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is it four already? *blinks blinks*

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oops. a few extras. was having too much fun doing this (at 4AM in the morning.) shits! 4am?! I HAS idiotparttimejob TOMORROOOWWW?

good night! sleep tight! I hope someone bites! X3

Well, I just caught up and I'm happier now that Devin realizes what an ass he'd turned into, and also that Adam isn't being such a jerk anymore. Looking forward to the birth of the twins and seeing Chris by a first-time(hence, panicky :P) parent.

Wow I finally found the time to catch up on this story and whew alot has happened.Gotta say though I am so disappointed in Jayden it breaks my heart. I mean he has the nerve to state that poor confused and hurt Devin is manipulating everything when Jayden has been manipulating Devin from the start by either forcing the issues like trying to make him stay in Aurora an the joining and stalking by not telling Devin the whole truth of anything and keeping things from him not to mention all the manipulation with the assembly and counsels ect. talk about the kettle calling the pot black. I mean he really has a lot of nerve not to mention lying to Devin in the first place. I mean he's the one who said that no matter what Devin did he would never let him go or stop loving him well with the way he's treating poor, abused Devin now I would never believe him again and I would sure as hell never trust him let alone go back to him it's not like he was the one abused on so many levels, physically, mentally, emotionally. He really is a close minded ass hole. To think that Devin would just get well overnight or after some sex (please give me a break) typical of his personality type. He's the type that's gimmee gimmee gimmee and I'll give you what I think you need but not necessarily what you really need. But then the Aurorans are all kind of spoiled that way could kind of guess with the stupid submission training and calling them Master "rolls eyes" thing. But still I love this story I am totally into it. I really hope Jayden opens his eyes and sees what he's doing before he loses the best thing that ever happened to him mainly Devin. Well gotta go and I can't wait for the next update and I really can't wait to see how Chris and his new daddy work out. And of course when Chris has his little rugrats looking forward to that to.

review for Chap 44

A Jayden centered chapter.
Aaron seems like a very very awe inspiring person. Being loved my all of Aurora and all...
For him to die, was most definately a blow to the country too, not only the king and Jayden.

But still for such a frightening poisoning to occur, and from one that was not Ashcroft. That would mean that, there are more strong individuals whithin Omega that leave alot to be fear about...

*sighs* this is in no way good.

I hope Devin recoveres. Fast. And... I don't know...

These are dark times.... dark times indeed...

- nekoii

review for chap 45

when you said "please don't kill me!!!"
I got scared shitless. O_O

The the whole turmoil hit... Everything is going haywire... it's like what Devin was thinking is all comming true. the longer he stays, the worse it will be for Jayden, and everyone else... it's as thou, this mess has all occured due to him.

Then Devin and Adam's strained relationship... Ad Devin going ahead, covering his wrongs, and pushing buttons to get people to fall for his idea's and goals... That's just sooo... sneaky... so sly... so... Omega-like...

Thank the heavens that Chris's gift is working well on Devin... I'm so glad for that...

But next. the atomic bomb. Divorce... freaking hell Divorce... WHAT?!
Now where i say. WHERE is the hope that Devin and Jayden can be together again with at least some semblace...
Jayden's gone! How can Devin do this to him?!?!?!

All Jayden has left now is Augustus, and once Taro is born, even Augustus will be to preoccupied!
He is King... but he has no one... Not even Adam anymore... Tsk... How can this be? Oh god... it's terrible!!!



- nekoii

review for chap 46...

So Adam and Jayden talks.
at least now, there is some semblance of peace between the two... At least now Jayden is not so alone...
Argh this is so painful...

And now they are in Adam's home... I don't feel that it is all too safe. But then, truly, no where is safe...

The Devin goes and faints from emotional strain. For Jayden to go all the way over to Adam's house, and halt a meeting... That's something really. Thou it just makes the fact that they moved away, all the more troublesome and dangerous... Like, what if Jayden couldn't make it back in time?...

And for Jayden to treat Devin like 'an incubator for the Auroran heir'... should I laugh? or scoff? or groan?

Then... then comes Master Alan's astounding knowledge on the psychological aspect... That man sure knows his patients through and through!

Take a long hard look at yourself Devin. That's right...
I never realised all the things that have been going on within Devin's mind, till Master Alan outright spoke those words...

But it's true. it was nagging at me, that NO ONE had asked Devin, what exactly happened over at Ashcroft's while Devin was held prisoner there.
For one to be held prisoner there, for 3 weeks. 21 whole days! then no one asks what happens?
At least, Jayden should have pressured Devin, asking for EVERY SINGLE detail!
jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiimajikayo....

But it's a good thing, at the end of this chapter. Things are looking up. Psychiatric treatment for Devin will start soon. Devin's realised that his 'locking up his true emotions' would only do harm for the baby, so Devin will have to stop too...

I half expected Devin himself, or SOMEONE to suggest that Devin be locked up in the tower... I think that'd be good eh?
*headwall* argh who knows what now. i dont know anything. I dont know anything anymore... It's like you're not leaving us any more clues... Or either, my brain's to bashed up to see them...

*groans* im brain dead...

- nekoii

review for chap 47


Harsh Compromise
*sighs* Man, having a simple talk between each other is so much more harder than usual eh...
You know at first, that undershirt-tunic thing Jayden was wearing, made me suspect that one of his 'lovers' left marks on his body or something, that he had to hide... D=
But i guess it was just training gear or smthing. like sports attier...

But yeah...
at least they've come to a compromise...
at least...

As for poor delusional Jayden lying to himself...
He'll hold out... till the cold dark full truth of the events that occured while Devin was in the compound comes out to light... Then we'll see if Jayden still will be delusional and lying to himself, eh...

The whole truth will be comming out... yeah?
IT BETTER HAD!!


Comming to Chris and Kiran's conversation... XD
Gwahahahahha!!! What vast differences these two. And to think they are birthfather and son XD
I look forward to their encounters and conversations together. ^____^
Also. I look forward to the day Chris tells Adam the whole truth about his past *glares at Chris* How long are you gonna keep that bottled huh Chris?! Spill it out damnit! Spill it out like how you're gonna 'spit out' those babies!
Spit out. hah. omg hahahha. Spitting out babies... as if man...


Hah~~~ okay...



- nekoii