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for A God in Shackles

by madamoiselleV

schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay new chapter! ^^ I was just thinking that I dont remember ever reviewing before, or if I have I don't remember doing it, I'm a terrible fan! :( But I have been following this story for a while and I really like it! ^^ Keep up the good work! ^3^
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice work here! I love the character development and plot so far! :)
person MeLovesYaoi
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great job!

I really enjoyed the tender moment that Val and Dario shared in the woods. However, I am a bit worried about what might happen to the young god and Nessa if Dario ever learned of their secret friendship. Dario would undoubtably do something unpleasant to the girl. He seems to be the overly protective type, and I might know a thing or two about the overly protective type.

Anyway, wonderful chapter. Keep updating.
person MeLovesYaoi
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I'm so glad you finally decided to update.
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update soon, please!
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far!
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so cute! aside from from the evil lord... I like it... keep writing!

Lots if love!
person smint45
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was great!!! Thank you for the chappie!!!! See you next time!!!!
person MeLovesYaoi
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the premise of this story! I find it to be very intriguing and well written.

I feel SO sorry for poor Valkynn. He seems like such a nice, little fellow. And Dario, well he’s a giant, blood-slurping ass!

I hope Dario doesn’t harm Doreen for allowing Val to go outside, and he doesn’t trounce Val for actually going out.

The development between Val and Nessa is interesting, but I believe you are keenly aware of my pairing preferences. HA! HA!

GREAT STORY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
person kitty08
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you know while I read the new chapter I thought suddenly, God that physic curse must have been frustrating...^^so I like the new chapter but that poor boy, I really hope he will get better on with his master...