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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I love Mr. Baker and Dr. Lieberman! Such great guys! Keep up the awesome writing!!!
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Boo!
yaay you're back
I am back
we are all back!!
>.< I unno why I said that. I have nothing really intellectual today to add but to say that it was written great [ as usual!]
ta!
yaay you're back
I am back
we are all back!!
>.< I unno why I said that. I have nothing really intellectual today to add but to say that it was written great [ as usual!]
ta!
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A gay art teacher and gay shrink huh? Guess that will at least give them perspective on what Dae and Scott are going though! Still, wasn’t very smart of Mr. Banks to say anything really. Since Dae obviously hasn’t been able to keep himself in the closet, it’s a risk thinking he can keep the secret about other inhabitants. Overall, though, I think I’m going to like Mr. Banks.
Now, ‘Basketball Groper Boy’? Really? Does he grope them one at a time or in pairs? Bet his own balls seem small after groping basketballs.
Oh, and if I ever draw the ‘fuck with Damien’ card, how long do I get him for? Are we talking about just a quickie or do you loan him out for days at a time? Oh, and is there a ‘fuck with Scott’ card too? Or even better, a ‘fuck with Damien and Scott at the same time’ card? That’s the one I really need. Of course, I’d promise to wait until they’re both at least in their early twenties. Really!
I definitely approve of Scott’s friends. They have their heads screwed on right. I’m a bit surprised there’s not at least one asshole in the bunch – or at least not yet – but it’s also a nice change from the standard storyline that most authors would go with at this point where Scott’s friends would all turn out to be homophobic pricks and that would be the next big challenge that he and Damien would have to face.
Oh, Lord is Steven going to be trouble! Scott, wake up and realize when someone’s flirting with you and trying to sabotage your relationship with your Dae! I understand that Scott’s a nice guy, but he’s also quite obtuse at times. And, while Scott may dislike him now, I bet you have it in store for that to change. I can so see a coming argument between Scott and Damien and Scott flinging out, “Well, at least Steven’s interested in the same things I am” during it. Boy will that be bad.
I will say I am relieved to see Damien has opened up to Scott a bit more, even if you only casually mention it. Beyond it’s being good for their relationship, it’s just plain good for Damien. Now if he could just learn that it’s okay to have vulnerabilities! After all, if he could take all he could get of Scott taking care of him, he needs to realize that’s going to include emotionally as well as physically. Oh, and it would also be good for him to learn to pick up on the cues people send his way!
Oh, and you so have to include Dae’s birthday licking and spanking in the next chapter if at all possible. I mean, not if it won’t go with the rest of the chapter, I’ll accept that if it’s how you feel, but if it even remotely fits, it needs to be included. Talk about hawt!
Dr. Lieberman is the bomb! He’s so exactly what Damien needs. Heck, he’s what most teens need these days: a clear, concise, shocking look at who exactly they are and who they could become if they don’t change. BTW, is he Jewish? With that name, I always think he is. Maybe that’s just me projecting and you haven’t even thought about it, but I so wondered. And his technique just worked so perfectly without Damien even realizing it! Gotta be impressed by that.
Heartbreaking about the art thing. I hope, in the end, he ends up going after his dream again. I can just see it ten years down the road and Scott being more nervous about Damien’s first big showing at a gallery in New York than Damien is. He’d be dithering about what Dae should wear and brushing Dae’s hair even in the limo on the way to the show. Would be so great and just so them.
Sorry if this review is too long and boring. Unfortunately this is what happens when I review while I read. But I like to make sure I don't forget anything!
Now, ‘Basketball Groper Boy’? Really? Does he grope them one at a time or in pairs? Bet his own balls seem small after groping basketballs.
Oh, and if I ever draw the ‘fuck with Damien’ card, how long do I get him for? Are we talking about just a quickie or do you loan him out for days at a time? Oh, and is there a ‘fuck with Scott’ card too? Or even better, a ‘fuck with Damien and Scott at the same time’ card? That’s the one I really need. Of course, I’d promise to wait until they’re both at least in their early twenties. Really!
I definitely approve of Scott’s friends. They have their heads screwed on right. I’m a bit surprised there’s not at least one asshole in the bunch – or at least not yet – but it’s also a nice change from the standard storyline that most authors would go with at this point where Scott’s friends would all turn out to be homophobic pricks and that would be the next big challenge that he and Damien would have to face.
Oh, Lord is Steven going to be trouble! Scott, wake up and realize when someone’s flirting with you and trying to sabotage your relationship with your Dae! I understand that Scott’s a nice guy, but he’s also quite obtuse at times. And, while Scott may dislike him now, I bet you have it in store for that to change. I can so see a coming argument between Scott and Damien and Scott flinging out, “Well, at least Steven’s interested in the same things I am” during it. Boy will that be bad.
I will say I am relieved to see Damien has opened up to Scott a bit more, even if you only casually mention it. Beyond it’s being good for their relationship, it’s just plain good for Damien. Now if he could just learn that it’s okay to have vulnerabilities! After all, if he could take all he could get of Scott taking care of him, he needs to realize that’s going to include emotionally as well as physically. Oh, and it would also be good for him to learn to pick up on the cues people send his way!
Oh, and you so have to include Dae’s birthday licking and spanking in the next chapter if at all possible. I mean, not if it won’t go with the rest of the chapter, I’ll accept that if it’s how you feel, but if it even remotely fits, it needs to be included. Talk about hawt!
