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Hi, I really like this story, and hope you continue it!

Uggghhhhhh!!!!!

I spent two hours on a review about chapter 8, hit the wrong key and ended up refreshing the screen wiping all my comments! =(

Well brief summary of my thoughts... I liked chapter 8 because you finally advanced the story to what your summary is about so we finally get a chance to see your vampires in action and Sorens embrace into the darkness. I wasn't too crazy that you glazed over everything else leaving what should have been some very emotionally charged scenes...empty. I also got the feeling that something is definitely out of kilter with your story; either plot holes or you are far more evil and devious than first imagined! I suppose I'll find out in upcoming chapters!!

I'm uncomfortable about offering but if you need a beta to bounce ideas off or want to know my un-edited thoughts and musings about Echoside, you can contact me at jboswell@gci.net. I don't think you need anyone to proofread your work but receiving some feedback and having a reader point out some inconstancies might prove to be insightful...

Yes, Sebastian, save him, but why can´t Soren see his father and friends when he will become a vampire?
Will he forget Matthew?

Hi, I´m glad that you uploaded a new chapter, but I can see only two senteces. :)

Don't know if it's just me but Chapter 8 doesn't seem to be showing up. And here I was getting all excited!! (sitting on edge of seat)...

what happened to ch08?! =( *sniff sniff*
I wanna read it!!!
PreciousEdo! come back! somethings wrong!! *burst into tears* iwantitiwantitiwantit!

Hehe, thanks for the warning!. But... there's no chapter, just the a/n... TT_TT

I'm not gonna say this was predictable, it was.... huh... kind of the obvious way to follow through tho (did that make sense? lol)
it's just it was to be expected really, taking in the summary... Katrine being the most vulnerable of the group make her the obvious victim and as tight (and young and hotheaded) a group as they are vengence was obviously to follow... and end baddly!
it's really sad tho that Matthew has to basically lose Soren to save him, especially when their love is so youg still, not even hvg been consumated *sigh* poor Matthew... poor Soren... I feel like crying now! *sniff sniff* =(
I am totally curious about Sebastian tho... his interest in Soren was pretty obvious from the start, and his character made so few apperances so far that he's pretty much a mistery. now we'll finally hv the chance to really get to see who Sebastian is (besides being a vampire). I'M CURIOUS! XD
update soon please!

Two great updates! I'm looking forward to and dreading at the same time what the next chapter or two brings when all hell breaks loose. I'm really curious to see how your vampires will be... seems all authors have different approaches to how they are, act, and abilities. I can only guess that Sebastian is one and with the comments he and Matt made they know each other; does that mean Matt might already be one?

BTW, glad you liked the review!

Great story, very interesting characters and with good flow!. Early in the morning I clicked on the story to read while I waited for my son to get ready for school and promptly forgot about it until a couple hours later, when I returned to my room ^^;;;. So I was reading your fic, devoring the seven chapters and getting all sucked into the plot and the interesting world you're describing when I decided to re-read the summary, and promply chocked on the unsuspecting muffin I stole from the kitchen earlier, I was like OMG!, I can´t believe it!, b-but poor Soren and don't tell me the friend is Matthew and it's gonna happen THAT!, and WTF, it's listed in the vampires category! xDDD. So you see, I'm totally hooked on the story now and will be anxiously waiting for the next update!.