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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay Sex fest....when are we going to get the wedding? Glad you are better, been waiting for this because it is totally awesome. It completely blew my bad mood away, whoopi. Hugginses to you. *Bows to brilliance*
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I kno ive said this before but i absolutely love Dae's foul mouth and how you manage to slip in my fave little phrases each chapter. love u and hope ur feeling better xxx
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok. Give me a moment to wipe the drool from the keyboard and then I’ll review. Promise.
There. I think I got it all. In fact, I really hope I got it all. Wouldn’t want to short out my computer here. That would be so bad. It would be the end of my reading Flaming and AC and Partner and . . . Well, it would just be bad and it’d be all your fault because the reason I was drooling is your story!
I so didn’t see Damien bringing in a vibrator to use on Scott. He surprised me there. Good surprise, but surprised! And a plug-in one instead of a battery-powered one? To quote you: Holy Shizzah! Those things are STRONG and vibrate way faster and harder than their battery-powered siblings.
And I LOVE that Scott told Mama “your ‘baby’ done wore me out”! Go Scott. And Mama deserves it for bringing up the subject. If she didn’t want the answer, she should never have asked the question. Even better was Scott’s talk with Daddy. Yes, I know it was shorter and with much less content, but I just love that man. And Daddy with a serious tone? That’s when you know something is really important!
Oh, and I know I don’t normally cuss during reviews, but does Dae really think that James won’t figure out that he changed his password to ‘fuckyou2James’? That’s actually really predictable for Dae’s personality! But then, I guess Dae hadn’t learned from picking the first predictable password, huh?
And once again onto Damien’s inability to learn from his past mistakes! He noticed a weird tone in Scott’s voice when Scott said, “You’ve been playing me like a king on a chess board since the day we met,” and he just ignores it because he wants to get laid! Even without noticing the weird tone, the words would say a lot. This is not something to ignore!
Oh, and I love the race to the food with the chance of being able to suck the other’s cock as the reward! So just exactly who they are.
So, I liked this chapter. Could you tell? Yep, I did!
There. I think I got it all. In fact, I really hope I got it all. Wouldn’t want to short out my computer here. That would be so bad. It would be the end of my reading Flaming and AC and Partner and . . . Well, it would just be bad and it’d be all your fault because the reason I was drooling is your story!
I so didn’t see Damien bringing in a vibrator to use on Scott. He surprised me there. Good surprise, but surprised! And a plug-in one instead of a battery-powered one? To quote you: Holy Shizzah! Those things are STRONG and vibrate way faster and harder than their battery-powered siblings.
And I LOVE that Scott told Mama “your ‘baby’ done wore me out”! Go Scott. And Mama deserves it for bringing up the subject. If she didn’t want the answer, she should never have asked the question. Even better was Scott’s talk with Daddy. Yes, I know it was shorter and with much less content, but I just love that man. And Daddy with a serious tone? That’s when you know something is really important!
Oh, and I know I don’t normally cuss during reviews, but does Dae really think that James won’t figure out that he changed his password to ‘fuckyou2James’? That’s actually really predictable for Dae’s personality! But then, I guess Dae hadn’t learned from picking the first predictable password, huh?
And once again onto Damien’s inability to learn from his past mistakes! He noticed a weird tone in Scott’s voice when Scott said, “You’ve been playing me like a king on a chess board since the day we met,” and he just ignores it because he wants to get laid! Even without noticing the weird tone, the words would say a lot. This is not something to ignore!
Oh, and I love the race to the food with the chance of being able to suck the other’s cock as the reward! So just exactly who they are.
So, I liked this chapter. Could you tell? Yep, I did!
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did you write this scene specifically because you know how much I love a good vibrator in the ass? Or maybe it was just coincidence. It would be a little strange if you knew about my thing for vibrators...what with me not telling you and all. That would make you some kinda stalker. Which I suppose is actually kinda hot. I've always wanted a stalker. And a writer stalker who finds out all of my kinks and adds them to stories is pretty sweet. So yay for me.
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha!!!! Fuckyou2James - hysterical password!!! Great chapter, lots of lovin' goin' on, from Scott and Dae and from Dae's parents to Scott, great job!
Oops! I don't know if that sounded right about the loving - oh well, you know what I mean! lol
Oops! I don't know if that sounded right about the loving - oh well, you know what I mean! lol
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yaaaaaaaay u'r back! and better! ^^
*yawns* well lets do a quickie (review mind u) b4 bed, I'm zonked =.=
finally Scott got to know y his Energizer likes taking it up the ass so much. eh eh eh way to go Damien! got him scared 4 a moment! u bad boy u! lol
as always u write some of the hottest sex scenes on AFF (I always end up so fucking jealous! I want it 2!! XD), prognostic 4 the night alerts 4 some very nice dreams! =3
can't w8 to see what's gonna happen now they'r back to the dorms, hopefully nothing 2 serious r 2 dangerous, and what the heck is James cooking up on his side? all that mistery didn't sound all that good...
suggestion: u know what u should do? u should let all the dorm jerks who like to pick up on Damien get a tiny little (or maybe really big) glimpse of some Dae/Scott smexin so they could see what thay missing and die of jealousy! yup there is Dae getting all that good sex while the majority of the idiots hv to run around sucking their thumbs! that should the quite enlightening for a couple of them! ;P
oh wow it ended up not being such a quickie after all...
update soon *throws a chocolate and coconut cookie at pesterme2's lap* there's more in w8 if u update real quick!
