rate_review Reviews

Great chapter. Janie should have known better than to keep messing with a mob boss like Keisuke. I hope they did not kill her even though she is so annoying and irritating. It is funny to watch Keisuke and Takumi getting to know each other. I hope Takumi makes Keisuke work hard before he gives him any real love although he appeared to enjoy giving Keisuke that blowjob.

This fic is not bad. I like it. I find the dialogue a bit weird O_o, and there are some mistakes, but I still like it. :)

Until next chapter then.

Chapter three: RAPE RAPE RAPE!! Love this story by the way :D

I like it! Please update again soon.

Nice new story. Takumi is definitely in trouble. Keisuke sounds like he is part yakuza. Love it.