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for Flaming in the Dorms

by pesterme2

person D e v i l i s h S e p h y
schedule June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
my life will be complete if Ryan see's the gay light and hook up with james XDDD
person D e v i l i s h S e p h y
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
mmmhmm touchin my joy button keep up the pressure oh yeah joy button!!!

ahem I'm loving this to hell and back XD
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's too bad all their (Damien, James and Liberty's) hard-working plan may not be working. Seems Grape-Ape doesn't mind being part of a harem. lol!

Good chapter; poor Scott is so out of the loop; he thinks everyone's acting weird around him! hahah

Looking forward to the next installment. Take your time, life is more important than gay porn. Well, almost. Maybe. A little. :)
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello again Lori ^^

The lack of line breaks or spacing between scene's can get a bit confusing xD
Why is there none?

Anyway...... what plan was that man... it was NOT a very solid plan if you ask me. Something's up with Damien and Liberty's planning skills?
And Why couldn't Damien himself just dress up in drag instead. And tell grape ape that 'forcing damien to dress in drag' was one of his sick tendencies. Then just as the date's starting or smthing, just get James (without steve seeing this) to appear and they can have a mini-fight to put damnien in a bad mood. then when james is off with steven again, it would appear like damien is un happy about this 'strange fetish' of scott's.
That ought to paint Scott in a 'bad light' that would hopefully put Steve off him.
Buuuuuuuuuuuuuttt well. whatever?

I don't know how they're gonna shake that grape ape off their trails. or tails.
Why not James just try dig up more shit on him then try using it against him? But from the looks of it... I don't think his family would be too accepting of a Gay son. Which just makes this whole thing even more "HUH. Now what huh?"

Glad to see Damien is coming along well with his art :D

But other than that... NOTHING IS COMING ALONG! HELP US HERE LORI! xD
anyway, regardless of updates, do take care of yourself and your life before you loose your fingers on a chapter updating typing spree ;3
Later!

- nekoii :3
person Jetfire
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay...chapter!
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I shall take a short moment to... SQQQQQQQQUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAL!!!!! because I think, i forgot how to breathe for a moment there. the lungs and heart and brain somehow, do not cooperating now. ah. ah.... breath!!!!!!!

okay.

*goes off to read the update*
person RT
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can't he do anything without plotting behind Scott's back? XD
But I've sure missed this story and I think you for the update. And who ever sends you flamers mail should be slapped. For authors it depends on the mood and the will. So I will always wait until you have the time and are in the mood for update again. Thank you again and I'll see you next time. ;D
person kissedbymidnight
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like Dr. Leiberman. I think he is the right type of psychiatrist for Damien. He isn’t going to try to force him to talk. He will just talk with Damien and kind of let him come to him. I think by doing that and seeing comfortable and more like an every day person will help Damien open up in a way that he couldn’t before. Then again, maybe not. It was an interesting meeting, though a little sad. It’s tearing poor Damien apart. Oh, and Steven better stop trying to hit on Scott, the little runt. He’s taken *nods head* Yes he is. Good chapter. I can’t wait for Damien to get his happy ending. He deserves some rest.
person kissedbymidnight
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, Steve has it coming*laughs evilly* That’s what you get for messing with someone else’s man though, especially right in front of them. Someone did that to me before and I was BEYOND pissed, so I feel for poor Daimen. Scott is his. I thought it was hilarious that James actually kissed Steve though. I would never have expected that, but it just seems to be added to the list of things that shows James is changing in a way. Perhaps he is going through a slutty stage. I wonder what it’s going to take for Scott to realize the truth. I can see this turning in to a big blow out and I’m interested to see how that goes. I can see Daimen’s point, eventually Scott will end up with the other’s tongue down his throat if he isn’t careful. Silly Scott and seeing the best in everyone:) He hasn’t figured out how people work yet.
person kissedbymidnight
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that’s it for now:( I keep thinking Ryan is perhaps bi-curious, even if he denies it. This isn’t the first time that he has asked James about it. I wouldn’t mind James and Ryan getting together though. I think they’d make an interesting pair. Poor Scott. He’s being played…again. I think he might be pretty upset when he finds out what is going on. He doesn’t like all the hidey/sneaky shit. I thought Steve may make an actual move on Scott, but maybe not, maybe Damien’s plan will just blow up in his face. That wouldn’t be surprising, though I was looking forward to Damien being proven right. I’m excited to see what happens next! Great chapter!^_^