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for Un musicien parmi tant d`autre

by ClolymyLac

schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Stumbled across this story and now I'm hooked! Great story and looking forward to seeing how things turn out.
person kylee123
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter had me running the gauntlet of emotions. I was pissed at Chantal and Yuuri. Then I thought God (you in this case) was punishing Yuuri by making him have a bad day. Then I was happy that Yuuri and Kuro got to sleep together. Then when Miss Chantal showed up in the bedroom the next morning I was like WTF? Somebody is making themselves real comfortable real fast. Don't worry Kuro. I will be making a voodoo doll too. Someone please save us from Chantal!
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Finally an update! Yeah, Yuuri really has to keep his anger in check. Jesus, it certainly doesn't take much to piss him off! I was ready to hit him upside his head when he started yelling at poor Kuro! And on the other hand, I was like, yeah, go Yuuri for defending Kuro during the karate match! I couldn't believe he did that! He was so nice and kind to him. I think he's bipolar, don't you? I personally think a nice dose of daily Prozac would help him TREMENDOUSLY! Seriously! I gotta tell you: I was kinda confused at the beginning; I wasn't sure who was screwing the girl in the shower! Hahahaha But now he's feeling ambiguous (that's probably spelled wrong! Sorry) about his feelings towards Kuro especially since he really enjoyed sleeping next to him! Maybe he can do it again in the near future! Hahaha Great chapter!
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter! I love the dynamic between Tyler and Gianni. I'm a little confused, tho. Maybe I'm not remembering from the previous chapters: why aren't Tyler and Gianni together? So Tyler likes Kuro? And why haven't Tyler and Gianni seen each other in so long? Anyways....can't wait to read more!
person kylee123
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love Ohba and Gianni. They are a great couple so why are they not together? It seems as if Ohba is very much in love with Gianni. There is only a small age difference. I can't wait for all the heartbreaking details. I am also eager to see if Yuuri finds out more about Kuro's health. I really want Ohba and Gianni to get back together. It makes me sad to know they have been apart for years. Keep up the great writing.
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this chapter was pretty heartbreaking. Poor King - he had such a troublesome childhood. I noticed a lot of the same names in his classes, do Japanese names get carried down from generation to generation? So....was the King's principle Gianni? And isn't he much older than the King? The King actually acts a lot like Yurri! Great chapter! I'm really anxious tho, how was Gianni hurt and what is wrong w/poor Kuro?????
person kylee123
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for my own little PWP side story! My favorite part was when Kuro said "What the hell you want to do it right now?" Hilarious. I can see that Yuuri is becoming more affected by Kuro with each chapter. I am getting worried about Kuro's health. If anything happens to him my heart would break into a million pieces. I love him so much. I am interested in seeing how Tyler met Gianni. Looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see you updated! And sorry, I did screw up the French; it's been a LONG time since I took it in high school! I loved this last chapter; I loved learning more about Yurri and his past in Japan. I really liked the scenes w/Kishimoto; they seem really good together. Also, I think he is definitely warming up to Kuro. It was so sweet of Kuro to stay up all night and help him w/his homework. Great chapter!! Oh, I meant to comment on this: Wasn't Kishimoto the one who gave him his coat in the last chapter? Why is Yurri being so nasty to him? I was meaning to comment on that when I read how nasty Yurri was to Kishimoto.
person kylee123
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The chapter turned out great. We learnt a lot about Inoue in this chapter. I am kind of curious about Inoue's brother and the people he left behind in Japan. It was so sweet of Kuro to stay up all night with Inoue. Having Inoue and Kuro in the same bed? Such torture for me! I was hoping they would wake up embracing or touching. I am so eager for one of them to reach out and touch the other. Anyway thanks for the great story. I am enjoying it so much.
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hah! Kowai Kao Kuro means scary face Kuro? That is awesome! And even funnier that it’s alliteration. You have no idea how freaked out I get when I read another chapter of a story I like. I squeak and flail and giggle and grin and get immensely happy and stuffs. Sometimes, my family gives me strange looks too, and I just try to be quiet and keep reading. I really really love this story! I know I repeat myself a lot in reviews, but it’s cause I’m so happy and interested and, and addicted! This fic is amazing; I adore your characters!

I love some of the things/lines that authors come up with. They can be soooo funny! I find myself really liking Kishimoto. His and Yuuri’s relationship is so cool. The way they fight, but don’t really dislike each other, and are really friends. It’s silly and cute/funny. And I love how caring Kuro is. He isn’t obvious, like how tilting his head is him smiling. The way he looks after Yuuri is adorable! You’re super welcome for each and every word! You deserve it all!

Wow, chocolate? Unusual, but I can see Yuuri disliking something as sweet and delicious as chocolate xD I love his and Kishimoto’s friendship! Aww. Pwsh, their silly fist fight. Boys. Jfnekjfnekjf Yuuri and Kuro are so cute together! When Kuro is helping him with his homework and such. Adorable! Gwah!

Don’t worry about keeping to a schedule. It’s a good idea (I should keep to one *embarrassedcough* ) but you don’t have to be spot on all the time. We understand, and will read whatever you give us, whenever!

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