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ah !!! You have to update right now ! Who is this boyfriend ??? AHHHHH !

Bad cliffie monkey! Good story so far.

I just did a review, but the computer didn't take it, so I have to redo it. So...who is this b/f??? Hmmmm, and I bet Jay's gonna be a tad bit jealous. And if Starr has a b/f, why is she with Jay? Oh, and a few times I was getting a little confused, b/c you kept switching Starr's gender, from she to he. Technically, she would be a he, right, b/c he still has a penis and no reproductive organs. I'm not sure how that he/she stuff works! lol

Great chapter; seems they can't ignore their feelings any longer! Does Jay know she's a he? If not, I can't wait till he finds out!!!! Hahahahha

Hot Hot chapter! There are sparks sizzling between Jay and Starr. I like that they are being honest with each other about their pasts. Starr's "Baby come back" line really carcked me up. I am really enjoying this story. Does Starr have boobs?

-eyes glued to screen-
This seems interesting...
I be confused with the HE SHE switch in ch.One though O.o
I'd just stick with she.
Or he.
Or it.
Or Starr.
Since it be confusling.

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