Dr. Lieberman is the bomb! He’s so exactly what Damien needs. Heck, he’s what most teens need these days: a clear, concise, shocking look at who exactly they are and who they could become if they don’t change. BTW, is he Jewish? With that name, I always think he is. Maybe that’s just me projecting and you haven’t even thought about it, but I so wondered. And his technique just worked so perfectly without Damien even realizing it! Gotta be impressed by that.
Heartbreaking about the art thing. I hope, in the end, he ends up going after his dream again. I can just see it ten years down the road and Scott being more nervous about Damien’s first big showing at a gallery in New York than Damien is. He’d be dithering about what Dae should wear and brushing Dae’s hair even in the limo on the way to the show. Would be so great and just so them.
Sorry if this review is too long and boring. Unfortunately this is what happens when I review while I read. But I like to make sure I don't forget anything!
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg...i love Dr. Leiberman :D
i had a feeling he'd be something out of ordinary, but this is just grand ^^
great work as always (: looking forward to some extra-Leiberman encounters and what this new guy who's showed up do towards Scott.
i had a feeling he'd be something out of ordinary, but this is just grand ^^
great work as always (: looking forward to some extra-Leiberman encounters and what this new guy who's showed up do towards Scott.
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this chapter is amazing. i love where this story is going. why do i have a feeling that the new character steven mccoy is going to stir things up a bit for scott?
poor damien. he seems to be having a hard time dealing with his inner demons. i hope it's a battle he won't lose. but i have a feeling dr. leiberman, that awesome shrink if i may say so, is just the right person to do the job. that doctor is so cool, seems like he knew every switch damien has and knows how to play damien's cards. a little push here, a little shove there, and a pull here and he'll probably get damien going to the right direction. and him and mr. banks? that was way cool revelation.
i'm worried about james too. i think damien is getting a taste of his own medicine with james. his friend seem to be closing up on him. this is awesome awesome story. keep it going.
poor damien. he seems to be having a hard time dealing with his inner demons. i hope it's a battle he won't lose. but i have a feeling dr. leiberman, that awesome shrink if i may say so, is just the right person to do the job. that doctor is so cool, seems like he knew every switch damien has and knows how to play damien's cards. a little push here, a little shove there, and a pull here and he'll probably get damien going to the right direction. and him and mr. banks? that was way cool revelation.
i'm worried about james too. i think damien is getting a taste of his own medicine with james. his friend seem to be closing up on him. this is awesome awesome story. keep it going.
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are u feeling ok, was getting a bit worried bout ya.
I dont like Steven. I think he's jus out to cause trouble for Dae and get his hooks into Scott. You should jus give him to Gregg and they can be bastards together.
I like Mr Banks and i especially like Dr Lieberman. Im jus guessing because i know nothing about pschiatry but was Dae's little explosion planned so he could work out what exactly he needed to work on with Dae.
When Dae said the whole session had been a waste of time and the doc gave a little smile im assuming he thought different.
I loved this chapter cos it really made me think (and it didnt even hurt when i did).
Oh yeah and whats going on with James and Gregg, i hope James is ok. We didnt see Ryan at all this chappie either, i think he should be gay too and live happily ever after with James, just a suggestion lol. till next time. xxxx
I dont like Steven. I think he's jus out to cause trouble for Dae and get his hooks into Scott. You should jus give him to Gregg and they can be bastards together.
I like Mr Banks and i especially like Dr Lieberman. Im jus guessing because i know nothing about pschiatry but was Dae's little explosion planned so he could work out what exactly he needed to work on with Dae.
When Dae said the whole session had been a waste of time and the doc gave a little smile im assuming he thought different.
I loved this chapter cos it really made me think (and it didnt even hurt when i did).
Oh yeah and whats going on with James and Gregg, i hope James is ok. We didnt see Ryan at all this chappie either, i think he should be gay too and live happily ever after with James, just a suggestion lol. till next time. xxxx
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He he, Dr. Leiberman seems quite cool - at least he's not really forcing Damien to talk about stuff he doesn't want to :) I'm still curious about James and Gregg though... It seems so suspicious!! Please keep up the great work! ^_^
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just totally left long review and stupid iPhone lost it. So to summarize...
Steven is a total freak and he's hitting on Scott and if you don't I'll him off I will. That crazy twink James is up to no good. First he wrangles Dae into art class, although I think it will actually be good for him, and then he won't even talk to him and he's up to something with Greg and just WTF! The psychologist is probably a secret genius. At first I thoght he was a total ass, but I think he has Dae's number. He may just get through the wall. Now as for you Missy...ifyou have any ideas about splitting up Scott and Dae, you can just forget them. Don't think just because you stalked me a little and gave me that silver bullet now you can get away with pissing me off. I will get medeivil on you. Then we'll see who gets stalked.
Steven is a total freak and he's hitting on Scott and if you don't I'll him off I will. That crazy twink James is up to no good. First he wrangles Dae into art class, although I think it will actually be good for him, and then he won't even talk to him and he's up to something with Greg and just WTF! The psychologist is probably a secret genius. At first I thoght he was a total ass, but I think he has Dae's number. He may just get through the wall. Now as for you Missy...ifyou have any ideas about splitting up Scott and Dae, you can just forget them. Don't think just because you stalked me a little and gave me that silver bullet now you can get away with pissing me off. I will get medeivil on you. Then we'll see who gets stalked.
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That Steven is going to be a trouble making bitch, isn't he? I liked the art teacher and really like the shrink, I think he knows exactly what he's doing. Great job.
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't like Psychiatrist.....they think they know everything. Nasty stupid people. Poor Dae, we know he's stubborn but people really shouldn't force him into things.
Still maybe we can have nice birthday chapter next.
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Still maybe we can have nice birthday chapter next.
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