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review for chap 37

O_O
they took that long!!! to find devin!!! i was hoping they would be faster! even after chris provided the information, it too 3 days and still!!!
and that's driving devin to do crazy things! Crazy but necessary things... shit man....
DEvin's crazy. CRAZY man... this is no way i thought of Devin. I thought him to be stronger than that, but he's losing his mind completely! Going so far as to do that to Zachary (i mean yea, that slut deserved it, but to personally torture him is another story)

And then. i have a feeling that, Devin's mark is fading because, he's slipping over. His soul is darkening. COME ON DEVIN.!
Kiran could do it! Kiran remained pure! why not you too???
Devin!!! Come on man... argh!
AND WHAT IS JAYDEN UP TO! why no news from him for so damn long damn IT!
Graaaaaaaaaaaahh!!!


- nekoii

chapter 38

I knew it! the fading mark was because devin's soul was becomming darker. oh no oh no oh no!
The baby will not be safe! Will the baby turn dark too? OH NO! OMG NO!
and can they hurry up with the search!

but after the turn of events... im beginning to dread the moment when Jayden finds Devin... What if.... I don't know. What if Jayden finds Devin while devin is in the middle of 'willingly bedding' ahscroft. GRAH! omg! no!
Where is Kiran! somebody please rescue him too!!! Kiran what are you up to? Secretly helping out in the shadows? please please please tell me you are safe. and under no suspicions. and able t escape is neccessary.

I'm so lost into your story at this point. I'm actuallly dreaming up possible scenarios. Like what would happen in the future. Dreaming up scenarios even before i read what actuall really happends. Like,,,
What would happen when Devin is found. What would happen to Ashcroft, would Kiran be able to ssave him. I'm dreaming and hoping Kiran saves his dark soul at the very end, so he at least reincarnates as a pure soul again.
(Which makes me thing, when Andrew reincarnated as Victor Ashcroft, was the baby evil to begin with. oh god. what lunaty)

But so far... so far... it looks like DEvin has not totally lost it...
but. BUT!
ashcroft said it was 12.30...
and Jayden said the attack will start after midnight...

And DEvin just started going down on ashcroft....
and fucking hells. i pray not that they be found while in that position!
PLEASE GOD NO!!!
you cannot be so cruel can you???
omg!!! OHMYGOD!!!!


- nekoii

review for chap 39

again your attention to detail.
about the infiltration.
(but at the back of my mind. im still bothered about the timming. jayden is out there ready to infiltrate. ashcroft is in there getting sucked on. this is fan-fucking-tastis.
and your knowledge on those guns. gawds have you handled those personally of what?


then we come back to the main scene of the crime.
the EXACT thing that i was dreading occured EXACTLY how i had NOT wanted it to happen.
this is just soooo fucking great! OMGSHITSHITHITSTHECEILINGFAN!

And then.... the whole world spun. in a kaleidoscope of colours power and emotion.
Ashcroft is dead?
but........... no... then the cycle would just repeat itself... no... Kiran has to do something about this! He's the only one that can break this cycle! Surely, something ANYTHING can be done to purify a tainted soul?!!!

*sighs*
Back to matters at hand. We shall see how Devin recovers.

- nekoii

*sighs*

I'm depressed...

Why Devin why? Why did you sink into the darkness so easily??????????????? OMG WHY!!!???

Somehow, I change my mind. Somehow, I suddenly feel like Chris would handle this better.
*sobs*

Devin... devin.......... *shakes devin* wwwhhyyy???? omg devin!!!!

review for chap 40

....

this huge. dark. aura. has

engulfed the entire story...

Chris. Devins best friend best bro.

Can't stand being even close to him.
I hope Chris gives birth quickly, then he can help sooth Devin's aura... or something like that...

And Jayden... Jayden jayden...
*sighs*

aaaaaaahhh I dont know already...
I don't even have any more mood to think and imagine about what will happen next...
I dont have any more energy to rant a review like i used to...


*sighs*
I think you killed me with this story. my heart huts...

- nekoii

review chap 41

*phew* i feel a little bit better . a little bit less depressed than i way.

good ole smut, compliments of Adam and Chris really does hit the spot. And damn interesting those two XD
What a way, a position, suitable for pregnant mages. XD
and honestly. is it safe? Jiro and Taro are probably frowning in Chris's belly thinking "Daddy you're jiggling too much" LOLx XD

*sighs*

ah well... at least there is HOPE for Devin... CHRIS TO THE RESCUE!!!
btw, what is Kiran's specific ability?


- nekoii

review chap 42

*sighs*
i don't like what Devin has become...
but well... you cannot argue with the fact that people will undoubtly change when certain circumstances have been forced upon them...
it just leave you, the observer, with this sad empty feeling ... as you can only stand there and watch the person who was once so bright and pure, degrade into something unsightly. its ugly to watch. but you can't avert your gaze and as the sadness overwhelms you, you wonder why your eyes wont shut and block the pain away...

anyway.
i quote you again "The ‘gentler nature’ that his father was referring to had disappeared the day he’d taken a whip to Zachary and relished the experience"
... *groan* oh god. I knew that specific incident would mean a turbulant mess in the future...

... DEvin's lost it... That rant he had... he ranted... ranted about being beaten. being raped. he cared not about the modesty of his body no more.
he actuall carelessly spoke of his eveil intentions. of sincerely wanting to cold blooded murder zachary over and over again...
He's lost it man... Devin's lost it...
I hope his father, Adam, will continue giving him those sob renching talks. I'd rather Devin continue feeling utterly lost, than lunatic and demonic.

Then the shit was stired up again.

All of a sudden Devin is all passionate and supportive. All about protecting Aurora. All righteous and stuff...

Then he goes emo again...

*sighs* What am I to do about this boy?

Then at the last sentence
"The only question left in Devin’s mind was how to make them suffer as much as possible before crushing them and how he could best position himself to be the one to do it."

My mind is blowed to smittherines once again.
Devin was all righteous earlier, just so he could have his revenge?
I feel sick again....

God save him!

-nekoii