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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH! UPDATE! SOON!!!!!
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL!! SIMPLY BRILLIANT!! CAN\'T GET MORE TWISTED THEN THAT!! WRITE MORE...(*puppy dog pouts*)...PLEASE!!!!
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September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...that was really good. I liked it. Have you written any more like this? If you haven\'t, could you...please? It\'s great and different!
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September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was so erotic I felt so faint. Please hurry and update!
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is disgusting! Well written, yes.. but gross... and so very very wrong......
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t usually read this type of story, but I loved this one. If anyone knows of anymore types of these stories please send them to me at lillyhallgal@yahoo.com. Again I love this story, and I can\'t wait for more chapters. When you update the next chapter could you email me and tell me, if not then I\'ll find it sooner or later. Thanks. Bye!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
one word AWESOME. EXCEPT MORE ACTION WITH THE TWO GIRLS BUT THAT\'S OK IT WAS GOOD.
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September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I don\'t really like the idea of Kami sharing Midnight with anyone, so that wasn\'t so great. However, this would be a useful set-up if you then decided to make Kami pregnant with a litter of puppies, because Carol could help her out. But I don\'t like the concept of Carol having sex with either Kami or Midnight, so I hope you don\'t have that threesome anymore. Of course, that\'s just my opinion. Anyway, I think that you should have Kami get pregnant with a litter of like, 7 puppies. It would be so primal!
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September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\"m not so sure about your introducing this \"Carol\", and it wasn\'t as primal as the others. I agree with the others: Kami should get pregnant with a litter of puppies. You know, that whole barefoot and pregnant thing?