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May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very good
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May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I had to laugh when Devin got overwhelmed ram away from the assembly. Poor booy. He and Jayden are very cute together. He already had Jayden blushing. Chris is so sweet. It is hilarious how he speaks his mind in every situation.
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I knew you where to stop here!!! Grrr... loll next tomorrow?!
Really like Devin, he's not a whinny-cry-baby-with-no-backbone.... It's not because that you're going to be the submissive (or bottom, uke, wathever) in the story that you can have a strong personnality. And you give him willpower! ... for now... don't disappoint me, pleaseeee!!!!!
I understand the need to compromise in a couple (i'm married, i know this loll) but not crashing.
I totally dissagre with *Surrealtraversity*, i think Devin has the right to react like this, if it was me instead, my reaction would be worse... i have a very bad temper nah!
The guy just pop-up, out of nowhere, tell you that all your live is a lie, you have to marry a guy when you're not gay, kidnap you for a other world and in the end, force mate you to the guy mentioned earlier!!!
Some heads will fall!!!
It's not because your 'father' explain the situation to you that this makes it more acceptable. What are you supposed to do, just accept and shut your mouth (good thing to shorten a story loll)???
I love that you update fast.
Thank to create this story.
Gwen
p.s. until last i was just able to say yes-no-thank-you in english...so... excuse my faults!
Really like Devin, he's not a whinny-cry-baby-with-no-backbone.... It's not because that you're going to be the submissive (or bottom, uke, wathever) in the story that you can have a strong personnality. And you give him willpower! ... for now... don't disappoint me, pleaseeee!!!!!
I understand the need to compromise in a couple (i'm married, i know this loll) but not crashing.
I totally dissagre with *Surrealtraversity*, i think Devin has the right to react like this, if it was me instead, my reaction would be worse... i have a very bad temper nah!
The guy just pop-up, out of nowhere, tell you that all your live is a lie, you have to marry a guy when you're not gay, kidnap you for a other world and in the end, force mate you to the guy mentioned earlier!!!
Some heads will fall!!!
It's not because your 'father' explain the situation to you that this makes it more acceptable. What are you supposed to do, just accept and shut your mouth (good thing to shorten a story loll)???
I love that you update fast.
Thank to create this story.
Gwen
p.s. until last i was just able to say yes-no-thank-you in english...so... excuse my faults!
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cant wait 4 more
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaaa! Poor Devin 3’: He must be so furious right now, having that forced on him.
And I completely agree with Devin. Adam could have been lying from all he knew. Chris’s reply made me very angry, because I didn’t think Devin acted badly in any way. It was all just very natural. Then they began fighting like little children and I though, “Oh come on you guy. Stop embarrassing yourselves!” Adam seemed to have agreed with me though. I wonder if and how long it will take for Devin to forgive him. Adam is so scruuuued.
And a side note. My 'key-word' today is 'frothier country'... How weird isn't that... Sometimes it's David 10,000$, then we had poor James 3$. People just aren’t valued the same no more... But I'm blabbering. Sorry, sorry.
And I completely agree with Devin. Adam could have been lying from all he knew. Chris’s reply made me very angry, because I didn’t think Devin acted badly in any way. It was all just very natural. Then they began fighting like little children and I though, “Oh come on you guy. Stop embarrassing yourselves!” Adam seemed to have agreed with me though. I wonder if and how long it will take for Devin to forgive him. Adam is so scruuuued.
And a side note. My 'key-word' today is 'frothier country'... How weird isn't that... Sometimes it's David 10,000$, then we had poor James 3$. People just aren’t valued the same no more... But I'm blabbering. Sorry, sorry.
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT. I am so loving this story....I think you should have Devin try to escape every now and then just to see what people's reactions would be. lol. But thats just my opinion. Update as soon as you can cause this story is awesome. Ja Mata Misawo
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm definitely enjoying this story. The beginning dragged a bit, but it has really picked up in the last couple of chapters. I'm looking forward to seeing the emotional fallout of Jayden's actions at the end of the chapter!
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's going to be hell !! ^^
Especially when Devin's going to understand that there is no return !!!
Great chapter
Especially when Devin's going to understand that there is no return !!!
Great chapter
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm ur number 1 fan D:
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. It rocks. Can't wait for next chapter.