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April 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope there will be more I hate when it ends with a dun dun dunnn and then dropped
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March 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to more
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July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what Kira's plan for poor Takumi is. I had a good laugh at Keisuke. He was so sweet to stay in the hospital with Takumi and now Takumi is holding out on him. Very funny.
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice work here!
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. How could Keisuke's own grandfather be behind all this? What a shame. Shido is very evil to treat Fuji like that and it sounds like he also murdered Keisuke's sister. I hope Shido doesn't get his hands on Takumi. i don't know why Mizuki stays with Shido. Takumi red as ketchup -hahaha!
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August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. I think the love relationship between Kasuga and Fuji is very sweet. I hope they get together soon. I wonder how Keisuke already found out that Takumi met Shido. I hope Fuji will be okay. Looking forward to the next chapter
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July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice work!
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kira and Shori are hilarious together. Let's hope Kira takes a more gentle approach than Keisuke. Keisuke almost gave Takumi a good time and then he got carried away. Will he ever learn? Maybe Takumi give Keisuke a taste of his own medicine. Great chapter. Keep up the good writing.
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story really does have potential. I love where it's going. However, the grammar and syntax is atrocious. If you want, I could be a sort of beta for you. When you finish a chapter, I could just check it over for errors and correct them for you. I really like the story, and want it to be easier to read. Email me if you're interested at Kirkyott203@hotmail.com
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kira and Shiro? Sounds hilarious. I would love to see what happens with those two. I think Janie must be insane. She is so persistent especially since she dumped Keisuke for someone else. Maybe Takumi will warm up to Keisuke a little since Keisuke rescued him from Shiro. Are you still going on Mysterious Mansion too?