rate_review Reviews

The last two chapters were great. I am sorryy poor Sarah had to get caught up in the whole mess. I hope they did not throw her off the dock. Devin has some formidable powers. Now the bad guys will think twice before messing with him. It sounds like he might be a little more welcoming to Jayden. We will have to wait and see.

Awesome chapter!

I really had a bad friday, just wanted to take a bath and cuddle my son but nooo!!! You make a new chappy!! Yep! You save my day, thank!
I'm glad that you can understand my humour, I fear that sometimes I can't write what I want to express (how could you learn english when your english teacher spoke french during the course?! explain this?!)
You too you want to be stalked by Jayden?! Hey it's my idea, you can't copy lolllll!!! Ok you're the author but it's not a reason!

I'm not sure that Sarah's really a good friend in this chapter. Devin explained his situation to Sarah, but she just see that Jayden's beautiful and rich!! He...hello!!! They are a lot of creapy people beautiful and rich, the fact that the guy gives you money may be part of a Machiavellian plan. Take easy chéri!! But Devin know him a little more and he should stop being hard-headed.

Sarah wasn't a good friend today but it's not a reason to do this to her! Were you angry, have you had, you too, a bad day when you write this chapter?

The return of the evil-bitch-ugly-mother! I hate Janice!!!
The first appareance of Victor-the-pervert-megalomaniac! I hate Victor!!!
Who is the traitor? I hate traitor!!!
Who sold Devin to the bad guy? I hate bad guy!!!
Devin?!?!?! Wow, when you're angry, you're really angry! Recall me to always be by your side ok. I LOVE Devin!!!

In this bad situation something good came out... Devin realizes that he, in fact, have somme feeling of King Jayden. Experience almost death puts some things into perspective.
Mister Jayden, explains me, what do you do while Devin was acting as his own hero? Hum?? I'm waiting...

My husband just told me to tell you he likes your story ...whenever I finish a new chapter, I am happier and me happy make my husband happy (ok he say more sex for him mouhahah!)

Gwen

I really like this chapter. In fact you didn't write a chapter that I didn't like!

The little modification in the previous chapter make the story more credible in my humble opinion (key word humble here lolll). Jayden seems less stalkish....... Jayden in stalkish mood? is it really a bad think?! not sure anymore lolll!!!! not if he stalk me nah!!!!

Chris grew up in my heart each time he appear. He evolves in a good direction in this chapter. I have a little problem to really appreciate Adam, don't know why, but you can't like every perso in a story.

Poor Devin, your creator (poke pesterme2) don't make it easy for you! Just wait the next chappy, i'm sure she's gonna be evil on you!!! But we, the reader will probably love this lol! I agree with *Surrealtraversity*, Devin he's very afraid of being hurt but you can't resist true love...and the writer mouhahaha!!!

Going to take pills, I have to much fun now!!!

Gwen

I likey. I have very much enjoyed your take on the different views of submission and how you are allowing Chris that personality without the cruelty which is usually inflicted on such characters. Plus, the relationship between both couples is very cute and I'm glad that Dev hasn't completely given in yet. I hate it when authors have 3 or 4 good chapters of tension and then resolve all the problems in 500 words. Ugh. But I'm really liking Dev and how Jayden is earning his respect (and starting to respect him). Carry on - I am very excited for an update.

I'm really excited now! The cliff hanger is killer, but I love that Devin is finally warming up to Jayden. Hopefully, this won't ruin all of the progress they've made, since Devin will have to come back to Aurora. Thanks for updating so fast. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I think it would be best to summarize the events and continue with the storyline. Great story and keep up with the good work. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I say the next chapter be about Chris and Adam, with Chris verbally chewing off his mate's ear!!! Then some sex please!!!

Lovely Chapter. I think Jayden made the best decision to give Devin some space. Sarah is great. I would like the next chapter to be devoted to Chris and Adam. They need some detailed quality time together. Lots of details LOL.

The story is great I read all the chapters tonight and I am completely hooked. Please continue with he Devin/Jayden storyline! I can't wait for when they realize that they both are in love with each other.