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review for chap 32

HEEEEEEEEEEYY!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!! WHAT IN THE WORLD IS GOING ON?!?!??! CHRIS IS GONNA GET KIDNAPPED!!! OMG OMG OMG OMG!! SOMEBODY SAVE HIM1!!!! SAVE HIM!!! OMG!1111! HE'S PREGNANT FOR GAWDS SAKE!1!!!!!!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *PANICS*


- nekoii

review chap 33


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Devin got kidnapped? O_Q *tears*

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo~!!!! *wails* Why why why why why!?!?!??! *sobs* OMG!!!
I'm gald, chris is okay. but... WHY!!! DEVIN!!! but... I'm glad it's not chris. I have more confidence in Devin protecting himself. Devin's stronger. Devin can do it. Devin can fight for himself. DEVIN YOU GO DUDE! YOU GO KICK THE ASS OF YOUR KIDNAPPER AND RUN HOME OK!!!! Come on Devin!!! You can do it!!!

GOOO DEVIN!!!! GO!!!

- nekoii

review for chap 34

when i read what that BASTARD zachary said to adam...
I WANTED TO JUMP INTO MY LAPTOP AND KILL HIM!

When Gabiel came into the picture...
I became a goldfish. OMG! Chris's BIRTHFATHER IS THERE! RIGHT THERE!
and to think, he is a SLAVE to ashcroft... THAT BASTART ASHCROFT does that to his own CONSORT?!

(btw, im hooking my beta into this story. I'm FORCING her to read it XD )

and then. the last part...
somehow, I'm relieved that you chose to leave out the details as to how ashcroft-bastard had his way with devin...
but well... Devin's strong. =D
yeaaah man. I knew Devin would handle this well.
COME ON DEVIN! YOU GO! FIGHT FIGHT! RAWR!!!! *is insane already*


- nekoii

review for chap 35

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somehow.... someday....

i hope kiran will manage to purify victor's soul...

that andrew will remmember his love for james, and would help purity his incarnate's soul...

but like Devin said. Ashcroft has gone insane. *sighs* but this won't do.
Killing him alone won't do. Reincarnated, his soul may remain black. You got to PURIFY THE SOUL damn it. GAaaaaaaaaaahhh~~~ but well. if things went that easy, then the story would'nt be how you moulded it to be eh? ;)

but still.... I feel for Kiran... this is worse than not meeting your mate and reincarnating over and over.


Yay you~ ^___^



and anyway.
back to our favourite pregnant high-consort. Chris.
He is sooooooooooo having twins I'm telling you. Jiro and Taro.

and I'd like to say.
I KNEW IT!
I knew that Chris's baby would be for Augustus. I mean, the poor dude reincarnated dunno how many times with no mate. It was about time.
and the muddled signature. well we'll ask taro about that eh?
I'm rather sure Jiro's the one meant for Augustus. And Jiro is the elder twin. I'm rather sure about that. Pardon my rude confidence *looks down shamefully*

okay.

i'll catch up another time. will be busy for awhile. *sobs*


hope you are well ^_^

- nekoii

OMG, I’m so glad Dev has truly come around and realized the mess he’s made! I just love Jay to death sometimes, like when he softens after seeing Dev cry, it’s so sweet! Still, sometimes I still want to smack him when he’s being so stubborn…Dev too for that matter, lol!
Also, what exactly did Adam think Dev was thinking of doing when he asked that Kiran and Sarah do the introductions? I just found his reaction a bit odd (just a bit tho, b/c I suppose Adam has a right to believe his son is up to something, all things considered)
OMG, I’m glad Dev and Jay are finally facing their problems but it’s just so hard to watch w/o crying and feeling bad, lol!
I d very much admire Dev’s new determination to set things right and fight for the protection of the kingdom and his family, I just wish Jay would realize that this is what he’s trying to do!
And, it is really rather painful to see Jay in such a state of depression; I kind of keep forgetting about his depression b/c of Dev’s much more overly-dramatic displays, lol, and then when we are reminded of it, it just seems almost like a slap in the face (I mean in the sense of how shockingly depressing it is)! Ergh, I just want them to kiss and make up already, LOL!
You know, after all the angst going on, Chris’ language is rather refreshing (usually it’s just annoying, but in a humorous way, LOL!) and I daresay cute! Although when I got to the section break I was like “WTF!? NOOO!! I need to know what’s going to happen w/ Dev and Jay!” (even though last time I said I was hoping for the Chris- Kiran subplot to pick up, lol, which I am and then when I got into that plot I was upset by ANOTHER plot shift, LOL!)
Also, did Dev JUST realize that he needed to face his own problems? I like how he tells Jay that he’s tired of being coddled by everyone and that it makes him unable to face his problems but even by himself he hasn’t been doing such (as per Chris’ statement, although he doesn’t have any room to talk, w/ his running away from Kiran all the time, lol!) until he was actually talking w/ Jay
Oh, and new characters??? I too was like W(ho)TF is Christian? And now it seems like him and Devin Baxter are who Dev and Chris are named after…I loved Chris’s exclamation of his supposed inbreedingness, LOL!
Also, I actually have a rather hard time picturing Kiran for some reason…(I loved how Chris called him a cute bunny and then he immediately is all matron-patron, lol) is he smaller than Chris? I always thought Chris was rather small. Also, I always pictured him as sort of ragged and abused-looking from his time w/ the Omega, but maybe he’s gotten better? Also, I have a hard time figuring him out b/c he really seems different now than he did when we first met him and sometimes he does seem rather intrusive into his son’s life w/o consulting him…also, why does Kiran frown when Chris is being “willful” but smiles at his colorful language later? Still, I am glad that Chris and Kiran are finally sort-of-connecting!
OMG I can’t wait until Chris has his babies! I bet they’ll just be adorable and then we’ll meet the elusive Jiro, too! And then I can’t stop thinking about Dev and Jay’s son and what fiendishly clever plot you have worked up concerning him!
Jeez, Jay’s POV is perhaps the most depressing of anyone’s now…he’s just so defeated-sounding and paranoid. And, he too his running from his problems (really, do meek lambs generally hide in their bathrooms, LOL! I loved that image for some reason)!
Just so you know I was bawling by the end! OMG I just want them to reconcile and just listening to their constant barrages of “I’m not worthy enough” or “I’ll never trust you” etc. just makes it almost unbearably tragic at the moment, which of course just sets me off w/ tears of sadness and hope at the same time (I know it’d gonna end happily, but I don’t KNOW that, lol!)
Oh, and I do so very much wonder what Auroran porn looks like, LOL! I can’t remember if we’ve seen it before in the story or not…I’ve been thinking it probably looks like Victorian-era porn (drawn of course, ‘cause I doesn’t sound like they have cameras in Aurora), but w/ much hotter guys who don’t have those atrocious lion’s-mane beards or curly mustaches, -shivers-, LOL!
Anyway, LOVED IT!
Please ma’am, may I have some more? (uses own puppy-eyes!)

review for chap 36

I GOT IT! the two fish in the pond/stream thing, those are symbols that represent Chris's pregnancy!
It's made rather more apparent, since on a the few occasions that Taro appears to talk to his dad, and when he dissapears, the other fish would then appear. So yea. Those two fishes are Jiro and Taro! ne ne? ne? ^___^
So cool~ wah wah~

and OMG YAY!
OMG!
CHRIS KNOWS WHERE DEVIN IS!!! GO SEND THE RESCUE TEAM NOW!!! ASAP! GO GO GO!!!
ANDOMGDEVINISPREGNANTOMGWHATSUCKYTIMMING!!!!

and i need to go rush off now. >_< chao!

- nekoii