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I pretty much had two perfect work days in a row and starting my weekend with a new chapter from Flaming was just the icing on my smexy cake. What is up with Ryan? Gay supporter or secret gay? If he's a secret gay, we need to know way more about his story. Maybe he could hook up with James. That would be hawt.

I shall take very good care of my leatherier Adam on my holiday. Bad bad priest! How can they go on about forgiveness n stuff then pull shit like that.
Im glad that Dae and James are finally friends again. Are we going to have a repeat roommate situation with Ryan and James, huh huh? Ryan seems quite sexy, in a totally laid back, cant be bothered way lol.
Gah, Im soooo tired, my neighbours had an all night party (till 6am) n i had to be up early for work. Had to stay up wen i saw Flaming tho lol. Well, Ill have another chapter of AC and maybe this to look forward to wen i get back so cya xxxxxx

JAMESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!
Missed you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nothing more to say.



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Oh Ok since you ask so gently, I going to comment a little more! (my ego is well thank loll)

Yeah, I noticed the "don't really talk" thing. If you don't resolve the problem...the shit's going to blow up one day and it's not going to be nice and clean. Relationship's difficult, you don't always want to mentioning again the problem (I'm an expert at this, yep) but you can't think that your couple's going to work like this. BUT...you better give them their happy-ever-after ending. If you don't do this, you don't pass by *the list*, don't reclaim 200$ by passing GO and go directly in prison on charge of cruelty to your readership. Take this mouhahahahaha!!!

Thank to explain the Mom-Granny thing.

What's going on in James life? I have a bad feeling about this "tutorial" thing. Did he do the I-try-to-forget-Damien-so-I-sleep-with-a-bad-guy-that-treat-me-like-shit???
Sneaky little twink this James to put Damien in this art classes. And I missed how he put Damien in a corner.
I want him to be happy so much. I really like him .

But you were not obliged to bring back David. No, serious, we could do without him.

And Ryan?? What's happen to him too???

Growl again pesterme2...........you enjoy to much in your two stories to make people on pins and needles.

Gwengwel.

You held on and the tension is rising! Yes these boys are young but the love is evident and strong. Its good to be back, i was starting to suffer withdrawls from not being here. I shall be back for more!

Sorry only short review from me today. To your Awesomeness, it's nearly 2 in the morning and i'm wacked, but i just had to read this before going to bed. LOVE IT. And who is James' misterious lover/guy having sex with him...we shall see.

Thank you huggins, longer review next time promise.

Aduial

David's such an ass >.> But yay for Scott and then Ryan coming to the rescue! :D I like Ryan ^_^ He seems very cool. And it's funny how he keeps looking at Playgirl, ha ha. I'm also curious about that guy James was meeting... Seemed mighty suspicious! XD I'm glad him and Damien are friends again now though :) Their conversation was really nice ^_^ I look forwards to the next chapter! :D Please keep up the good work!

Damien you never learn, do you? When something's important, you don't just blow it off since it's easier than pushing the matter. Obviously something's bugging James; from the zoning in front of the TV to the over-reaction to the question about if he'd ever been in love, he's throwing out major signals that something's wrong and that he needs to talk. But do you push? Nope! Take the easy route, Dae, like you always do! Forget that you learned during the pre-X-mas vacation drama with Scott that there are just some things that need to be talked about, even when it's not easy to do so. And go James for your insight! Great way to see a situation clearly for what it is and the impact it has. That said, who are you playing 'hide the sausage' with? And is it blackmail? You're not being forced to do the dirty with someone in order to keep the guy away from Dae, are you? Or are you prostituting yourself? Major questions are adding up for your story! Oh, and Damien, speaking of your never learning, did your provoking Granny not teach you anything? Don't provoke the animals! When you do, not only do you get screwed, but so does your Gorgeous. Haven't you figured that out yet? And you go too, Ryan! Nice way to save the day if I do say so myself. The best friends just rock it this chapter. And finally, you Miss pesterme2. Nope, not sick of it all yet. Maybe some day in the far distant future, though I can't even imagine that day coming, but we're cool now. And wow did you get carried away with the Barbie and Ken analogy! LOL. But it was still cute, so you're excused.

