finish pleasantly, and I don't point here the sudden apparition of Scott.
Who him, completely disappointed me. He better learn to control his temper. Not sure about their future at long term if he continue to bless Damien. Yeah, D was an asshole but you have never a excuse to touch someone. I'm really angry against him.

Glad that Scott didn't ask the *question* this night. It's too soon, their young and never experimented real bump in their couple before this. It's if you can pass this and grow up at a couple and human after that, that determine if you're good for a long term relationship. (wow I sound intelligent here!! O.o)

Gwengwel






person Gwengwel
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And I miss James!!!!
Where's James!
I want James!
James.............