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for Echoside Book 1: Soren

by PreciousEdo

schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story was wonderfully done, I can't wait to read the second one
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! Looking forward to the next part!!
person kylee123
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Double shocker. Does this mean that Andre has multiple personalities? He seems a little different from the angry rogue who murdered Soren. Plus Matthew is on smexing terms with Andre after all that happened? How is this possible? I also interested in why Soren's dad never told Soren the truth about what happened to his mother. Very interesting. I am looking forward to Book two.
person wizli
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gah, So many WTF moments! XDDD. I had to re-read from about ch9 to really 'get' things and then I was left like OMG!. But I'm glad there's more to come, I've a lot of questions but surelly they'll be answered in the 2nd book. About Matthew and Andre... I don't know what to think about them, I'll wait for the explanations... A-and Soren's father has a lot to answer too!!!. Now I'm off to steal chocolates from my son, hope you'll had a good Eastern too! (candies and chocolates, yummy!).
person kylee123
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The start of a new life for Micah. You did a really good job of portraying Micah's thoughts and feelings with his changed body. I love how he reacts with awe to his heightened senses. Sebastian did a good job of reminding Micah of his former life. It already seems that Sebastian will be an excellent master and teacher for Micah. I am sorry for Matthew but I think Sebastian and Micah will make a great pair.
person kylee123
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome new chapter. I understand all of the emotions going through Sebastian's head. The sadness of Soren leaving his life behind and the hope that Micah will indeed become his new companion. I am sorry for Matthew in all of this because he will still have his feelings for Soren but Micah will not remember him. I am eager to find out the reason why Matthew has such a history of hanging out with vampires. The story is excellent. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
person wizli
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel loved! xP Well, these past weeks have been nerve-wracking ´cause the damned aftershooks don't end!. The morning my sister left the hospital there were three very strong aftershooks (think around 7,0 Richter) in about 30 min and I was alone, standing in my hallway with the ceiling lamps swinging madly and thinking ohmygodohmygod not again!. My son was in school, my sister and her family in a 5th floor, my parents working, both the old and new Chilean Presidents were live on tv in this very formal ceremony... (haha, but that was funny!). Then two days ago, we had a very big blackout at night (80% of the country), another big seism last night... They say for an eartquake this big, the annoying aftershooks will last 6 months!. I just want it to end, you know. Then some author-I-will-not-name, without any warning killed my most beloved character in her two paralel fics!. I'm still in denial, I really loved the guy and it was just too big of a shook TT_TT. At least you had the decency to kill your main character and promply thereafter you brought him back to live, with a handsome new love interest. That's the spirit! xDDDD /end rambling
About the story, I'm most interested in Sebastian and Matthew's backstory, how and when they met, why they remained together, and how that'll play into their relationship with Micah, and worried about Soren's father (he means problems!). Soren/Micah took the news about his death/change too quietly to my liking, blood tears and all, but that was clearly his weird submissive bond with Sebastian. Ah, the pervy posibilities! Lol.
I just realized I know next to nothing about you, tell me something to sate my curiosity!!!.
person dekorx
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love this chapter, XD tears of blood huh? thats a first, it's kindy freaky but makes sense! loveeee this! hehe
person dekorx
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I had never seen this story before, so I was surprised that I had missed it so many times and that it was on chapter 12 already! I'm so glad I did see it this time around though, because I've been in a bad-story funk for awhile. It was hard to find a story I really liked, but I finally did! I stayed up way too late last night because I would tell myself "this is the last chapter tonight.." then when I would get to the end of the chapter I HAD to continue. There was no arguing with your story, it was demanding that I continue reading it! T_T Anyway, I like Matthew, but I also really like Sebastian, and I can't wait to see what Soren, or Micah actually, is like now! Bah, I can't wait for the next update. It kills me! :O!
person wizli
schedule March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And why yes, my dear, there were vampires! xDDDD. I don't think you know but I'm chilean, and if you've watched the news lately you'd know we've had a hellish week, what with the earthquake, tsunami and neverending temblors. And what's more, tonight my sis is having her 1st baby so my mind it's not all there in fic-land to write a good review. I'll just say I love Sebastian and like Soren very much so I hope everything works well with the change! (and they live happily ever after, and sing and dance together forever, hahahah!). Now I'm worried for Matthew, I like him too...