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May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to see how well the story keeps developing. Lots of yummy stuff in the middle of it too. ;) Now I'm really wondering who Dev was in his previous life, everyone but him know. And readers. :< Update soon, ill be looking forward to it!
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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit more concious now than I was when I reviewed Jason and You Makes Two. Hurray!
This chapter gave me the impression that it's slowing down a little, it's more peaceful in the castle, love is in the air and so on. I like it.
Kiran is just so... awesome. Yes, awesome. He's just... ok, this will just continue in many 'awesome's, but you get my point. And poor Chris! The babies are not very nice to him. I visualized the kick to the groin actually :)
But now I'm off to school, then scouts... my birthday is in 2 weeks! Yay!
This chapter gave me the impression that it's slowing down a little, it's more peaceful in the castle, love is in the air and so on. I like it.
Kiran is just so... awesome. Yes, awesome. He's just... ok, this will just continue in many 'awesome's, but you get my point. And poor Chris! The babies are not very nice to him. I visualized the kick to the groin actually :)
But now I'm off to school, then scouts... my birthday is in 2 weeks! Yay!
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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay,I am in love with this chapter. Although I have to say I think maybe Kiran's punishment for Devin was mean. -Pets-
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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yeah, another great chapter, hope you update soon.
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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 49. Heeheeheehee~ "reaching for her hourly feel of the Buddha belly" i couldn't stop laughing!
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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nice im glad the story is taking a much happier turn =]
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April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:D I loved this!! Unfortunately my glasses give me more head aches now they have changed the prescripition so thats why i havnt gotten round to reading it till now. Ive give up with my glasses and just gonna get my eyes used to reading without em.
This chappie was lovely and i loved the sweet little domestic ending. I love you xxxx
This chappie was lovely and i loved the sweet little domestic ending. I love you xxxx
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PESTERMEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! *glomps* at long last! I have a smile on my face from reading your update!!!
for so so sooo long, the mood was so bleak and dark and gloomy and angsty. And gawd! can you write angst and heart-wrenching love or what! You can write awesome angst and pain, and awesome what ever else is it you write~ *hands it to you* good job good job. Now, I've gotta go call back my friend who ran away from your story because she thought she was gonna drown in angst. XD
So anyway. Despite Devin being in trouble with Sarah. All's well that ends well. Do I see the ending coming soon? I don't think so. Somehow, I don't think anything will end until Ashcroft's soul is purified. There has just got to be some way! (or is it, There just has got to be some way?... huh. english. I should go learn Kyashin instead.)
And then there's Kiran... *sighs* we still don't know for sure, the full extent of torture he went through... Just thinking about a pregnant Kiran being there under Ashcroft's hand during such a vulnerable time of his life... that alone is... welll.... heart wrenching. What he shot out at Chris is true... and Chris is just being "I'm all grown up and about to have my own kid, I don't want some long-lost daddy popping in on me now" so more or less, he's being selfish.
But well. Chris has his own issues to deal with... issues that I'm sure would be easier and quickly solved if he just opened that pandora's box he has hidden in that dark corner and TELL ADAM ABOUT THAT BAST-bleeep- ex-DOM OF HIS!
*sighs*
I still haven't given up my idea of 'Devin should tell Jayden second by second, the events which befell him when he was whithin the Ashcroft domain' ... Yeah. But that's my idea y'know.
I wonder who Jiro's mate is. We've all met Taro in the dream-scape. But we've yet to meet Jiro. I wonder if they twins will be close much. they are, after all, twins.
Then. Sarah and her 'I cannot have babies'... Who destroyed her womb, when and why?! That thought about females, and period did cross my mind before when it was mentioned that 'Aurora' is a male-only populated place (excluding the earth foreigners). So like... where do the girls get their tampons? Do they like, have to go all the way to earth just to buy those things.... XDDD hilarious!
Ho hum~~~ okay... So far. My brain is bleak. I have nothing to 'suspect' nor any secrets to 'guess out'... It's a point whereby I'm just waiting for what will happen next. I hope no nasty surprise will sudden pop its ugly head in on this story.
I know for sure that some ugly head if gonna pop in 'Flamming', I suspect bad luck is about to befall on Daemien at least one last time before all the crap ends. And you know, the worst is always the last... *Shrugs* Good luck Dae! I think you're gonna need it!
So yeah. I'll see ya next time pesterme (it feels so odd calling you pesterme. I'll go look-see around your LJ, maybe you have a proper normal human-like name revealed there...)
Chao~
- nekoii ^^
for so so sooo long, the mood was so bleak and dark and gloomy and angsty. And gawd! can you write angst and heart-wrenching love or what! You can write awesome angst and pain, and awesome what ever else is it you write~ *hands it to you* good job good job. Now, I've gotta go call back my friend who ran away from your story because she thought she was gonna drown in angst. XD
So anyway. Despite Devin being in trouble with Sarah. All's well that ends well. Do I see the ending coming soon? I don't think so. Somehow, I don't think anything will end until Ashcroft's soul is purified. There has just got to be some way! (or is it, There just has got to be some way?... huh. english. I should go learn Kyashin instead.)
And then there's Kiran... *sighs* we still don't know for sure, the full extent of torture he went through... Just thinking about a pregnant Kiran being there under Ashcroft's hand during such a vulnerable time of his life... that alone is... welll.... heart wrenching. What he shot out at Chris is true... and Chris is just being "I'm all grown up and about to have my own kid, I don't want some long-lost daddy popping in on me now" so more or less, he's being selfish.
But well. Chris has his own issues to deal with... issues that I'm sure would be easier and quickly solved if he just opened that pandora's box he has hidden in that dark corner and TELL ADAM ABOUT THAT BAST-bleeep- ex-DOM OF HIS!
*sighs*
I still haven't given up my idea of 'Devin should tell Jayden second by second, the events which befell him when he was whithin the Ashcroft domain' ... Yeah. But that's my idea y'know.
I wonder who Jiro's mate is. We've all met Taro in the dream-scape. But we've yet to meet Jiro. I wonder if they twins will be close much. they are, after all, twins.
Then. Sarah and her 'I cannot have babies'... Who destroyed her womb, when and why?! That thought about females, and period did cross my mind before when it was mentioned that 'Aurora' is a male-only populated place (excluding the earth foreigners). So like... where do the girls get their tampons? Do they like, have to go all the way to earth just to buy those things.... XDDD hilarious!
Ho hum~~~ okay... So far. My brain is bleak. I have nothing to 'suspect' nor any secrets to 'guess out'... It's a point whereby I'm just waiting for what will happen next. I hope no nasty surprise will sudden pop its ugly head in on this story.
I know for sure that some ugly head if gonna pop in 'Flamming', I suspect bad luck is about to befall on Daemien at least one last time before all the crap ends. And you know, the worst is always the last... *Shrugs* Good luck Dae! I think you're gonna need it!
So yeah. I'll see ya next time pesterme (it feels so odd calling you pesterme. I'll go look-see around your LJ, maybe you have a proper normal human-like name revealed there...)
Chao~
- nekoii ^^
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April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awwwww
it's so good to see that the gold old days are finally coming back!
and I can't wait to see Devin and Sarah's upcoming conversation, oh man will she rip him a new one. she's certainly gonna try! lol
update soon woman ;)
it's so good to see that the gold old days are finally coming back!
and I can't wait to see Devin and Sarah's upcoming conversation, oh man will she rip him a new one. she's certainly gonna try! lol
update soon woman ;)
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April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have only one thing to say about this chapter. I love it, it made me grin.