*yawns* well lets do a quickie (review mind u) b4 bed, I'm zonked =.=
finally Scott got to know y his Energizer likes taking it up the ass so much. eh eh eh way to go Damien! got him scared 4 a moment! u bad boy u! lol
as always u write some of the hottest sex scenes on AFF (I always end up so fucking jealous! I want it 2!! XD), prognostic 4 the night alerts 4 some very nice dreams! =3
can't w8 to see what's gonna happen now they'r back to the dorms, hopefully nothing 2 serious r 2 dangerous, and what the heck is James cooking up on his side? all that mistery didn't sound all that good...
suggestion: u know what u should do? u should let all the dorm jerks who like to pick up on Damien get a tiny little (or maybe really big) glimpse of some Dae/Scott smexin so they could see what thay missing and die of jealousy! yup there is Dae getting all that good sex while the majority of the idiots hv to run around sucking their thumbs! that should the quite enlightening for a couple of them! ;P
oh wow it ended up not being such a quickie after all...
update soon *throws a chocolate and coconut cookie at pesterme2's lap* there's more in w8 if u update real quick!
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*flail* *drool* *nose-bleed* *faint*
Hmmm, oh I just love these two horny boys! LOL. And I just love how you describe their physical activities. Fantastic!
In regards to plot stuff, that sucks that Damien got transferred out of his classes and can't get what he wants anymore. I'm excited to see what he produces from the art class though. I can't remember if you specified a type of medium like clay or paints for the art class, but can you just imagine Scott posing for Damien for some art project and the fun that would ensue? Exciting! lol. I digress though, I was supposed to be commenting on plot...So is this the groundwork for the next story-arc? Damien being "forced" to go to therapy sessions, and the potential fall out between Scott and Damien as they argue about that? Hmm, I hate it when the boys argue, they can be so dumb sometimes. lol. And then also this potential stalker/crazed psycho from Damien's past who got posted on bail? How is this guy going to play a role? Is he going to team up with Damien's old roommate or something? Ahh, scary! Scott better be going back to the gym and working out if he's getting all soft now so he can better beat up these idiots. :P
The wait was definitely worth it, and I don't mind that length of time, as long as you eventually post a chapter and don't abandon the story until it's done. Anywho, hope you're doing well and that you enjoy writing the next chapter! Take care!
Hmmm, oh I just love these two horny boys! LOL. And I just love how you describe their physical activities. Fantastic!
In regards to plot stuff, that sucks that Damien got transferred out of his classes and can't get what he wants anymore. I'm excited to see what he produces from the art class though. I can't remember if you specified a type of medium like clay or paints for the art class, but can you just imagine Scott posing for Damien for some art project and the fun that would ensue? Exciting! lol. I digress though, I was supposed to be commenting on plot...So is this the groundwork for the next story-arc? Damien being "forced" to go to therapy sessions, and the potential fall out between Scott and Damien as they argue about that? Hmm, I hate it when the boys argue, they can be so dumb sometimes. lol. And then also this potential stalker/crazed psycho from Damien's past who got posted on bail? How is this guy going to play a role? Is he going to team up with Damien's old roommate or something? Ahh, scary! Scott better be going back to the gym and working out if he's getting all soft now so he can better beat up these idiots. :P
The wait was definitely worth it, and I don't mind that length of time, as long as you eventually post a chapter and don't abandon the story until it's done. Anywho, hope you're doing well and that you enjoy writing the next chapter! Take care!
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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man that was a fucking cliff hanger! All that pent up sex energy through out the chapter and then you cut off right before it. Good chapter though and I swear James totally loves Dea. I just read the last two chapters and I found the last bit with Granny pretty funny. I kind of wish you would have done a chapter about Dea while he was back home though I think that would have help to explain things better unless you mean to keep that a bit more in the dark. Up to you obviously. Good work keep it up I can't wait to read more.
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This one didn't seem so laid back either! Very emotional and intense! Its like you're hovering on the edge of a cliff, waiting to push your characters, (and your readers) over it! Keep up the awesome work!
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Glad I finally had time to catch up... AMAZING! I love how this is going and was rooting for Scott proposing. Fantastic writing and chapters, and I can't wait for the next ones!