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by holywyvern

schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting story. It's been 5 months since the last update, so I hope you haven't forgotten this story, have you? *wibbles*
person Sie
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
poor Nicol and Sen ;___;
person jeazard
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a LOVELY story, good to her you'll still be updating it. I hope. ^^x
This "end" is way to sad to BE the end.

~jea
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whew! *wipes sweat from brow* I thought there for a minute that you were gonna end the book that way and I was like 'Huh?! Wait a minute!'. Okay, now that that's out of the way, I knew it! I knew Sen couldn't kill Cougar! He's too innocent to shoot someone down in cold blood! Nicol is just pitiful by the end of the chapter. Not only does he lose his Cougar but he forces Sen to leave for his own good. It's just so sad to see him all alone again. Sooo, is Alec coming back too? And where was Sen when he was missing those three days? Questions abound in my mind. =^.^=
person tdorian
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it worthed the wait, this chapter is really good.I like that they care about each other more than ever.I'm worried about Sen because Alec seems to be really mean.He is not as tough as Nicol...
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! Looking forward to an update.
person Rosei
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for writing this!
Really interesting dynamic between the
characters and I love the setting!!
Very dangerous and dark! Lots of possibilities
for trouble! Alec is very menacing and sexy
(and so are the Sen and Nicol at times, which is
a surprise!)

Thanks,
R
person tdorian
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hum..both whores to the two top dogs.There is competition in the air isn't it ? Great chapter.
person kylee123
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Countdown to disaster! Alex makes everything exrra dangerous. I am sure Nicol is going to freak when he finds out what Sen is up to. i can see that Nicol is torn because he definitely cares about Sen but he is also tempted by Cougar's offer. Very interesting. Looking forward to more.
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I'm likin this so far! Sen and Nicol are just too adorable in a sleazy, pay me for sex, then we'll gang up on the bad guy kind of way.Can't wait to find out if Sen will meet Cougar soon since he's already sent him a kiss (of death?).