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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Homigosh, I can't believe I haven't reviews this story yet. Or, at least, I don't think I have. Anyways, this story is -awesome!- I really really love it. It's very interesting, and new stuff keeps happening that makes you all curious and wondering what is going to happen, or how Devin is going to react.
I love all your characters! 'Specially Devin and Chris, and now that he has been introduced, Jayden. He sounds dreamy/delicious and super nice. I like Devin's reactions. When things happen to characters, against their will, whether it be in their best interest or not, I don't think they should be instantly forgiving or accepting. So I think it's cool that Devin voices his disagreement with all that's going on, and his whole life being tipped upside down. Poor him, being knocked out by Jayden. I bet they are going to force the mating thingy upon him, which is unfair .__.
But anyways, I love Jayden, and I think the relationship between him and Devin is going to be very interesting! I loooove this story, LOVE it. I am super excited to see what happens next!
I love all your characters! 'Specially Devin and Chris, and now that he has been introduced, Jayden. He sounds dreamy/delicious and super nice. I like Devin's reactions. When things happen to characters, against their will, whether it be in their best interest or not, I don't think they should be instantly forgiving or accepting. So I think it's cool that Devin voices his disagreement with all that's going on, and his whole life being tipped upside down. Poor him, being knocked out by Jayden. I bet they are going to force the mating thingy upon him, which is unfair .__.
But anyways, I love Jayden, and I think the relationship between him and Devin is going to be very interesting! I loooove this story, LOVE it. I am super excited to see what happens next!
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May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow great story and I love it!! please please update soon!!!!
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May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Juhuu,
I really like your story so far:)
Can`t wait for the moment, when Devin meets his mate Jayden for the first time...hihi,
he his so pissed/irritated about the whole situation,that should be funny.I wonder what kind of man his
consort will be,thats so exiting...Buy the way,is Devin a virgin?It`s sounds so...
I also love Chris and Adam very much and the sex was hot as hell!
Please update soon,Jules
I really like your story so far:)
Can`t wait for the moment, when Devin meets his mate Jayden for the first time...hihi,
he his so pissed/irritated about the whole situation,that should be funny.I wonder what kind of man his
consort will be,thats so exiting...Buy the way,is Devin a virgin?It`s sounds so...
I also love Chris and Adam very much and the sex was hot as hell!
Please update soon,Jules
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May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very nice cant wait 2 c more
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha Ha. Adam knows just how to push Chris's buttons. I think he will be very happy to find the Master that he has been subconsciously searching for. Understandably Devin will need more time to deal with all this. I can hardly imagine the pain of growing up as an orphan and then discovering that your real father was out there all along.
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot ! Hot !
Can't wait for the meeting between Devin and his soul mate...
Can't wait for the meeting between Devin and his soul mate...
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very hot sexy smex scene. Chris is the best. He had a feast. I always enjoy stories where the uke is just as eager as the seme. I was sorry for Adam when I realized that he was the birth mother for Devin. I can imagine how hard it was for him to give up his baby.
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work here! Now for the son to be convinced!!!
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chris is the reincarnated mate of Adam? Didn't see that coming! How WILL Adam convince his son Devin that Aurora exists and not a elaborate lie? Guess we'll have to wait for chapter 6,neh?