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for Wanting What You Can't Have

by simpson8457

person lovelyl
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to finish this?
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! It is I again babyangel ugh I have missed this story. I found it in my faves section and I re-read it, but oh how I wish you would update this story...I miss Adam and Lily :( But overall I hope everything is going well with you!!!
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely LOVE IT!!! This can't be the end, right???
person lovelyl
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I hope that was not the end. :D
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww where did you go...this story was getting so good!!!
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This chapter was better then the last. I am loving Lily and Adam together sooo sweet! You are an amazing writer so keep up the good work! Oh btw love how you didn't make Kat into some jealous girl out to destroy Lil..well at least not yet ;)
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting not going all this way but i kinda like it! thank you so much for updating again. i wish i was lily lol.
person violet11
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, i really like your story! it's great... i want to read more! i hope you update regularly!
person lovelyl
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know I am a so demanding. LOL! That chapter was better, I find with longer chapters you can get the feeling out more. I help other writers on ffnet a lot with their stories. So are they are couple yet? Keep going your doing well I will check the site every few days for a update. :D
person coolboy1
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow that chapter was sooo hott... more more more
pleaseee update sooon i want to see more of them two... and them sleeping together was soooo sweet.. so perfect lol
update soooonnn :)