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huhu,
I like your story,it`s awesome that the chapters are so long and it`s very well written...:)
I`m really curious about Sen`s past and the death of his parents.Was it really Cougar?So far
he seems to be not to dangerous.I`d love to read more about him...
I like Nicol a lot,he seems to have a good heart.
I would love to read more,please continue soon,Jules

I must say, even though you wrote Sen as innocent and fairly clueless, it was refreshing to see that he topped Nicol instead of the predictable overly submissive thing people tend to do with goody-two-shoes boys. What's also rather fascinating is that we're already seeing that these characters are flawed. Sen, the 'hero' of the story, has murderous motives and he's tinkering on the edges of whoring himself.

For some reason, I just can't bring myself to trust Nicol yet. This seems like the kind of story where you shouldn't trust anyone.

Something must be wrong with me, because I just love how hopeless that city is. It's a wreck. Post-apocalyptic almost. It's an intriguing setting with gritty characters. Cutting through bone with a chainsaw... that guy stole my fetish. Ha. I'm just kidding. Not really.

Great chapter again !! I like how Sen is not entirely "nice".He has this fire in him and I love his "message" to Cougar...

Nicely written. Can't wait for the next update. ;)

Wow! this story is fantastic! I love how slowly but surely Sen is learning the ways of the underworld. Please update soon!

Very interesting and different new story. The city they are in certainly is scary. Sen is this intriguing combination of confident male and shy virgin. Very nice. Looking forward to reading more.

im loving this ur a great wrier cant wait to see more hopefully soon

It's dark ! I'm afraid for Sen !
What's going to happened to him ?

Great start !!! Interesting plot so far and I like your three characters.Hope there will be more soon !

Oh,I'm intrigued. What an interesting and dark setting we've got here so far. Sen really is a naive boy; trusting a prostitute in a place like this. I rather like Nicol for some reason; sleazy and manipulative. I'm looking forward to seeing more. I want to see how the characters and plot progress.