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for Wanting What You Can't Have

by simpson8457

schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
upload a new chapter I'm sitting aptiently by my computer till you do..(not rally but you know what I mean lol)..so excited whoot whoot :)
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg! he's so evil! re 1st chapter..but love the story...can relate...
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhh! well at least ur only gone for a few days! gl with moving and packing!
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the story and please do not stop posting. Nonetheless, in some pieces of your prior chapters they seemed rushed and incomplete like in chapter 3 towards the middle and end. But overall, you are doing a good job on the story but some chapters seem like your missing something maybe just some details.
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DAMN YOU!!!! Lol, you've sucked me into this story! Because its heartbreaking when you get wrapped up in a story and then the author doesn't finish it! Sooooo...HINT HINT! Lol post more soon and I'll keep reading this great story!
person calemzoe
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! I like your writing style; it really gets me involved in the storyline and I feel I care what happens to Lily and Adam, etc. Keep it coming!
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You missy have not let anyone down...you do what you have to do and we will wait patiently here..I can't wait to read what you have next..OMG I am so excited... I have to say that I seriously gave up on AFF cause nobody was writing anything interesting or just had inactive stories so it was a breath of fresh air to see a good story on here..haven't seen one in a while and yours is def. a good story....so with that said, THANK YOU!
P.S. if you have msn would love to chat with my fave author so you can give me spoilers ahhah :)
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow just wow!!! please please please don't neglect this story like some of my fave authors have done. I trully like this story and I think it has sooo much potential so please update regularly!!!
person calemzoe
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, good story. I like that Lil is a strong female, or seemingly so. Let Adam grovel since he's the one who dissed her in the first place. Hate people like that, but that's life ain't it?!
person shippom5
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is so cute and warm. There are a few misspellings and grammatical errors but that is ok.