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for Echoside Book 1: Soren

by PreciousEdo

person kirsten
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
umm, your new chapter didnt show up. The olny part that did was your message to the readers.
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure abt ur other readers but I am more interested in who Seb is and what is going on with Soren. I actaully liked the bit on Soren's father in this ch it gave us more of an insight into who he is. I think I like him more for his response. I think Boudain n katherine's problems are pedestrian.Of course that is not a reflection on your writing because I think you did a fabulous job with their characters and stayed true to their personalities. I just like to hear about Soren more. So I am waiting with abated breath for the next Soren focused chapter!
person kylee123
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love what you have done with this story. It sounds as if Soren's adventure has just begun. It also sounds like Matthew has another master or sire who has not entered the picture as yet. Even although Andre has done all these horrible things, I am intrigued by him. I always like the bad guys. There is probably a reason why he was so drawn to cause trouble for Soren and Matthew. I can't wait to find out more. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
person kylee123
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Echoside is such a great story. I am halfway through Chapter 8 and I fear that the drama is about to begin. The story is very well written. I hope Matthew and Soren will have a chance to be together before they are separated as you have warned us they will be. I am really enjoying the story.
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating. I love this story. I've never read anything like it. The characters are great and I love Soren. I can't wait to see what happens next. Especially between Sebastian and Soren. Update soon.
person Mai
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope Matthew's future looks up! I really love him as a character and I don't want to see him without hope for the rest of the story.

Anyway, I love it. I can't wait to read more!
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! D: I'm caught up to the latest chapter. *bookmarks page* Moooooar. <3 This is amazing and heart-wrenching and and and...

x3 I'll be waiting on the next chapter. I think I like Sebastian. I can't wait to see what fate is in store for Soren now, but I hope he's still allowed to be with Matthew. It would almost be too much if Sebastian decided to be an arse and keep them separated, though as a writer myself I can totally understand any plot reasonings behind it if you went that route.

And I really hope Andre gets the most epic asskicking in the course of history. His actions were totally uncalled for. Or at least, it appeared that way.

You portray human emotion very well. It really feels like the characters are real~ I can even clearly see the places you describe. You do a great job, which makes this a very easy story to read, and it flows nicely. Keep up the good work!
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating. I have been waiting for ages for this chapter and now I can't wait to see what will happen next and what will happen between Sebastian and Soren. Please update soon:)
person Mai
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohmigosh! This is seriously awesome. Holy crap. The plot just thickened like into a solid! I have to know what's going to happen next! Update soon!
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens next. What's going to happen between Soren and Sebastian and will he ever see Matthew again. Please update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter.