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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I came by to say that I miss Yuuri and Kuro. Have you been chasing Yuuri down? Did he freak out and run away? Hope you are doing okay and that we will hear from you soon.
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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow you're story is a real treasure.I fall for red heads too.
And brown eyes.
And brown eyes.
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
She's gone! Yes! - evil snicker. I am glad that Chantal sees things as they truly are. I know I should be mad at Yuuri and not her but seeing her stealing Yuuri away made my heart hurt. She probably made Kuro's heart hurt too. Sometimes I get the feeling that this story is going to break my heart into a million pieces. I am worried about Kuro. I feel like there is a big secret that he has not shared with Yuuri as yet. I loved this chapter and I am glad they got even closer together. I am glad that Yuuri talked to Gianni about Tooru as well. I hope Gianni and Ohba will find each other eventually. This whole chapter was very well written. It really gave my emotions a ride. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's so amazing that Chantal could tell immediately how Yuuri fells about Kuro! Just from them singing and playing the song together. She's pretty bright. I wonder if the other people noticed anything? So of course Yuuri'g gonna deny everything and be even more pissy than usual, I bet! He'll also probably try to ignore Kuro as much as he can b/c he's in denial! Great chapter, looking forward to the next!
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was even better than the last chapter! I definitely like Yuuri MUCH better when he's not lashing out at people! I liked the feelings Yuuri and Kuro were feeling when Yuuri sang to him at night and also the next day. So....why did Kuro chann have to run to the bathroom right after the song?????? Hmmmmmmmm, I wonder..... And even Kishomoto noticed how Yuuri is now w/Kuro. Is he gonna get jealous? Maybe they ALL need to sort this out together? Hahah, me and my bad mind! lol Yeah, Yuuri is gonna freak when or IF he remembers what happened in the bathroom! Can't wait to see what he does! Oh, btw, I meant to ask you, but I didn't want to offend you, if you ever want anyone to look over the chapter before you post it, let me know. You know, for misspellings, etc. Sometimes two eyes are better than one. I'm editing a story for another author, so I thought I'd throw that out there. If you're interested, email me at LisaT25@msn.com
Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter! Oh, and I keep forgetting to ask you: what is really wrong physically w/Kuro? Why won't anyone show his chest? Why can't he ever sleep? I don't remember if his health problems were ever answered when he went to the hospital that time for tests....
Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter! Oh, and I keep forgetting to ask you: what is really wrong physically w/Kuro? Why won't anyone show his chest? Why can't he ever sleep? I don't remember if his health problems were ever answered when he went to the hospital that time for tests....
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh happiness! This chapter was the best! You were right. I was totally surprised. I couldn't imagine that Kuro would be brave enough to attack Yuuri. I was already floating on a cloud of happiness over their 3:00 am phone serenade. So cute! That scene reminded me of why I love shounen ai so much. Those blushing scenes of first love. I was thinking "It can't get any better than this." I guess I was wrong. I can't wait for them to see each other again. Keep up the good writing and and thanks for such a lovely chapter.
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thanks for the new chapter. It was pretty funny. I worry about Yuuri and how much trouble he can get into. He really does get cranky when he is hungry - probably especially when serving food to other people. I liked the throwing up while having sex with Chantal part ( I am bad I know) I also thought it was ironic that he confessed all his problems to the music teacher - kind of showing us that Yuuri is still a little boy on the inside. Very cute. Great chapter. I am looking forward to the next one.
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, you are TOO funny! Yep, as I was reading this, I was yelling at the computer screen to Yurri, what the fuck are you doing????????? Do you have to get into a fight w/EVERYONE?????? And even that "sexy beast" Kishimoto (I screwed up the spelling, didn't I?). I don't know, I feel some sexual tension between those two, I mean Yurri never thinks of Kuro as a "sexy beast"! Hahahah But, I must admit, I almsot fell off my chair when Yurri APOLOGIZED!!!!!! I never expected that! Boy, maybe he really is growing up, either that or his mind was sated b/c he finally got some food. Poor thing. Anyway, GREAT chapter, looking forward to the next one!
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I spelled Yuuri's name wrong in my review! I'm running and hiding b/c I know he's gonna kick my ass! Sorry Yuuri, sorry,it won't happen again!
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July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed chapter 11 (one of the better ones IMO)! While you didn't get much chance to advance the story along, you put a LOT more depth with the characters and made me appreciate Yuuri that much more. You also hinted at some of the abuse he might have faced while in Japan. Keep up the great work!!