james is back!!! and uhm... why do i suddenly want james and ryan to fall in love? man, you wrote ryan like he's such a hunk. and wouldn't it be cute if they would go on a double date with damien and scott? i don't care if ryan is straight, maybe he can prove that falling in love is not merely based on getting attracted physically but actually caring for someone. and then the physical attraction would sink in next. *wink wink*

i think that david dude is a closet case, i'm with ryan on that. and i admire damien for outwitting the moron and how he managed to keep a presence of mind when scott was seconds away from clobbering the bastard. but the cliffy... i thought i'd get to read more of your hot damien-scott smexing. but this part is fabulous, bb. love it! and how come i'm missing granny and her devious schemes? but yay for being back at the dorms!

Ok, I had this LONG FUCKING REVIEW and AFF just ate it!!!!! Grrrrrr Ok, gonna try to remember all I wrote. Great chapter, I really enjoyed it. Couldn't remember if this was at the beginning of my review or at the end. You know, my short term memory sucks. Long term too come to think of it.

Ok, I will miss Granny and Dragon Lady, I must admit. Hopefully we'll see them from time to time? And I was reading your comment to a reviewer and was reminded that Scott never gave Dae his present for Xmas. Maybe for Valentine's Day?

Why was James so catatonic in the tv room? And what's up w/him and this secret guy? And what's with Ryan; James is right: no straight guy will be checking out naked pics of guys! Right?

Funny what James did to Damien's schedule!

What a fuctard (my new fave word, you'll check w/Dae and make sure he doesn't mind if I steal his word?) that scumbag David is. Luckily Scott came by at that time otherwise I think Dae would be mince meat by now. And Ryan surprisd me by standing up for Scott and Dae also.

Anyway, I think the other review was longer. But whatever. It was a GREAT chapter and I can't wait to read the next one!

JAMES!!!!!! *tackles the twink to the couch and snugles up* missed ya!! *kiss kiss kiss* sooooo much! *let's go of James and starts jumping up and down* he's back! he's back! he's back! *looks at the twink and tackles him again while he looks at her likes she's crazy* teehee! =3

finally it seems like Damien has his best friend back, he sure needs James support in the midst of so many jerks. tho James behaviour when he talked to that unknown guy was extremely suspicious. o_O what in the hell did James get himself into?
David... why oh why did the bastard hv to pop up so soon? was he lurking around in the halls just waiting to catch Damien alone so he could harrass him?! the jerk!
I gotta say I absolutely love Ryan now, he's a total knight in shining armor, so to speak! ^^ he completely bombed down David. way to go champ! I'm definitely a Ryan fan now! lol
btw Damien is such a horny dog! if he keeps it up like this he's gonna break his toy (Scott's cock) someday!
hmmmm I don't know if I would like to live with those 2; in one hand they would provide a LOT of eye candy and hot situations, but in the other they would make EXTREMELY jealous since they wouldn't let me participate!! *looks at the horny duo and pouts* XXD

MASTER! *looks at Pesterme2 with reverent eyes* teach me your Houdini tricks so I can get my ass outta work when I don't wanna be there! I'll compensate u 4 it. I promise I'll let u keep the hunks in your bed and even provide for some more! what do u say?! *looks at Pesterme expectantly*
and let me say you'r wrong in your assumption that I'm not between the AC fans ranks. I'm there alright, an mpreg hound like me wouldn't miss it for anything! XD
it's just I hv this tiny little problem you see... I'm EXTREMELY LAZY when it comes to writting so I've only been reviewing FitD *looks up at Pesterme guiltily* sowy!!! but I swear I've been giving u top votes on both of them! and I promise I'm gonna review 1 of these days. just wait and see, when u least expect it I'm gonna tackle u from that side too! XD

hey share some of those chocolates with me, will u? and if u update soon i'll give u a jar of chocolate chip cookies next time! ^_~