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for Living Doll

by CMorningstar

person Levithan
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Right. I MADE an account just so i could leave you a review, I read this a long time ago then i decided to read it again to see if there was a new chapter and sadly there doesnt seem to be *pout*

PLEEEAAASSSEE write another chapter, this story is far to good for you to just desert you understand meeeee?!

In my opinion i dont want Rain to become another doll, but your the author so its up to you i suppose.

Im not saying it has to be a 'happy; ending but yooou knooooooooow hehehe.

Also i find it very intresting that you used a boy with dark skin as the uke, not many people do. And its very kewl in me mind hehe

I hope you'll write more soon!

xo Levithan
person jealousy
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
god your so very sick and twisted but i like it
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is delightfully creepy. I like their chemistry and Aloqurien is definitely a character I'd like to see further explored. I can't wait to see more.
person JulesGer
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
juhhu,
that was different and creepy...but I like it:)
In a way it is really sad,to make dolls to have company,because I think they are a poor substitute for
another "human" being.
It reminds me of a music video called `last dance with mary jane`.
I want to read more!
Please ubdate soon,Jules

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