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Hello, I stumbled across this story a little while ago and don't know how I could have missed it before. It is written beautifully and I couldn't stop myself from reading more! The characters are portrayed really well and you get to know and understand them all.

I can't wait to see what will happen to Chris' gift once he has his babies and how Devin and Jayden work through the Omega issue. I also eagerly await to see how Kiran and Chris, relationship develops.

There are so many things that are still to come and I'm sure that it will all be just as superb as it has been so far. I look forward to your future chapters and will be sure to review! Keep up the great work!

I hate to say this because I really don't want you to stop just yet, but you really could stop now...over 400,000 riviting words, wow! I mean we know that Jayden & Devin are going to make it work. It definately wont be easy and they'll have quite a few bumps in the road but we know your characters so well that we know that they'll make it through; especially now that Devin's stoped running away...again. Yes, Jayden needs to stop deluding himself but we can also trust Devin & Adam (and well the rest of the gang) to make that happen.

I so can't wait for the babies to come, oh, and Devin's grandparents *snickers* that could prove quite interesting.

Hi! I stumbled across your story this weekend and haven't been able to stop since - so I caught up all the way to Ch48. It's gripping.

I can't wait to see Chris as a nervous parent. And if he and his birthdaddy will ever have a real relationship (i think Chris is my favourite character, btw). I have a suspicion that, even though Adam isn't a noob to parenting, he'll be just as nervous and over excited as Chris will be.

I really hope Devin and King JJ make it work. They HAVE to, right? I bet there will be some delicious (and angsty) fireworks between these two for a long time. Jayden needs to step up to the plate and be a King, now. Sometimes I feel he's letting people get away with things that they shouldn't. He should command more respect and his softly softly approach hasn't been working. It makes me feel like he has no backbone and I know that's not true. Can't wait to see him get all Kingly just like I'm sure he will eventually.

Anyway, please update soon. Seriously. I need it.

Oh, and please add me to the update notification list!

yay! I finally managed to read the new chapter, god it felt like an eternity till I got the time to do so. between taking care of my cat (had surgery last week and has been a total baby about it *sigh*), helping my new baby rabbit to adjust to a foreigh environment full of cats (that was fun) and finally deciding to put a stop to the mess my house has become since my mom went to Luxembourg (mommy dearest I miss u! *sniff sniff*) I was force to just let my pc alone and staying pretty with this chapter's page open and teasing me from affar.... aaaaaaaaaaaarrrgh so frustrating!
but alas I finally read it. and I'm on cloud nine! XD
finally things are getting on track, Devin and Jayden finally decided to make amends to each other and fix their relationship and I'm thrilled! and it's very good to know you finally managed to get them to smex each other up! lol
update soon!

I liked this chapter, and I forgive you for it being late and put out at a bad time, because I've had Final Fantasy 13 to tide me over. That and I'm in New Zealand so for me it's good. I loved the interaction between Devin and Jayden in this chapter. And I loved the fact that Jayden hid his clock in the nightstand. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love your story.

Devin got his chance! Wohoo!
Rock bottom? :o well, these sites tend to become almost deserted around January to May. It's the same for my own story on fictionpress. I think I've had 4 views, I usually get at least ten times more. Perhaps it is because most people on these sites are students. I'm just lucky to be so care-free and has such relaxed teachers. I can leave in assignments months late and still get the highest grade. It's wonderful. Actually, I had one of my end exams yesterday. So it wouldn't surprise me if that is the reason.
Now I have to run, before the bus leaves without me xD

review for chap 48. ( I think i don't need to do this phrase anymore eh? XD)

pesterme. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!! *glomps you back* ^_____^
Phew~! I'm just super super relieved you didn't mind my spammage-of-reviews~~~ XD Phew, if you don't mind my rambling, I definitely don't mind your's, because I ramble alot too (is anyone listening? XD )


everything (for devin and jayden) is going forward... towards the better... but in slow, very slow EXCRUCIATING steps...
but at least... at least.... at least during this GODBLESSTHIS moment... THINGS ARE FINALLY LOOKING UP!!!

Things are, for real (I hope this is for real, because if you're pulling our leg, and later you're gonna drop some ANGST TRAUMA bomb on us just as things are looking up... I think I will... DIE...)
anyway, things are finally, for real, looking up. Devin is waking up. The darkness is leaving him, like PROPERLY LEAVING HIM.
be GONE you accursed darkness...

and I am still waiting. I am STILL WAITING. for the episode, i mean, chapter. whereby EVERYTHING IS REVEALED!!! (are you sick of me saying this yet?) I really hope, someway, somehow, EVERYTHING GETS REVEALED!!! Like some spell. or some memory thingy. or some, soul binding. or that spiritual journey something. SOMEhow SOMeway! at least. AT LEAST... let JAYDEN. know EVERYTHING! Every single ikky crucial DETAIL that occured during while in the compound. (who am I to demand this? someone shoot me! *pulls on bullet proof suit*

But yea... that's just my wishful thinking... I just hope such a thing happens...
anyway, arn't Jiro and Taro due... I'm so looking forward to how you're gonna describe the first ever TWINS in aurora history... ^____^ *excited excited*
talking about Chris... i also hope, with equal intensity as earlier, THAT HIS SECRETS GET REVEALED TOO!!! at least, to Adam...

*sighs* I think I'm done ranting now. Did I loose you somewhere there *points to the second sentence* XDDDD hehehhe~

okay. catch ya later ^_^
catch ya on the next chapter. or maybe on LJ *A* yay you has LJ!!! I has one tooo!!! XD

- nekoii

ps: ashcroft bastard spawn of demon, in which poor man's "womb" has he implanted himself in?

and since you do not mind my spammage (if your review reply is any indicator)

I shall leave you 4 more reviews. that i rightfully owe you. ^___^ enjoy the review hits!

*drops one review coin for pesterme*

*drops one review coin for pesterme*

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