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for Doverover

by LoriLanders

person .lips.
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
<3 you did a good job making something very taboo seem natural.
person .lips.
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
<3 you did a good job making something very taboo seem natural.
person Alko
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This one was.... interesting to say the least. Lol
Still wonderful and detailed.. but just interesting. LMAO
I liked it. Good job for originality.
7/10! ^^

-Alko
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uhm... I liked your other story, but I really feel like I need to go and pray after reading this one. Now that I've said that, I gotta say, that despite feeling like an incredible deviate and like I should hit the back button and run off and grab my rosary beads, I was oddly compelled to finish the story, which I have to say I found to be really well written. I know that there's a lot of people that are obviously into this kinda thing, and good for them I say, who am I to judge, but I'd much prefer my puppies to be of the youkai kind such as Sesshoumaru, Kouga or Inuyasha for that fact. All in all, this was a well written story and I give you 10 out of 10 for taking on such a topic sweetpea. You pulled it off well.

Peace
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write another beast story I really liked that one
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beastiality is yum. Excellent story!

^_^
person Rhonda
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read these reviews and I feel I have to say something...

1 HentaiJane I really like this story. I loved how you were able to write it and not overdo it. I hope to read more of your work. Don\'t let these bad reviewers get you down.

2. For everyone that says this is sick and what not I feel the need to say something.. You might think this is a gross concept but there are alot of people ( male and female alike) who do this type of thing. It is call Zoophilla and it is a love for animals as mates. Go online sometime and look up beastaility. You would be surprised at how much stuff you can find on this subject. I for one have never done it and never will but beast are not my prefrence. Just because you think it is sick, that is your opinion everyone has one but to come on the review page and put That is sick or that\'s just wrong or wtf. You have to realize that this is her story and if she chooses to write one about dogs and humans that is her right. Just like your opinion is yours.

I have noticed something though. People who have reviewed here negatively and say that is sick and blah blah blah.. Obviously you haven\'t checked out any other of the catergories on this site. I know that in Harry Potter there are a good number of beast stories with werewolves but yet there is no negitive reviews that I know of there. Also check out the cartoon portion of this site. You would be surprised.

Again HentaiJane this is one of the best beast stories I have read and reading this gave me the courage to write my first ever beast story and post it here. I applaud you and forget those who do not understand.


Rhonda
person Tyler
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fic is rlly kind of gross. it like, defies the laws of nature! HOW THE FUCK CAN A GIRL HAVE SEX WITH A DOG????? nice plot though, if you DIsINCLUDE the dog....
person Celeste
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Sexy and fun. Wish there was more. Please write more girl/doggy stories.
person sleb
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome. please, please do more.