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for Flaming in the Dorms

by pesterme2

person Doppelganger
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hummm, I hope Damien, with Liberty's help, can find a way to get Steve out of the picture; with the exception of murder, of course. We can't have Scott being raped by the persistant Grape Ape, after all! As always, glad to see an update for this story, and can't wait for the next!
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Man, things are going to explode soon and I can't wait! Glad to see that this is doing so well! Did you know about a site called www . fictionpress . com? that is also a place to put out your work and you can respind to your reviewers there!
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! finally! a new FitD chapter! I'm so happy I could cry *a little happy tear appears at the corner of khay's eye*
the first part was just... HOT! HOT! HOT! damn those boys know how to spice up a date! lol
tho I admit I was kinda worried they might get caught and something unpleasant unfold.
and I'm starting to like Liberty more and more. I can't believe she actually convinced Damien to go on his date with a plug up his ass.
I was like 'is a girl supposed to talk about that with a guy? even if they're friends?' O.o if it was me it would be so awkward! I'd get red as a beet before even mentioning anything! lol

and that Steve guy... what a sneaky little cunt!! the little cockhound just doesn't wanna give up, huh? makes me wanna smack him soooo bad! I couldn't stop laughing tho when James just went ahead and kissed the beejesus out of him right in front of everybody. I could just picture the whole scene perfectly, it was freacking hilarious!
oh god I'd really missed reading about Dae & Scott, they'r just so entertaining... and lovable... and so damn sexy!

*let's out a content little sight* I feel refreshed now! just keep them coming, I don't think I can manage another FitD dryspell.
update soon hun!
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Grrr! Had a whole review that AFF just ate up! Ok, Reader's Digest version: YAY!!!!!!! You're back from your sabbatical!!! You've been missed! lol

I don't blame Dae at all for the green monster; jealousy is a horrible emotion and I would feel the exact same way. And worst of all, Scott is so oblivious to the Grape Ape's trying to get his purple claws all over him! And now Dae probably feels as if he has to follow Scott everywhere just so he can sabatoge Oh Purple One's attempts to get Scott under his clutches. Poor Dae!

Great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
person Jetfire
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY I love you for updating. Someone needs to string Steve up naked in a tree for trying to steal scott, evil boy, totally evil evil boy! Still love Damien, he needs a good cuddle.

Thank you for your brilliantness

Huggins Aduial
person Paradox13
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A great way to make up for the wait. I've really missed these guys. The summary was also a great idea too.
person nextgrl
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! You're back. I almost sent out detectives. Another great chapter. James kissing the "grape ape", hilarious. Also thanks to your beta. I've found a lot of great (or what I can only assume are great) stories on AF that I just couldn't complete because of grammar. So thanks for all that you do.
schedule December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello? hellooo? Pesterme? u there? *looks around* not here apparently, let me go check AC *goes away*
person Gwengwel
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now I want to be on Facebook just so I can tell people that you're my friend lolll.


Glad to see that what'S the psy say to Damien seems to work. A little step but a still a step.
James continue to intrigue me....I fear for him...and I have this idea that he can betray Dae (like turn him to Gregg in exchange of something).
Like the duo Trey-Terry.
I want the permission to slap the little twink, I don't like him, not a second. Grrrrrr!
And what a sweet and smexy birthday. Miam....!

Gwen.
person Chrysler
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH! He likes Damien? Fuck…then Darlene fucked shit up! Awww, and they had their first fight. I hate dramatic irony. Just tell him already!