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Holy shit! Lol, why is Scott always walking in at the wrong moments? Haha, and I have to wonder how you have sooo many chapters when the cats out of the bag but I don't care. its soooo good

Now Scott is pissing the fuck out of me. I know he’s hurt and I let the slut thing go but why is he getting so worked up about Darlene? Geez…is he that nervous about his grandmother? He hurt s Damien way to much that this poor guy thinks he’s always wrong. He isn’t. Scott needs to grow a pair and admit his feelings. Moving out was just so low. At least Damien has a friend like James…gah…I’m so mad. I never get this mad about a character like Scott because I just always want them to get together and I understand being a quarterback or catholic or a “straight” confused guy and all is hard but it seems I’ve fallen for Damien so hard…he’s so cute! Grrr…I hate empathy. I write my reviews as I read along and by the time I got to Scotts p.o.v. I forgave him. I forgot he was relying on Darlene to make him straight but dammit, COMMUNICATE this to Damien. He won’t always be forgiving. It was so hot when he beat up Charles and said, MY Dae. Hehehe. One thing he said did bother me though. Yes, he’s young and maybe he won’t be with Dae forever, but he will be gay forever and I hope he learns to choose soon between that and his grandmother. He should leet Damien help with that…he obviously has no problems with himself.

LOL! James is hilarious. My second favorite line: “Now why don’t you both pull your heads out of your asses and fix this instead of acting like two lovesick retards who can’t figure out that one plus one equals a goddamn couple!”
About damn fucking time! GEEZ! It took a third person to drill that in their heads. Hells yea…the scene in the bed was so cuuute! And I guess his grandmother logic does make sense since she's bound to croak soon and he can cross that bridge when he gets there. If it's good for Damien its good good for me. Im just glad their FINALLY together...can't wait for the bed scenes. lol, it's so weird (but HOT) having the jock as a virgin and the flamming gay twink as the experienced of the two, but obviously scott will still be on top since dae likes bottoming...

Dae-Lee? Heh…heh…His mom’s funny, I can see where he gets his strong personality from and it was cute when he started getting his accent back talking to his mom. I love country accents. That’s a weird expression…turnip truck? Lol…I wonder if that ever existed. She is a very sharp woman catching onto Scott’s dilemma but I guess she has to be to protect her son. I feel bad for Scott, I really do, but maybe this interrogation is what he needs to kick his ass into gear. Go mama! Lol, I love this line: “That’s too many eyes boy, I just got two.” Witty, witty. But man, I nearly flipped when Scott told her off…go scotty! Their conversation was very, very good. I liked it a lot…make an honest man out of Dae-lee…mama don’t play. As long as Scott is willing to tell everyone except his grandmother and not deny it when she finds out, then all is good. I bet his grandmother is pretty chill, he’s just making a big deal outta nothing…or maybe he isn’t, but most old people are nice…most

Holy Flamingo...chapter 11 was hawt! Wow…in a hospital bed?
It was well worth the wait. Well worth it.
But Awwww…is James jealous? He really does need someone though…but I never thought his feelings for Damien were strong. Didn’t he push Damien to get with Scott? Or did he do that because he loved him and wanted what’s best for him? Or just plain feels like a third wheel?
HAHAH! I’m a genious…he does love him! What a good person…I couldn’t do that. Awww…IS TREY AN OPTION? Well fuck…you’ve written 29 chapters I can’t go around throwing ideas but I reallllly hope he gets someone.
Gah…these guys fight all the effin time…my lord. Lol. But I love it when they make up. Granny is so direct, isn;t she? Gotta love her 2

Holy shit, he dug himself in too deep now and that grandmother is too nosy and controllng...why does he have to meet a girl now? UGH!

Lol, I laughed so hard when Damien told Scott to ‘bend down further’. He’s not bashful at all is he? I should’ve known from the title that it was going to be hilarious. But it surprised me how relaxed Scott was. Given, a homophobe wouldn’t allow a gay man like Damien to live with him but most guys, even if open minded, are still a little fidgety….but Scott is AWESOME! He does a whole lot of things regular straight guys don’t but he is a catholic afterall…

The ending proves that in a way he’s attracted to Damien with all the blushing and staring at his lips and grinning at his flattering comments….its just he’s not the sex he prefers so it’s good that Damien loves drag. He’s really gonna open Scott’s eyes and I don’t think—or hope—Scott will be mad when he finds out he’s a boy. But I’m really gonna love the sexual tension since they can’t have sex with him in drag. Hehe I love Damien though. Gah, he’s so incredible…just himself at all times, its endearing. James is a cutie too…I hope he gets someone
Favorite line: “They make pills for that, ya know?” lol Glad the first chapter was long. I hope the rest are too

another great chapter ^^
I like this story more and more with every new chapter, every new twist in the plot (:

almost hard to believe that Dae might give up on his bitchy ways at some point, at least that's the feeling i got from some of his inner monologues in this chapter, but then again it'd be interesting to see this new Dae. how he'd be and how he'd react to those around him, David for an instance hehe~

and i have to say - this new gay guy who has popped up, sorry for the rudeness, but he seems to be such a hoe. if i'd let my mind wonder, i'd give a wild guess that he'll pull down something big towards Scott, which would lead to Dea pulling the fuck with the Steven card of the week hehe :D if that really will roll out this way - i'm almost dying to see what will happen hehe~

and absolute LOVE towards the Dae's and Scott's 'time together' at the end of the chapter. those confessions of Dae's were so heart warming in a way for me, because they really reminded me about myself in a way. Amazing work on it and i love the way you've wrote it (i said that already, didn't i? hehe well then extra time won't hurt, ne? :D)

looking forward to the next chapter ^

~ Lex-Lee =*.*=

Awesome chapter! Ha! Love the way Damien handled little Steven. Not to mention the way he dealt with David. I'm so in love with this character, he kicks ass. I'm still worried about James though. I can see he cares a great deal about Damien, but I'm not sure if he's in denial that he feels more than friendship. I hope he finds his own mate soon. And Scott is just an awesome boyfriend. I wonder what he intends to do with the ring he'd bought for Damien. Will he still give it to him and ask for his hand in marriage? I love this story to pieces.

Aww, yay, I'm glad Trey and Terry were looking out for Dae ^_^ They seem like good friends :) And yay about Damien being awesome at drawing still! XD Hopefully he can easily make up missing one assignment then :) Looking forward to the next chapter :) Please keep up the good work!