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for The Incubus and the Unicorn

by Zilence

person wolfseyes2700
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that was a really good story. the characters were so interesting. i cant believe how stubborn Sen was and how persistent Kalor was. but it made for a good story. that mage was kind of stupid but i guess he was blinded by power. he got what he deserved. id definitely read this again.
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed this a great deal:) Thank you^^
person RT
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this so much! Sen and Kalor! They just made my day! :D
person Negai
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this story! It was well developed and I really adored the characters of Sen and Kalor. They make such a cute couple.
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i found this story earlier this week and i've reread a part each day. i hope one day u r inspired to do mote with these characters but if not i'll continue rereading this one. the story was sexy, i loved the setting and the plot/sex ratio was perfect. i felt like i'd known the characters for years in just those 4 chapters. excellent read.
person smint45
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read this story again and again!!! I probably jave read it about 20 times and I really must say that it is one of the best storys I've ever read!!! I rally wanted to say you how much I love it and that I'm really greatful you posted it!!!!Kalor and Sen are so sweet together!!!!! Thank you again and hope to see you with a new fic soon!!!!
person kristina
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I was kinda disappointed that it was so short, but it was so much fun to read I cant complain. I hope that you consider writing a sequel or companion fic to this one day!
person kylee
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Loved the ending. I am glad the evil mage got what he deserved. I would love to see more of Sen and Kalor. They make a great couple. They could have so many adventures in that forest. Sen certainly was an uptight incubus. Hurray for Ferik for playing matchmaker. I really enjoyed reading this.
person lo
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely wonderful! I loved the setting and the characters you created for this story. This was wonderfully written and full of laughs and tension and well this was great.
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That would make a nice ending but at least one more chapter with those nice slow time would be good and maybe him getting acptence from the herd