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for Un musicien parmi tant d`autre

by ClolymyLac

person kylee123
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love this story. I love Yuuri and I am glad that he is making friends. I am also glad to see him be more protective of Kuro. Too bad Yuuri is still in denial about liking Kuro but I think Kuro will succeed with the gentle approach. I can't wait to read more.
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eeek! I was just peeking at this story today, to see if it’d been updated in my semi-short time without a computer. And I finish reading one fic, check the main page of the originals, and TADA, you -just- updated. Huzzah! Yeah, I didn’t want to talk like I knew all about your character, Yuuri, cause I don’t. But, it just seemed like a Yuuri-like thing. I am very happy to review! I know how giddy reviews make -me- so I love to give them. Sometimes I do a lot of rambling and just ohhh and aww, but oh well, I have fun xD

“By the time I arrived at school I was becoming fond of the said queer article.” That line had me giggling. And; “You’re that sexy bastard that was with Kowai Kao Kuro!” I just love the way Yuuri thinks and speaks. Homygosh!!! He is Kuro’s boyfriend? Okay, so I did kind of see that coming, but come on! Everyone secretly (or not so secretly) wants Yuuri and Koru to be together! An obstacle! And possible future drama? Ohhh.

But ohhh! He isn’t really! You are tricky, but make it all so darn interesting; I love it. Yay! Yuuri still has a chance! All the different characters interacting is so funny, they just adore pushing Yuuri’s buttons! Him and Kishimoto are silly. Awwww, Kuro gave Yuuri his scarf, how cute is that?! And Kishimoto gave him a jacket! They are all turning out to be good friends for Yuuri. I looooooooooove this !!
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I loved this chapter more than any other so far! Thank you for your comments! I AM growing fonder of Yuuri; but only at the end w/the snowball fight and then back in his apt. w/his friends. He was really starting to warm up to Kuro and the "sexy bastard" Kishimoto! You are too funny tho! Yuuri bluring out who is this sexy bastard?!! Hahaa I was cracking up! At the beginning of the chapter Yuuri was his usual insolent self, I mean what gives him the right to scream at everyone all the time, I mean, come on! Anger issues, much???? But by the end, he actually acted like a normal person! I also felt the tension betwn him and Kishimoto; maybe not all for Kuro???? Hmmmmmm Can't wait for the next chapter! I also LOVE your French; French is the most beautiful language; I took 3 yrs. of it in high school, mais j'oublais mon francais! Quel dommage! (I probably fucked that up pretty bad, huh?) Anyways, great chapter!
person kylee123
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought this chapter was very cute. It was cute because Yuuri kept reacting so strongly to Kuro. He really needs to get a hold of his temper. Yuuri is having a hard time dealing with his attraction to Kuro. He is probably confused Kuro has such an expressionless face and Yuuri can't tell what he is thinking. I think my favorite part is when Kuro cocks his head to one side and Nomi tells Yuuri that it means Kuro is happy. Too cute! Of course I love the gentle Kuro so I hope Yuuri does not break his heart.
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this from the beginning, but I don't think I r & r'd yet. I really like this story, except EVERYTHING Yurri does makes me feel like hitting upside his head!!!! Why is he so friggin mean to the poor little Kuro? Kuro is always so nice to him. Why does Kuro even bother? I just can't believe how utterly NASTY this Yurri is; he really needs to take some anger management classes! I think it was the first chapter, when he saw Kuro in class and flipped out on him. What the hell was that all about? Jeez, he really has major issues, doesn't he?

I do like your writing style, however, there are a few misspelled words. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You so deserve more than five reviews for this. It’s awesome! I was just thinking about this fic the other day, wondering to myself what was going to happen next. Aww, Yuuri and Kuro are so cuuute! I love Yuuri’s character, I find him so interesting. I like that he lashes out at Kuro, yeah some think it’s mean, but I think that’s just Yuuri. Not that he is mean, but he doesn’t understand Kuro, and isn’t sure how to deal with him. I don’t think Yuuri is an ass, maybe he over-reacts some, but sometimes it‘s amusing. For some reason, I am usually rooting for one person, while I see in reviews that a lot of other people are rooting for the other xD Aww Kuro taking care of him! He is so sweet. I love the slow thing they have budding between them. Looooove it!
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gjnrlignirkgnkr! I can’t believe I didn’t review this the first time I read it! I really, really like this story. It’s different than other fics I’ve read, and you have wonderful characters. I love the whole Lolita thing the boys have going on, and the café! And Nomi is freaking adorable! I love him! Just, major awww. Santa is a cute sweetheart too. (^w^) Kuro is, mysterious, and very blank faced. But intriguing.

I like the POV switch, over to Santa. He and Hibari are soooo cute! They aren’t even together, but their interactions, and Santa’s feelings, and Kuro helping out and stuff. Just awwww. Anyways, I am so hooked on this story. I love the characters, and am super curious to see what happens!
person kylee123
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like chapter 3 and the new characters. I think Kuro was hurt by Inoue denying that he liked him. That Junko girl inviting Inoue to her house to wash her hair? Sounds like trouble.
person kylee123
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like your new story and I love Inoue. He is very macho (love it). He definitely seems like he is the yakuza type. He seems to have had a very hard life. I really can't wait for him and Kurochan to get closer. I was hoping that Nomi would cause some jealousy but since they are brothers, that probably will not happen. I am just glad that Inoue is settling into his new school. Is Yamato Chantal a boy or a girl? Since you said it was an all boys school. What does the title mean and will there be sex in this story? Looking forward to reading more.
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, I`m really glad you like it. Yamato Chantal is a woman, I guess that`s not very clear, stupid me. I thought it would be obviouse with her name since Chantal is a woman`s name but it`s french to I guess not everybody knows that. My bad for not being too considerate. But the reason she`s in an all boy school is because she the dauther of the dean and she dosen`t really fit in with the other girls. As for sex, yes! There will be sex in the story, only in later chapters, I really took my time introdycing them and there are still a few characters I want to introduce but there in sex eventually.

Un musicien parmi tant d`autre mean= A musicien among others. I was going to explain this sooner or later but might as well get it out of the way right now. Un musicien parmi tant d`autre is the title of a song from a quebecois band called Harmonium, I can safely say it`s my favourite song, at least for the lyrics. At the end of the song the singer sing ``Où est allé tout ce monde, Qui avait quelque chose à raconter,On a mis quelqu'un au monde,On devrait peut-être l'écouter`` Which means, where did all the people that had something to say go? We gave birth to somebody, we might as well listen to what he as to say. I though it was relevent since Yuuri comes into this new place where he dosen`t know any body he`s trying to get accepted and people and some people don`t always accept him bacause let`s face it, he looks like a gangster and he`s agressive. And like the song says well it`s about time that somebody listens to what he has to say. It`s also relevent for him trying to understand Kuro since he doesn`t show a lot of emotion but it doesn`t mean they aren`t there.

sigh, I did it again, all this babling,
anyways, thank you again for the nice comment
with love-Clolymy